#5//The Ex's At War//Ch17 on Pg 126 n Link for Thread 6 on Pg 1

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BlueJayFire

@BlueJayFire

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Posted: 9 years ago

#671

Awesome composition..Loved Manik and Manini bond. Think Manik was just talking and expressing that he is good to meet anyone, no plans etc. But Nandu being herself :) opens up like a volcano...So with no right..she is trying to grab all the attention...

Manik surely knows how to manage Nandu. One possessive person he is..

Loved your portrayal of Manini :) she is the super kid of the super parents..LOL..

Keep it coming Sumana..You are amazing and yes, you work is beyond amazing..

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sathvika.p

@sathvika.p

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#672

WOWWW...One more amazing chapter...Evry time like each and every time u suprise me more with your writing skills gal...its just awesome...as i always say u make us feel the feelings of the characters...Incredible it was...Waiting for more and more...I wish this story never ends...;)👏

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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#673

Superb update
Nandu's cold behaviour
She's possessive and jealous just lyk manik...
He was angry bt still he cares so much
Uff the intense kiss
Thnkz 4 the pm

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piyu008

@piyu008

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#674

uff man what a update..

m still under effect..

loved this side of Manik..bechara doesn't even know what is wrong..

but not so bechara bcoz I still don't like the fact that he lets that rewa close to him...huh

he deserves this🥱

nandu be awesome.. kya awesome arguments kri he bandi ne..

haye you wrote it so well..

wait was well deserved ..

thank you so mush..

ahh.. fell in love wid the chapter ..

update soonish😃

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eoincash

@eoincash

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Posted: 9 years ago

#675

awesome update👏👏

Loved manini a lot

manan were awesome

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maniamunia

@maniamunia

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#676

Tell me how do you manage to think of these moments?? How ?? n the dialogues by Manik! uff. so perfect. I liked the pool scene, the fight, n the last emotional moments. Couples crying at the same time together in between fights is always the most cute moment . n u did justice to it. But y Manik is being such a dumb yaar!! How can he not understand regarding nandu's mental state for feeling left out from his life!! Dumbo Manik!

Edited by maniamunia - 9 years ago

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Rumanan

@Rumanan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#677

superb it was. i loved it so so so much. Fantastic work done by you. it was amazing. just the way i wanted nandu to react. When Manik left the room saying FINE I was like this is not Manik. And yeah he returned back and showed the real Manik. I loved it so much. Manini ka toh baat hi alag hai kya bolu mei iss prani ke baare mei. She is so adorable. In all the whole Malhotra Family is one in a million. Noone can compete with them. And the credit goes to obviously you. Thank you so much for such a beautiful story. Continue Soon. Thank you :)

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navla

@navla

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#678

amazing update...
nandini upset n angry on manik ...
manik dont hv any idea abt her cold behaviour...
love manini n manik scene...
nandini cant see even small cut on manik but still mad on him...
pool party wow...
manik jealous tht nandini is talkg to mitin...
pool party n manini is enjoyg...she put all cream on rose head...hahhahh...
manik hell angry on nandini for not listeng ...
manik is askg him d reason...n she shouted on him...
manik is telling her tht he is havg all right on her...
hope manik understand her cold behaviour...
keep smiling..
take cr...