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Part 26

"Navya suno...Kahan jaa rahi ho..." Cabir ran behind Navya because she was walking fast not letting Cabir talk to her.
"Kya baat hai... Kyun hamare peeche aa rahe hai... Jaaiye na ladki doondiye apni shaadi ke liye..." Navya was teasingly him hiding her smile.
"Doond tou le hai... Ab aage ka program fix Karna hai... Issi liye tou tumhare peeche aa raha hoon... " Cabir reply her coolly.
" acha chalo mere saath..." He said again and holding her hand he dragged her out of the hall.
"Kahan le jaa rahe ho Hume..." Navya asked.
"Chalo tou sahi..." Cabir with out leaving her hand stopped in front of a lady who is wearing a saari with sleeveless blouse and open hair with a decant makeup. And a big bindi on her forehead.
"Cabir where were you... Mujhe yahan wait karwa ke where did you went..." The lady was ranting out her frustration on him.
"Mom mom relax... Inn se miliye..." He pointing at Navya.
"This is Navya... Jiska baare mein I told you... " Navya hearing the word mom straighten herself and bring a smile on her lips.
"Ohh tou yeh hai Navya... Jiski wajah se tu Roz mera Demaag kharab kar raha hai..." Cabir's mom took a thorough look at Navya and said.
"Hello Aunty..." Navya said very nervously.
"Hello beta... How are you... " she said touching her cheek with her palm.
"I'm good..." Navya was still nervous.
"Not bad... Waise Tumhe Mera yeh comedian beta kaise pasand aa Gaya..." She asked very seriously.
"Jii..." Navya got startled by her question.
"Kuch Nahi... Waise Cabir Kahan se mil gayi yeh tujhe... "She asked to Cabir . She was in a mood to bother both of them.
"Mom aap bhi... You know na you are making us both nervous..." Cabir told her. Navya was also fidgeting with her fingers with nervousness.
"Arey Arey don't be nervous... I was joking around... Waise Cabir mujhe Teri pasand... Pasand aa gayi..." She blinked her eyes with a smile.
"Thank you thank you...mom... " Cabir hugged her putting his hands around her neck.
"Acha acha... Ab mujhe iske parents se tou introduced karwa..." She said with a wide smile seeing her sons happiness.
"Aur tum Aise khade khade Kya dekh rahi ho... Mere gale Nahi lagogi..." She said with a big smile.
Navya hugged her being all red because of the blushing.
"Khush raho..." Cabir's mom caressed her head with an affection.
"Mom aapka ok chahiye tha... Woh mil gaya baki ki baatien baad mein..." Cabir said.
Rishab came out of the hall and said.
"Navya Dii... Nandini Dii... Aapko bula rahi hai... Vidaayi ka time ho Gaya hai..."
"Haan Tum Chalo hum aa rahe hai..." She said.
In the hall Manik and Nandini were getting ready for the vidaayi when Aryaman came in front of both of them.
"Nandini..." He called her.
Nandini looked and was surprised to see him in front of Manik and Manik too look up hearing a new voice.
"Manik... I'm Aryaman.. Nandini's good friend... I know you both have a bad taste about me... But trust me I didn't mean to hurt any of you... It's just that I always thought of Nandini as my very good friend and I will always keep her friendship with me as a sacred thing... I'm leaving tomorrow and I don't know if I will ever come back or not... I just came to attend her wedding... But I guess i should've informed about my arrival before... Anyways before Leaving I would like to congratulate you both on your wedding and the new journey of your life... And I'm sorry for my earlier behavior..." Aryaman said everything in one go.
Nandini and Manik were just listening to him without interrupting him. When he was done than Manik said very casually
"Thank you so much... And have a safe journey..." And he looked at Nandini to see her response.
She looked at Aryaman and said.
"Thank you Aryaman... And remember a little piece of advice from me... If you make new friends don't ditch them... And don't break their trust..." Nandini's mood went off the track after seeing him. Manik hold her hand and squeeze it to calm her down.
Aryaman left from there without any further talk.
Manik thought...' Meri bholi bhali Nandini Ko ghussa bhi Aata hai...' And he raised his eyebrows with a questioning look at her.
"Kya... " she asked looking at him.
"Kuch Nahi.. " he hide his smile and turned his face.
"Nandu beta... Chalo vidaayi ka time hogaya hai..." Shanno Chachi came and inform her.
And the time has come. Nandini's heart having enn number of emotions and getting overwhelmed by the thought of her vidaayi. She knew that the time of vidaayi will come at a certain point but still her eyes got moist.
Manik was observing her every move. He knows that this part of marriage is very delicate for every dulhan every girl when she says bye to all her relatives in her parents house to go and start a new life with her husband her LIFE PARTNER. But still it's going to be heart wrenching for her.
He wants to ease her pain so he held her hand and started walking to the door.
All the members of both the families were gathered together behind her and Manik. Navya came with a tray of phullis(puffed rice) at the side of her. Shanno Chachi said very softly
"Beta Nandu... Isse apne haathon se utha kar peeche phenk de..."
Manik moved aside and let her do what she was told.
Nandini took handful of puffed rice and throw it behind her over her head. She did it three times and that was it for her. She burst into tears.

