Manan FF LIFE-PARTNERbyDESTINY #3new thread link pg 1 (note pg 148)

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wonderstar13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Ok I loved what you wrote.😊

I really liked the way you wrote the consummation scene,it was just right,not too much and not too little.

Writing love scenes could be a bit tricky and you nailed it here.

The vidaai scene was emotional and beautifully done without dragging it.

All in all beautiful chapter,i really liked it and keep rocking.

Also update soon please.

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Suprabha

@shaanmaan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Congrats for ur new thread Now about update It was too awsm n beautiful Cabir talk to his mom n she is also Ready for their marriage Viddaii scene was bit emotional N u hv written it amazingly Fun at malhotra mansion amazing Manan love scenes were awsm U hv shown manan consummation Was too good u hv shown it correctly Nd it was upto high level plzzz update soon Next part Waiting eagerly

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Friendsforever9

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Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Vidaayi part was soo emotional

Awesome update dear

Cont soon...

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Apurvi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#34

This was just simply awesome.. Can't wait for the next.. And it wasn't more at all.. just perfect.. The intensity of their love is just perfectly described

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Love_Queen

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Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Awsum mind blowing update

ha vidayee part emotional hota hi afterall its not easy for to leave our parents
jinke saath humne apana pura bachapan gujara unhe chodkar jana
its not easy thing but still its part of our life

kyunki iske sath hamari new life shuru hoti hai wid our new family
aur sath sath hamain do do families ka pyar bhi milta hai

i luved all d rasams

dat door fee wali rasam to mind blowing
mukti wants car n aliya ha ha.. she wants manik to talk about her n dhruv's proposal to his chacha chachi nice ha

nd cabir is too much
thank god manik is smarter dan him nd caught him
usne tou dhruv ko bhi bathroom me chupa diya tha

nd d romance was as usual mind blowing tha
finally dey r one soul now

waiting for d nxt update

Happy Lori nd Happy Makar Sankranti to u too
God bless u

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Sabahfatima14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#36

Iy wqs amazing...i just loved it...so beautifully weittern...omg...it was the best...!!!!loved it to the core...awesome...the vidai part was also good n emotional...the way u described all the rasams...was just amazing...i was feeling like i was watching all of this live in front of me...n this update was very well writtern...the most awaited part..hehehe..loved it...amazing work...

Continue soon...

Eagerly waiting for the next part...

Update soon...

Lots of love😊