MaNan SS -Tedha hai par Mera hai chapter 5-page36 17.06.16 - Page 3

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Posted: 9 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: epshitatabassum

Nice

Awesome



I don't understand manik language

It's look so complicated


But fab tha



Thanks.
And i talk to Mayra make manik language esay
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Posted: 9 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: archu_asok

Awesome update. Oh its a contract marriage of 6 months. Interesting. Manan's convo was amazing.continue soon.thanks for pm.

Keep writing.
Stay blessed😊


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Posted: 9 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: diyaNarwal

Ausom

Amazing
Superb
Update ...well I must say
Manik language is quite
Interesting ...
But jo bhi ho
I toh love it
Oh hoo toh madam ne shaadi
Hi issiliye ki ...
Koi nii I knew
PYAR TOH HO HI JAYEGA😉
Continue soon
Love you
Diya😛


Thanks for loving it...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

Interesting start...

Manan had a contract marriage...
Nandu beated manik...
Luved it..
Thnx for pm..
Update soon..


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Posted: 9 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: FAHAN10

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<font size="2" face="Courier New, Courier, mono">OHHH NANDINI ne kya dhulai kiya Manik ka...!

</font><font size="2" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Really Interesting story...</font>


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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Part-1B
Next day...
Nandini got ready for her office...then she came down stare for her breakfast
Nandini pov:
Ye itni awaz kaha se aa raha he...shayad kuch gira kitchen me...
N: Trilok kaka...or kitni time lagega aap ko meri breakfast ready karne k liye...
Then suddenly manik came with breakfast tray...
M: Tada...ye lo billo rani tumhari nashta...
N: What the hell...tum kitchen me kya kar rahe the...or ye sab kya he chi...Trilok kaka kaha he...Trilokk kaka...
M: Ore gala mat fado meri masakkali.. meri dil-e-bahar...meri gul-e- gulzar...meri chameli wo bhi mast chikni wali ;)
N: Stop...ye cheep harkat karna bandh kiu nehi karte tum...
M: Kya billo rani tum bhi kitni khadus ho trilok kaka ko main ne chutti pe bhej jia wo nehi he...or ye nashta maine banaya he tumhare liye.. chalo main bata deta hu kya kya he..ye aloo ka paratha with desi ghee, or ye he dahi, ye he karele ki sabji, or agar karela nehi khani to bhindi bhi he or akhir me ye he lassi wo bhi malai mar k or mast cutting chay adrak tulsi wali...mera to abhi se mu me pani aa raha he...jaldi se khate he chalo
N: R u out of ur mind? Tumhe sach me ye lagta he ki main ye sab jangli khana khaugi??? In your dream,mujhe nehi khana. Tum khud jangli ho to ye jangli khana tumhe Mubarak main ja rahi hu
M: Na na na... aisa nehi chalega nashta to tumhe khana padega warna wo dekho darwaza or ye dekho chabi...kuch samajh aya?
N: Tumhe kya laga mere pas extra key nehi he u dumbo...
M: Ohh aise mat dekho dil me gandi gandi khayal a jata he pher baad me mujhe mat bol na ki maine pehle nehi bola... :p
N: U r...such an...chipku
Nandini start walking toward door n tried to unlock the door...manik was seeing all this from dining area with a naughty smirk on his face..Nandini tried a lot but she couldn't make it hapend
N: Whats wrong with this lock...
M: Kya hua billo rani darwaza nehi khula kya?...oh main to batana bhul he gaya ye lock new he iss ka chabi sirf mere pas he...
N: Give me the key...kiu padeshan kar rahe ho mujhe...
M: Padeshan kaha kar raha hu meri malika...tum ye nashta ka lo main khud aapne in lambe lambe hatho se tumhe darwaza khol dungi...pahari wale baba ki kasam...or agar pher bhi tumhe nehi khana to try karlo dekho khol sako to khol lo...
N: Eee ok fine...khati hu
M: Ab kia na meri billo rani wali baat...lo ye paratha or karele ka sabji try karo
N: Chi main ye karela nehi khati...
M: Hay ram karela nehi khati phir bhi itni karbi bate karte ho.mujhe to laga ki ye shayad tumhara maan pasand sabji hoga...
N: Tum apna ye sada hua mu bandh karoge ya main uth jaw?
M: ok ok gussa kiu hote ho karela nehi khani to mat khana ye bhindi lo...
Nandini ate lil making wired faces
Nandini Pov:
Ye kaha phasa dia mujhe god 6 mahino tak isse kaise jhelungi...waise to dikhne me accha he..bas harkatein chichoro wali karta he...agar iss ka behave or language thik kia jaye to asani se isko prince charming bol sakhi...or waise khana bhi accha paka leta he par bohot spicy he...what...nandini tu uss khatmal ko apni brain me ghusne nehi de sakti...what...did I just say KHATMAL!! oh ye ladka meri language bhi kharab kar dega...dur reh use nandu dur reh...