Yahan aana na dobara
Yeh galiyan yeh chaubara
Yahan aana na dobara

She turned to her father who was standing right behind her and hugged her tight sobbing burying her head in his chest. Tears started flowing from Narendra's eyes too. Her little girl who was his shining star , who he raised being both father and mother , who he taught to take first steps of life , who he taught to be independent and always believe in herself is going to leave him today. He traced his fingers on her back and making her and himself calm down.
"Bas.. Bas.. Mera bacha... Bas... Khushi khushi apne pati ke ghar jaao... May god bless you with lots of happiness and a happy life... With your husband..." He blessed her with lot of blessing and separate himself from her.

Ab hum to bhaye pardesi
Ke tera yahan koi nahi
Ke tera yahan koi nahi
Le ja rang birangi yaadein
Hansne rone ki buniyadein
Ab hum to bhaye pardesi
Ke tera yahan koi nahi
Ke tera yahan koi nahi

She turned to Navya who was standing right beside her holding her shoulders and hugged her and both the sisters cried together. More than sisters they were like best friends who fight and patch up in a matter of minutes , who shared everything with each other is now going to be separated. Navya too is a emotional girl who loves Nandini very much. But she relaxed herself and make her meet Amms and Chachi.
Mere haathon mein bhari bhari choodiyan..
Mujhe bhaa gayi hari hari choodiyan..
Dekh milti hain teri meri choodiyan
Tere jaisi saheli meri choodiyan
Toone peesi woh mehandi rang laayi
Meri gori hatheli rachaayi
Teri aankh kyon laado bhar aayi
Tere ghar bhi bajegi shehnaai
Sawan mein badal se kehna
Pardes mein hain meri behna
Ab hum to bhaye pardesi
Ke tera yahan koi nahi
Ke tera yahan koi nahi

Hugging Amms and Chachi she went to Mahinder chacha and than Rishab and again she ran to her papa and cried vigorously. Her eyes got puffy due to lot of crying.
Kaam aaye mil le gale
Chale hum sasural chale
Tere aangan mein apna
Bas bachpan chhod chale
Kal bhi sooraj niklega
Kal bhi panchhi gaayenge
Sab tujhko dikhaayi denge
Par hum na nazar aayenge
Aanchal mein sanjo lena humko
Sapnon mein bula lena humko
Ab hum to bhaye pardesi
Ke tera yahan koi nahi
Ke tera yahan koi nahi

