MaNan SS -Tedha hai par Mera hai chapter 5-page36 17.06.16 - Page 13

Amazing update..sry i am l8..abt update..mananscenes ws amaxing..varun tryng 2 gt close 2 manik..continue soon...

Originally posted by: aditimanan

Read this ff
Its damn funny
I loved new manan
Matlab manik doing typical housewife work awww he is so swt nd he fought also for nandu
All gay nd lesbians hahaha
Nd that pahri vale baba is so intrtng
Waiting for more fun

Thanks for ur precious comments.

Originally posted by: diyaNarwal

Amazing update

Yaar

Am in love with

Manik language

...hehe ...

Scriously yaar kya bolta ha

...lol...

But why I feel like

Manik is also rich ...

Uski pov main language alag hoti ha ...

Well esa hi ho ...and please

Continue sooonnn

I can't wait ...

Love you

Diya😛

Thanks for ur precious comments.
Iska ans dheere dheere milegi...

Originally posted by: ruchi116

Awesome update loved it waiting for manans romance

Thanks.
Romance hai but kiska wait wait!!!

Part - 3
Writer Pov:
After that EWWW drama I mean coffee shop wala drama manik however managed himself to go to nandini's office but it seems troubles r not left manik yet...poor manik...come with me lets see what's gonna happened next ;)
Manik went to nandini's cabin happily thinking that after that crap incident now finally he is gonna spend some good time with his billo rani...but
Manik open the door saying BILL...OO...(his word was cut by middle seeing none other then...DHRUV ahh another one...holly crap)
Dhruv n nandini was busying in chit chatting then suddenly they hear a voice they both turned to that direction and saw manik standing there...nandini knew that what was he wanted to say but dhruv..ah was totally clueless
Manik immediately gasped his word down and said JAAN...
Nandini understood the situation n try to make it up so she said: Oh jaan tumhe abhi tak wo BILL nehi mila?? and she winked
Manik : Ah wo...ya no I mean mila...I got that bill...n don't worry jaan I paid it already
Nandini: So sweet of u jaan
Dhruv: What bill?
Nandini: Wo kya hai na aj electric bill pay karne ka last day tha or wo bill nehi mil raha tha usi ki baat kar rahe the hum
Manik: Haan haan electric bill...btw hi dhruv...what r u doing here?
Dhruv: Oh hellooww hottie actually I wanna go to shopping...u know what I didn't go to shopping from LAST 2 DAYS can u imagine...42 hours OMG...so that's why I m hare to bring nands with me...but like others she also gave me lame excuses huh...
Manik was like (is he/she whatever is an alien?? or what )
Nandini: Oh babes try to understand na I really have an hard schedule today...5 conference back to back n all r equally important I cant postpone them...I really cant make it today honey I m sorry
Dhruv: No one love me not Alya not u n not even VARUN...everyone Is busy in their own life...nobody has time for me...I knew it I m all alone in this cruel hard world to survive with my make ups n shoppings... (writer pov: such an drama queen/king whatever)
Nandini felt lil bad for him so she looked at manik who was standing in so much confusion he didn't knew whether he should laugh or he should feel petty for him/her whatever...
Nandini: oh don't be sad babes look manik is hare na he will go with u
Manik was like hayyy ye rabba koi to mujhe mar dalo ye sunne se pehle main mar kiu nehi gaya but he didn't say any of those lines he gaps all his saliva n said
Manik: yeah yeah DHRUV VAI SAHAB don't be sad i...I will go with u
Dhruv: huh vai sahib ho tumhara dushman...m I look like a vai sahib I mean seriously??? OMG I think I should also go to a salon n booked an whole body spa appointment...
Dhruv brought out a mirror from his purs (yeah he actually carrying a lady purse :p ) an start looking himself in the mirror after his observing he gave an flying kiss to himself through the mirror n put down the mirror
In this whole scene manik was looking horrified...
Manik pov:
OMG meri billo rani ne mujhe iss koun si namuna k sath fasa dia he...jis tarha ye baat kar raha he mujhe nehi lagta aj raat tak ye mujhe choodne wala/wali ohhh what should I say I even don't know oh god please please save me today...morning pe iska wo tharki boyfriend or ab ye...hay mera to din he kharab he
Nandini: Ok abhi toh lunch time ho gaya to ek kaam karte he hum yaha sath me lunch kar lete he phir tum dono shopping chala jana or main apni meeting me
Manik (ab ja kar kuch acchi baat kahi he meri billo rani ne): Haan it will be perfect. wait main canteen se kuch khane ka le ata hu..
Manik went to canteen n order so many items that he was literally struggling to holding them then suddenly one lady came there n say Let me help u she was none other then our desi chori gaon ki gori NI NI NIYONIKA :p
Manik: Oh ni ni niyonika ji...yeah it will be great help...thanks
Niyo: S..Sir wo actually meri naam ni ni niyonika nehi only niyonika he...
Manik: Ok then thanks only niyonika for ur help :p
Niyo: Sir kya aap bhi...mera nam niyonika mukharji he
Manik: Oh to u r Bangali...shorshe elish,roshogolla,doi fuchka mujhe pata he tumlogo ka ye special he
Niyo: Haww...sir aap bhi Bangali ho?
Manik: R a nehi nehi par mujhe pata he...thodi thodi Bengoli mujhe bhi ata he like ROSHOGOLLA KHABO AMI VALO ACHI
Niyo: Hwww sir aap ko to bohot kuch ata he :o
Manik: No nothing like that...wo to bus aise he pata he thodi bohot...
While niyo n manik was busy in their talk someone went to niyonika n said Dev was looking for her so she need to go
Manik: Its all right tum jaw I'll manage
Niyo: Sorry sir n thank u sir aap se baat kar k bohot accha laga
Manik: Same hare bye

