#5//The Ex's At War//Ch17 on Pg 126 n Link for Thread 6 on Pg 1

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syami

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Posted: 9 years ago

#541

aww...manini is d cutest of all the baby
and as ususal u jotted in amazing way
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sujal1fan

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Posted: 9 years ago

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shruthi.kumar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#543

I loved it...
i love dis manik...he is unpredictable...
but y is manik so cool about dat meeting wid rewa's father?
Take care
shruthi

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noor.21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#544

Loved how unreasonable Nandu is😃

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janusingh21

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Posted: 9 years ago

#545

Hi ,nice story😊i like d fighting nandini ... But I am not able 2 understand d reason of der separation.. If u could clear some points it will b great😊😊😊..nlike about der 2 child I didn't understand DAT.. If u give some closure , DAT would b great ...

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Sohinitalukdar

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Posted: 9 years ago

#546

Amazinggg. Was waiting for such dhasu update.

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ankita_t

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Posted: 9 years ago

#547

That was awesome as always... too good...absolute finesse...

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eppie99

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Posted: 9 years ago

#548

It was jst amazing
Srsly luvd it
Bt it was really very very emotional
I was literally crying while reading it
Continue soin

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gauriangel

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Posted: 9 years ago

#549

Sumanaaa... I just love you girl...

Kya update tha...last part I read almost 4 times...The spark these two have...apne gusse mei b...They just amaze us...very well written...

U know it takes me longer to read ur updates every time...because I just wait after reading few lines to visualise the whole thing...its amazing...

Manik's clueless Ness , nandu ka gussa , his helplessness seeing her this angry, he giving in to her, letting her have her way, and she wanting him to fight it out with her...bahut likha hai yaar...

Now u know why I bug u so much fr updates. ..because this is wat we get in return...

Can't wait for the next weekend to come...