Narendra handed Nandini's hand in Manik's and Manik side hugged her. Manik was so much overwhelmed seeing her crying but he couldn't do so much to take her out of her emotional state of mind as this is so un describable moment for any girl. He so wants to grab her and take her in his arms and wipe off all her tears and pain.
Mukti and Aliya's eyes got moist too seeing the state of Nandini. They came to her and hugged her.
Nyonika leave early with Dadi and Nani because she has to do the preparations for Nandini's arrival and greh pravesh.
Cabir and Dhruv arranged a black limousine for both Manik and Nandini which was waiting outside and it was decorated with red roses in a very nice and decant way. Abhimanyu and Rishab hold Nandini's arms very gently from both the side and took her to the limo.
While they make her sit in the car Manik took Abhimanyu a little away from the crowd and said.
"Abhi... It gonna be a very emotional night for papa... Coz Nandini will not be there... Can you please take care of him... Make sure he don't get depressed..."
"Don't worry bro... I'm gonna be staying in their house tonight... I'll take care of him...fikar mutt karo..." Abhimanyu tapped his shoulder giving him assurance.
Manik was satisfied and and hopped into the limo.
Nandini was wiping her tears while sniffing her nose. He sat close to her. Feeling him this close she stiffened. He took her left hand in his and entwined his fingers with hers. And with his other hand he start caressing her hand. She felt relaxed. And rest her head on his shoulder. And closed her eyes.
He smiled and the driver took off.
"Are you ok..." Manik asked very softly.
"Hmmm..." She just hmmed.
He didn't asked anything more so that she feels relaxed and calm herself down.
They reached Malhotra Mansion in no time. Everybody were already waiting for them. The limo stopped in front of the entrance.
First Manik stepped out followed by Nandini. They were about to climb the stairs of the entrance.
Mukti came forward and stopped Manik and said
"Bhai... Today Bhabs came for the first time as the daughter in law of the house... You should pick her up and take her inside..."
"Aisi baat hai... Tou yeh lo..." By saying that he lift her up in his arms and climbed the stairs. He went to the door and leave her on the ground.
Nyonika was already present there with the Aarthi thaali.. As soon as they came she did their Aarthi and put the Tikal on both of their foreheads and sprinkle some white stuff and some flower petals.
"Beta Nandini yeh jo kalash hai na... Just hit it very lightly with your right foot so that it falls on the ground..." Nyonika said very politely.
Nandini did as she was told.
"Now put your feet in this tray with red water and walk ahead..." Nyonika guided her what to do.. And she did exactly as she was told.
After she took few steps Nyonika told Mukti and Aliya to take her in the family room.
They took Nandini to the family room. Manik excused himself and went to his room to see the arrangements.
Aliya came to Nandini and said.
"Nandini... Woh actually naa... Because you cried a lot... Your make was all messed up... So shall I fix it for you..."
Nandini smiled and nodded her head in a yes. And she started looking for the person who suppose to be by her side. And got disappointed not finding him anywhere near her.
"Tum jaise dhoond rahi ho na... He went to your room to check the arrangements... Don't worry abhi aa jaayega..." Aliya noticed her uneasiness and said to her.
When Aliya was done Nani and Dadi came and sat on both of her sides.
"Dekh puttar... Tu dil chota mat kar... Ab yehi Tera ghar hai aur hum sab tere apne... Nyonika aur vikram tere maa aur baba... Aur yeh sab tere bhai behen...aur Manik se pehle Main Teri Nani aur lajjoji teri Dadi... Kyun Laajoji..." Nani very lovingly told her holding her chin.
"Aur Nahi tou Kya... Agar mannu tujhe Zara bhi tangg kare tou tu mujhe bata main usse dekh loongi phir..." Dadi to supported her.
They both gave a sweet kis on her forehead.
"Arey wah ab beti aa gayi to apne mannu Ko bhool Gaye aap dono..." Manik who just came after taking out his sherwani he was wearing only his white kurta and pajama saw them and start teasing.
"Haan tou... Ab pehle iski khushi phir Teri khushi..." Nani said very proudly putting a hand on Nandini's shoulder.
"I don't have any problem with that... But you know what my sweethearts... Uski khushi meri khush mein hi tou hai... Kyun Nandini..." By saying that he winked at her.
She smiled and got embarrassed by his boldness in front of both the granny's.
" acha acha chalo bhai ek last rasam karte hai... Finding the ring... Then we'll go to our rooms..." Nyonika said holding a big bowl in her hands.
Manik took the bowl from her hands and put it on the ground.
"Ab yeh kya rasam hai mom..." Manik was getting irritated by all this rituals after she saw Nandini crying.
"Badi mazedaar hoti hai yeh rasam..." Dadi explained him.
" Haan ek ring iss pani mein Dalte hai phir tum dono Ko usse dhoondna hota hai... Jisko bhi ring mile Woh iss shaadi Shuda zindagi mein doosre par haavi hota hai... " Nani continued and explained more..
Cabir Dhruv Mukti Chachi and chacha joined them too in this fun event.
"Tou basically Naniji... Who ever finds the ring will control the other person all the life..." Cabir gets curious.
" sahi samjhe... " Nani said.