Scene change:
Niyonika was about to go to Dev's desk then suddenly she was bumped on someone...she was about to fall but someone hold her waist she closed her eyes and when she felt someone was holding her she slowly open her eyes n saw an handsome guy who was completely lost in her eyes...

Background music

Dekha jo tujhe yaar dill mein baji guitar
chalka ankho se pyaar dill mein baji guitar
Cha raha kaisa ye nasha re
Aar aha jine ka maza re...
Are re re main to gaya re dil bhi gaya re...
Then suddenly their eye lock got broken by Dev's voice
Dev: CABIR JI r u all right
Yes it was CABIR DHAWAN...:p
Cabir: Ya ya I m fine...r u all right Miss?
Niyonika: Ni..ni niyonika sir...thank u n yes I m all right...thanks again for saving me sir...
Cabir: Pleasure Miss Niyonika...btw ur eyes r so pretty..
Niyonika: (blushed) Thanks sir
Dev: Niyonika tumhare pas jo Mishra's ka file he wo Cabir ji ko dikhao..us me kuch legal issues he jo cabir ji dekhenge..so take him n show him the file
Niyonika: Ok sir...Cabir sir aap mere sath ayiye..
Cabir: Call me Cabir...n ab se to aap k sath he rehne ka irada he..
Niyonika: Aap ne kuch kaha sir I mean cabir ji
Cabir: Nehi kuch nehi chaliye
Scene change
Manik Nandini n Dhruv had their lunch then
Nandini: Toh guys you both go and have fun
Manik: (In mind: pata nehi koun koun sa fun milega aab...god bacha lena please) Yes jaan we will definitely have fun right dhruv vai sahib
Dhruv: Oh how many times I have to say u this don't call me vai sahib...its like gali to me...call me PRETTY as I am ;)
Nandini: Ok ok guys I have to leave now...so bye tum bhi jaw
Manik: So...where are we going vai sahab?
Dhruv: Agar ek aur bar vai bola na to bhul jaunga ki tum meri dost ki pati ho or zor ka pappi le lunga...
Manik: NEHI...no I wont say it again please but don't kiss me I cant take it anymore...
Dhruv: Hahaha...oh u r so funny I toh just kidding tum so sacchi me darne lage... u know na mera bf he so chill
Manik: Thanks...
Then suddenly dhruv's phn start buzzing
Dhruv: Hellooo...sam how r u? Kya? when? r u sure? where?
Then he started crying...manik stoped the car
Manik: Hey whats happened? is there any problem?
Dhruv: Mera ek friend ka call aya abhi abhi usne bola ki aj subhe X mall k pas wali coffee shop pe uss ne mera varunko dekha kisi handsome ladke ko kiss karte huye...aaa
Manik understood every thing it was him so he decided to make it clear to him
Manik: Hey listen...it was not like this I can explain u
Dhruv: But how can u?
Manik: Bcz that boy was me
Dhruv: What?? :o
Manik: Listen it was an accident...then he explain every thing...so this was what happened that time...n if u don't mind can I frankly suggest u something?
Dhruv: Ya
Manik: If u r not happy in an relationship then don't carry it there is definitely someone some where is waiting for u...and u r really pretty so don't cry it doesn't suit u...n see u r make up is spoiling so don't ruin ur make up too ;)
Dhruv: Thank u so much u r such an nice guy
Manik was saying all this as being an gentle man but his fate ahh...Dhruv was started falling for him...
They went to the mall n start shopping...manik was looking into dresses but dhruv was looking at manik..
Tere naam hum ne kiya hai jeevan apna
Ho jeevan apna ara sanam
la la la la la la la

