#5//The Ex's At War//Ch17 on Pg 126 n Link for Thread 6 on Pg 1 - Page 53

Awesome update. loved it to core. manan's random moments were beautifully penned. teasing manik and annoyed nandini were amazing. nandini's diet and her expression after being caught for eating ice cream with confession was funny and well penned. Manini is the cutest. Her words were mindblowing and beautifully penned.totally an mindblowing update with Manan's happy family moments. Continue soon.love to read more.

i am just in love with ur writing skill

O my God its soo adorable.. yeah ohk a random excerpt, i never thought it would be this cute. But by synchronizing it with the impulsives, "the ice cream date", it is beautiful dear. As i always say, keep writing more n more. Ure thoughts are born to wander. *Smiles*

Congratulations for new thread...loved updates...haha nandu ate ice cream...loved it...manani was chooo cute...waiting for ice cream date...take care..

Aww so cute
Thank u for this chotu update
Ice cream date with bonus so lovely
Nandini trying new things to gain manik attention and manik oh so sexy always

Aww sweet adorable and beautiful update

How can manik not notice any change in his Nandu besides no matter how busy he is he always knows something is different about her as he loves her unconditionally madly and crazily but his decisions are impulsive

Continue soon and thanks for update

Waiting for more

Yooo sumaannaaa diii!!!!!!
Mein apko itne tym se keh rahi thi ki complete laro complete karo meko padhne hai story!!!
Huh!! Chalo mein padhle jahan se mein chodi thi...

So so conment here u go!!!!

"I dont need to dream to kiss you!!!" Manik said righteously !!! Damn damn damn!!! I am clean bowled!!
Clean bowled se yaad aya... Manik malhotra has already clean bowled all the ladies on the cruze...

Harshad and manik dont get along each other!!! Damn!!! Pata nhi i am sense sth comming out of... M toh uske liye u have to wait... Urgghhh i hate the word!!!

Manini thrwing stems of roses on rewa... Apni ma ka badla ka rahi hai ladhki... And she even rubbed maniks cheek to wipp away rewas kiss!!!

Urghhh!!! This jerk!!! Again behind rewa... Srsly dancing with her...

About the surprise by manik and manini!!!!! Titanic ka scene... Rofl rofl rofl... U can imagine how hard i laughed... Srsly! Ayesh calls u treasure hunt i am gonna call u titanic pose...

Big shock!! Manik wants her to kiss him... Lolololololol... Can things get any better... Ma kasam!! Belive me di... I imagined me and karan over here!!!! Lolololol...

Chalo kiss done... And two down!!! Heheehee!!

I aweddd at maniks confession!!! That was supper cute!!!

But god knows when he is gonna even clear the confusion!!!!

Chalo bye!!! Congo for next thread!!!
I will read the next thread later!!!

Byeee!!!
Hafte wali writer!!!

Dat was too cute...super adorable..both mother daughter are too cute...loved it...continue soon...eagerly waiting for the update..!;)

awesome update...love these random moments

Yesterday I didn't bug u fr update..kyuki fri ko hi random moment diya tha..