Nyonika made both Manik and Nandini sit side by side on the ground on the carpet. And place the bowl which contains white water with rose petals in front of them.
"So shall we start... " Nyonika asked.
Everyone settled themselves around Manik and Nandini. Nyonika showed the ring to them and puts it in the water and mixed it.
" now start..." She said.
"Manik dekh Izzath ka sawaal hai... Tujhe hi doondni Hogi..." Cabir said being nervous.
" no Nandini show him that we are not less... "Aliya boosted Nandini
Manik and Nandini was lost in each other's eyes and smiling widely. Inside the water as no one can see Manik was holding her fingers not letting her find the ring.
She has no choice but to go with the flow because she can't say or do anything at the moment.
Manik was smirking while entwining his fingers and playing with it.
" common guys... Jaldi karo... We are waiting... " Mukti too added.
Both of them came out of the trance. And with in few more minutes both of them lift the ring holding it by opposite parts.
Every one clapped.
" yeh Kya.. Dono Ko saath mein mil gayi..." Dadi said
"" acha hai na lajjoji... Dono bhi ek doosre ke saath khadam se khadam mila kar chalenge... Saari zindagi... Na koi aage na koi peeche... kyun bacho..." Nani said.
Manik smiled and looked at Nandini. She bend her head down being all shy.
"Manik yeh ring Nandini Ko pehna do..." Nyonika told him.
Manik obeyed her and slipped the ring in her finger. When all the other things were done Nyonika told Mukti
"Mukti bete take your Bhabi in her room and after that you guys also get back to sleep ok..."
"Ok mom..." Mukti said and she and Aliya help Nandini to get up and walked her to her room.
As soon as Nandini entered the room she looked around and it looks so different from before. The bed has a white and red bed cover and it was decorated with rose petals in a heart shape and even on the pillows rose petals were designed in heart shape.
There was a tray full of dry fruits and fresh fruits with two glasses of kesar milk on the center piece.
All over the room a shimmering light was spread around through the scented candles of mixed vanilla and lavender smell. The decorations were simple yet elegant.
Mukti leave Nandini and Aliya alone in the room and went outside where Manik was about to entered.
"Bhai. Bhai bhai.ek minute... Aap Aise hi ander Nahi jaa sakte..." She said.
"Ab Kya hai Mukti...now why you are stopping me..." He was very tired.
"You have to give me the fees to paas this door..." Mukti demanded.
"Kyun... Mera room hai... Why do I need to give a fees to enter my room..." He was very irritated.
"Kyun Kya matlab Manik... This is the rule... No fees no entry... " Aliya too came out from the room and joined Mukti.
"Ok baba kitni fees... Hai bolo..." He puts his hands in his pocket.
"No bhai paise Nahi..." Mukti said.
"Phir... Aur Kya chahiye..." He asked surprisingly.
"I want a car for myself..." She said excitingly.
"But tujhe car ki Kya zaroorath hai... Driver ghar par hai... You can go wherever you want whenever you want... " he explained.
"Na bhai... You have to promise that you'll convince mom and dad to buy me a car... Otherwise no entry today..." She said pouting her face.
"Ok ok I promise... Khush..." He smiled. And Mukti smiled back.
" and what about you... " he asked Aliya...
Aliya smiled and shied at the same time...
"Woh you have to talk to your chacha and Chachi about me and Dhruv..." She said bending down.
"Wow girl... Good going..." Mukti teased her.
"I know Dhruv loves me... But he will never ever talk to his parents about our relation so you need to help him do that... " she explained.
Manik laughed.
" ok I'll definitely help him in this matter... Ab tou jaane dou..." He said after all.
They give way to him.. And Manik went inside.he bolted the door and looked around.
He saw Nandini was sitting in the middle of the bed fully covered from head to toe.
It felt a little weird to him. He walked slowly taking baby steps looking around.
He saw something moving behind the curtain of the balcony. He went to the balcony and moved the curtain and saw Nandini standing there hiding herself behind the curtain smiling.
He understood the whole situation. Signing Nandini to keep quiet he walked to the bed and starts talking.
"At last Nandini we are alone... Tum ghungat daal kar kyun bahithi ho... Oh acha mujhe tumhara ghungat lift Karna hoga... Ok... I can do that... " and by going more close to the bed he slowly grabbed the corner of the ghungat... He pulled it with a jerk.
"Cabiiir... Tu Nahi sudhrega... Kabhi Nahi... " he said..
And Cabir started laughing. Nandini too was smiling whole heartedly. And Manik was so relieved seeing her smile.
"Listen... How can I leave such a good opportunity to bother you... Never... And after all I make Nandini my sister... So usko hasana bhi zaroori tha..." Cabir said.
Dhruv too came out from the washroom who was hiding there.
"Dhruv you too... " Manik was shock to see him.
"Cabir ne zabardasti mujhe ghaseeta ismein... I didn't want to be a part of it..." Dhruv clarified himself.
"Chal Dhruv ab chalte hai... Yeh bhi Kya yaad karega... Kaise dilwaale doston se paala pada hai... Chal ise akela chod dete hai... " Cabir said and before going he placed his hand on Nandini's head.
". Khush raho aur hamesha Aise hi hanste Rehna..." He said and without looking back they walked out of the room.