Dhruv imagined he was hugging manik :p

Tere isq ne saathiya tera haal kya kardiya (x2)
Gulshan bhi top ab veerana lagta hai
Har aapna hum ko begana lagta hai
Dhruv was thinking that night when MaNan came to the club holding each other
Hum teri yaadon mein khoye rehte hai
log hume pagal dewaana kehte hai

(Dhruv was thinking that they were walking in a sea beach holding each others hand)

Tere bina tere bina
Tere bina namumkin hai zindagi ka guzara sanam
Ho zindagi ka guzara sanam

(he was dreaming that they were drinking coconut water sharing one )

Lagi chote na lagi chote nalagi chote na
Ishq ka dhaga tote na (x2)
Tere ishq ne sathiyaan tera haal kya kardiya(x2)
Naino se behta ashqo ke dharo mein

(he was remembering that moment when manik was saying stop crying it doesn't suits him)

Humne tujhko dekha chand sitaro mein
Virha ki agni mein pal pal tapti hai
Ab to sasein teri mala japti hai

(he again dreaming that they were in laying under the sky he was in manik's arm n manik was showing him the stars)

Tere liye tere liye
Tere liye is duniya ka har sitam hai gawara sanam
Ho har sitam he gawara sanam

(He remember the moment when manik fought for them to mukti)

Tere naam hum ne kia hei jeevan apna sara sanam
ho jevaan apna sara sanam
Tere naam tere naam tere naam

(n finally he was dreaming that they were in bedroom n manik switched off the light n covered themselves with an blanket)

Manik: Hey hey dhruv where have been u lost...r u done with ur shopping?
Dhruv: Ah oh ha ya...ok its been late na..okay chalo lets go home noow
Then manik drop him his home then suddenly dhurv call him
Dhruv: Hey manik can I hug u please
Manik (lil confused): Oh okay...
then he hugged him but again wo same wala uncomfortable feeling then he immediately broke the hug n saying bye he left

One persone over phone : Hello sir yes aap ne jaisa bola tha waise maine uss manik malhotra ko fallow kia...haan sir aj ka kam ho gaya...ya sir baby ji khush ho jayengi aisa kuch mila...haan sir main abhi ata hu ok sir bye

Bolo bolo kaisi lagi bolo? 😉

Manik & ni ni nyonika ki convo kaise thi?????? 😛 😛 😛

RE Nyonika toh bengali nikli meri & #mayra ki tarah 👍🏼

Nyonika & Cabir k dil main guitar bazza kabhi socha tha yeh humne socha hai 🤣

Dhruv ki imagination kaisi lagi??????

Bechara ek manik or uske piche kitne sare????? 👏 👏

Nandini ki shohag toh khatre pe hai?????
😆

Last pe o person koin tha?????? 😲

Baby ji koin hai??????

Jane k liye bane rahiye sirf yaha or kaha...
Lots of love ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
#mayra & #purna

Ths is jus hilarous!

Dhruv n manik's song was eww!

Whoz ths babyji!?
Nice update!

now druv... on shit druv's imagination was really hilarious... last imagination was damn funny... same bed really if manik didn't break his trance then manik would be pregnant by druv... 😉 lol... can't imagine druv's imagination..

hey r u bangali??? I'm bangali ...
update soon next part... please...

Are ye ho kya raha hai hamare manik k sath mtlb pehle varun phir dhruv god. .
He is only for nandu plz yar
or ye new phone person kon hai. .?

Awesome update.manik's POV was amazing. Nyonika and manik's convo was funny. Cabir and nyonika hmmm romance. Manik consoled dhruv in friendly manner. But dhruv took it wrong.Dhruv's dream romance session was hilarious. Can't stop laughing. Eagerly waiting for next update. Continue soon. Thanks for pm.

😆😆😆😆
Dhruv...hehehe with MANIK...

LOVE YOU DI...😊
Awesome...story...👏

itna ajeeb khayal ate kahase...?😃

But jo v ho up k tarha abhi tak kisine nei socha hoga...I am sure...
OUTSTANDING update...👏