Manik again went and bolted the door and checked the balcony doors and makes sure that all the doors are locked.
He came back to in front of Nandini. Nandini came back to the reality and gets frozen being alone in the room with him. It's not that she wasn't left alone with him before but now the case was different.
Now she is his wife and he is her husband and this is their first night.
Reality hits her and she as bending her head down gazing her lehnga.
Manik went close to her and lift her chin holding with his index finger and thumb.
He looked into her eyes. She was very nervous.
"Khush ho.." He asked her looking deep into her eyes.
"Haan..." She said... " aur aap..." She asked him .
"Bahut... Ki tum andaaza bhi Nahi laga sakti..." Manik replied with all his love.
"I have something for you..." He walked to the nightstand and took out a box. And came back to her.
"Open it..." He said.
She opens the box and got surprised seeing her bracelet which she lost a week back.
"Yeh Aapko Kahan se mila..." She asked.
"Mila Nahi... Mere saath aa Gaya tha... Remember our first mulakhat... Mall mein...jahan par Tumne mujhe dekh bhi Nahi..." He reminds her.
"Yeh mere button mein atakk Gaya tha... Aur tab se mere saath hi hai... " he explained her.
"I thought I lost it... This was my mama's... It seems like... Aapne mujhe meri mama se mila diya... She gets emotional and smashed herself on his big broad chest and placed her head on his heart.
Manikwas taken aback by her suddenness but he too embraced her in his arms.
They stayed like that for few minutes.
"Nandini..." He called her... resting his chin on her head.
"Hmmm..." She said.
"Aise khade khade hi puri raat bitane ka irada hai..." He asked.
She moved her head and looked at him.
"No... "She said smilingly
He without asking her slide his hands on her head and took out the dupatta that was covering her head. And placed it on the sofa near them.
Nandini's breath hitched in her throat as she was not covered at all and was left with only her lehnga and blouse. The blouse which was supported by only two strings at the back.
She bend her head down in embarrassment. He slid his fingers and held the clasp of her necklace and opened it and tugged it off over her head. He looked at her closely. Her eyes her pointy nose her pouty lips.
He pulled her to him and nuzzles his nose in her neck and gave a deep kiss under her ear. He also gave a bite on it. She hissed with the sensation he was giving her.
He opened the clip from her hair and took out all the hair pins which was holding her hair in a bun.
Her hair falls and covers her back. He trace his lips from her ear to her jaw and makes her shiver due to his close proximity. She caught hold of his shirt by his waist. Her heart beat is racing in the jet speed.
He can feel her heart pounding near his chest. He opened the both the earrings and took it off.
She tilted her head to give full access to him and he gave a deep mark on her neck by biting it with pleasure. A gasp came out of her mouth. He then kissed her on that spot to heal the pain.
"I'm sorry... I couldn't control myself any more..." He whispered huskily.
She hugged him holding exploring his back by rubbing all over. The excitement of touching each other and exploring each other was taking them to totally different worlds. Their bodies were pressed closely to each other.
He aggressively hold her waist and pressing it with his fingers. Then he grabbed the clasp,of her kamarband and took of with a jerk. He separated himself from her and watched her whole. She closed her eyes..
"No Nandini don't close your eyes... Look at me..." He demanded
She opened her eyes and looked at the intensity in his eyes. Both of them were looking at each other.
In fact it was the first time that Nandini was looking at him in detail. He was looking handsome in his white kurta and pajama.
She looked at him and thought that he was breathtakingly gorgeous and so damn hot and he is her husband her LIFE PARTNER .
She feels so lucky to have him all for herself.
Manik was so much mesmerized by her beauty and innocence just want to gobble her up. But he wants to go very slow so that she can feel comfortable.
He took a step closer into her and she let out a gasp by his close proximity.
He wrapped an arm around her waist , entangling a hand in her silky soft hair moved more closer that his lips are mere inches away from hers.
Suddenly she couldn't breathe as he traced his lips on her cheeks. And he stopped near the edge of her lips.
Her heartbeat stopped.
"Nandini... " he whispered near her lips in a voice which he couldn't even recognize as his.
And finally he covered her mouth with his.
She was waiting for this and as soon as he placed his lips on hers she parted her lips eagerly to make way for him.
He groaned and drowned himself in the erotic texture of her hot tongue and her smooth and inviting body.
She closed her eyes. And he was busy in tasting her. He makes his grip tighter on her nape and pulled her more into him making his face slanting to have a more comfortable access to her mouth.
She was shivering by his boldness and cluched his shirt in a tight grip.
Manik was sucking the life out of her lips nibbling at it.
They both were out of breath and was in need of air but still not ready to leave each other.
Her bones are melting inside her body and to keep herself balanced she was tightening her grip on his collar.
Manik left her lips and lift her in his arms. He walked close to The bed and make her sit on it. He too sat beside her.
He cupped her face in his palms and met her gaze
"I want you Nandini... Right now..." And he slide his fingers into her hair. He stared down at her and the hunger in his eyes was melting her all the way.
"I'm all yours..." She whispered in his ears. And that was it for him. He slammed his lips once again on hers taking her whole mouth in his. She flung her arms around his neck letting out a gasp of desire. He parted her lips by his tongue and and started stoking hers.
Mean time his fingers are moving from her face to her back and pulling her more closer to him he held the Dori of her blouse and pulled it to make it open and tracing his fingers seductivelly on her back he pulled the other Dori which was the last support to keep the blouse intact.
She hugged him tight feeling that the blouse can fall any time.
He pulled off the blouse from the shoulders exposing her bare milky skin and kissed her hard on it giving marks. He gave small pleasurable bites on her neck tracing down to her shoulders.
She moaned by his tortures and dogged her fingers in his hair.
Manik slowly pushed her back supporting her head and make her lie down on the bed. He took off his kurta and throw it on the side now he is only in his black vest and
He bend down on her.
Lying down beside her looking at her with the support of his elbow. She closed her eyes with shyness.
" Nandini... Meri taraf dekho..." He turned her face towards him.
Opening her eyes She looked at him and she couldn't handle the intensity in his gaze and hide herself in his chest.
"You smell so good... I LOVE YOU NANDINI..." He said embracing her in his arms.
"I LOVE YOU TOO..." She whispered in his chest.
He slowly started stroking her bare back with his fingers moving all over her back and bringing it to the front on her ribs and her stomach.
Her stomach gets tightened and his fingers were giving goosebumps to. her skin. He made her lay down straight on the bed and came on top of her pulling down her top more to expose more of her white peachy skin he start kissing her on her neck her exposed parts of the body. She moaned at the contact which gave him more pleasure.
Then he slide down to her stomach holding her waist by both of his hands and start giving wet kisses on it. She was clutching his hair in his fist not able to control his madness.
"Please..." She let out a gasp with that please.
Manik lift his gaze and looked at her. Moving back very close to her he nuzzles his nose in the crook of her neck marking love bites there.
"Please what..." He whispered in a dangerously seductive tone.
She didn't answer anything.
He made way for his fingers down on her stomach to her clasp of her lehnga...
She held his hand tight on her stomach.
"Nandini... Look at me..." He said.
She looked at her with her half closed and dreamy eyes.
"Do you trust me..." He asked again but this time with lot of love.
She nodded her head in a yes.
"I won't be hard on you... If you feel like than you can stop me any time... Ok..." He very gently removed her hands from her stomach and pinned both of her hands to the bed. He hovered on to her and started his torturing game again by kissing and nibbling all over her body and he leaves her hands.
She again hold his muscular shoulders and digged her finger nails onto him.
He opens and tossed off her clothes on after the other and also stripped off his clothes too.
Covering themselves with the duvet he kissed her again on her mouth.
"Nandini.., please don't be afraid of what I'm gonna do next...," he softly murmurs in the kiss.
She opened her eyes and blinked at him to give her assurance.
He slowly drown himself into her and covered her mouth with his in a passionate kiss to drink her cries.
After she came out of her uneasiness he slowly started what he was suppose to do giving the most amazing pleasure of her lifetime.
Coming down on her he continues till she let out the pleasurable cries only to make her shut down by his full mouth kisses.
Her nails were dug onto his skin as he was giving her the best tortures of her life. Tears started flowing down her eyes. Her body was quivering like a dry leaf under him. That was one hell of a ride... It was a single most erotic moment they'd ever shared. After The most sensational ride of their life Manik collapsed on her and holding her tight. And she marked her his today..She was shivering like crazy.
Mani, pulled himself out from her and took her in his arms and start rubbing her back...
Her breath was still uneven. Her hands are still on his back holing him tight.
"Sshh... It's ok... It's ok... " he was making her comfortable
After a good 10 minutes she became normal..
"Are you ok... Did I hurt you... Manik as concerned.
"No... I... I'm not... Hurt... " she was still shaking.
"Don't let go of me..." She said
"Main yahin hoon... Tum so jaao..." Manik told her
"Don't say sorry to me ever again..." Nandini said in a gently.
"You can do what ever you want... And Im thankful to you for making me experience the most beautiful joy of my life..." Nandini was feeling out of this world.
He hugged her and makes her lie down on his chest and both of them drifted to sleep..



PHEW.


End of part 26

Hello people
I don't believe on what I wrote.
Please lemme know if it is up to the mark
Or was it too much .
I really want to know your feed back.
And while writing the vidaayi part even I got emotional
And my eyes was wet .
So,on the whole how was it
Give your lamba lamba waala comments.
THANK YOU FOR YOUR LOVE AND SUPPORT
And appritiating my work
Do read the story again on wattpad
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res...
Will unress it soon...
Unress...

Yipeee... um first... again...

Update was Emotional... outstanding... Mesmerising ... very beautiful...dear...
Starting cabir ki mom ... poor navya got scared...
But cabir ki mom toh usse tease kr rahi thi... that part was amazing...

Then aryaman wala part... i really like nandini ki advice...

Then vidaai part was heart touching... very emotional... while reading... um also shedding tears ...
Apne mom dad ko chod kr jana bahut difficult hota hai...
Beautifully describe dear... perfect...

When manik take abhi... aur usse nandini ke dad ki care krne ki kehta hai... love it... he was so caring...
The way manik console nandini... too good... amazing...
Then nandini ko utha kr le jana ki rasam... aur grehpravesh ki rasam was superb...

Then dadi jee aur nani jee part was mind blowing... their talks... heart touching... love it...

Then ring finding ceremony... was awesome...

Then door fees... mukti ki car... aur alya...😆 dhurv ke mom dad se baat ... aww kya cute damand ki hai...

Then cabir...pr manik cabir ki trick mei nhi aaya... pr cabir ne nandini ki smile ke liye kra tha... love bro sis bonding...

Manan Part was very romantic... mesmerising...☺️ um blushing like hell...
Very very beautifully describe dear... love it...

Commendable work dear... u nailed it... hats off...
Love each and every bit of it...
Love u ...

Sorry kuch zyada hi likh diya maine... plz bear it...
Thanks for pm...
Keep it up... continue soon...
Keep smiling...
Stay blessed..
Lots of love...


Edited by Cute_Inaya - 9 years ago

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