N: Pani pani...bohot spicy he...
M: Ye lo ye lo lassi pe lo...abhi thik he?
N: Hmm thik he...par ye itna mitha kiu he...
M: Kya billo rani tum dikhti ho itni mithi lagta he koi madhu makki ki chatta...
N: What?
M: arey...madhu makkhi ki chatte mein bohot sari shehed rehta he tumhe nehi pata kya...issiliye to bola..
N: Hmmm very funny -_-
M: itni sweet ho par sweet nehi khati...itni karwi batein karte ho par karela nehi khati...itni tikhi churi ho par tikha bhi nehi khate...to pher khate kya ho zara bataoge...
N: Tumhe janne ki koi zarurat nehi he ki main kya khati hu kya nahi...abhi meri nashta ho gaya he to darwaza khol do
M: Zarurat to hain...accha wo baatein hum baad me karenge...abhi chalo office chalet he
N: What office chalet he..office meri he tum kiu jao ge
M: Kiu ki main to bhai joru ka gulam hu...jaha ye joru waha ye gulam apni joru ki khidmat pe hazir rahega...agar mana kia to pher soch lena chabi nehi milega pher ho gaya tomhari office jane ka ram na satteya... :p abhi chalo meri gulab jamun karela jeisa sara hua chehra mat banaw.or ha drive bhi me karunga...nehi too...
N: Huh...kabhi dekha bhi ye gari...chalane ki baat karte ho...
M: Eu kahu to begam aap ki ye nacheez showhar dikhne me to bara bhola dikhta he par utna bhola he nehi..chaliye aj aap ko zamin pe hawai jahaj ki anand uthane ka mouka deta hu..
N: Chalo niklo abhi... -_-
Nandini main gate pe manik ka wait karti he or tabhi manik nandini ki car leke ata he. Manik car se bahar nikal k nandini k liye car door open kar deta he or nandini attitude dikhake baith jati he
M: Billo rani kripia kar k apni seat bealt pehen li jiye...
N: Jarurat nehi te tum pehle thik s start karo wo hi bohot he...
M: Thik he main he pehna deta hu tumhe...
N: NEHI...main khud pehen lungi tum drive karo...
M: Okay ;)
Writer Pov:
Manik 20 min ki raste ko 7 min me hi cover kar lia...or nandini uski halat to dekhne layak thi...itni speed pe to wo bhi drive nehi karti... 140km/h k speed me drive kia or wo bhi itni smoothly or perfectly nandini ki to bolti bandh ho gayi...vala ho seat belt ka warna nandini ka kya hota :p
M: Maza aya billo rani?
Nandini bina kuch kahe jaldi se utaar gayi car se or office k andar chali gayi. Manik car park kar k office k andar jate he...BANG with a girl in yellow salwar suit...sare stuff un dono k dekh rahe the with hell shock
Girl: I m sorry sir...please sorry...maine aap ko nehi dekha tha...maine jan bujh k nehi kia...maf kar dijiye please sir...
Manik (in Amitabh bacchan style) : Angrez chale geye bus piche ye sorry chood gaye haiinnn...
Girl ( In shock) : Hain???
Manik: Are itna daar kiu rahe ho main kya koi bhalu hu kya jo tumhe kha jaunga? relax its all right..nam kya he tumhara?
Girl: Ni..ni..niyonika...sir ( :p)
Writer Pov:
Sorry for interruption guys but let me tell u meri iss story mein KY2 ki sabhi character ko kuch jeyada hi ajeeb bana dia he...I hope aap sab ko maza aye ga or agar kisi ko accha nehi laga to plz apki review me bata dijiyega...thank u #Mayra
M: AISE BADI BADI SEHRO ME AISI CHOTO CHOTI BATE HOTI REHTI HE NI NI NIYONIKA ;)
Niyonika was hell shocked to react...then manik went to nandini's cabin...
N: Akhir aa gaye na apni aukat par...ladki dikhi nehi or chichora pan shuru kar dia...meri he fault thi jo maine tumse BEHAVE ki umid kia...but let me clear u one thing ye meri office he koi park nehi jaha tum ladkio ko takkar marte phiro...first or last time warning de rahi hu agar phir se aisi dusri ladkio se chichora pan karte dekhi na to main bhul jaungi ki maine koi contract bhi kia tha or sidha tumhari murder kar k meri ghar ki niche he dafna dungi...kisi ko khabar bhi nehi hoga...mind it
Manik Pov:
NOW WHAT WAS THAT DUDE...is that JEALOUSY. Yes dude this is JEALOUSY...abhi dekho Mrs. Manik Malhotra opps sorry billo rani aap ka ye pati dev or kya kya gul khilate he... ;)
M: Kya kya kya...kya kaha tumne mujhse kuch UMID kia? sacchi billo rani?
Nandini realized what did she just said...
N: Tum bhar me jao..mujhe kaam he kaam karne do..
M: Toh pher main kya karu...
N: Office me ane se pehle sochna chahiye tha tumhe...abhi mujhe kam karne do..
M (Sadly) : Okay
Then suddenly he sow a fish bowl in a corner table n immediately his face light up with a smile n he went near to the bowl n start palying with it. There was 2 golden fish in the bowl. Then suddenly an evil plan hit his mind..
M: NA NA KARTE PYAR HUM HI SE KAR BAITHE...
KARNA THA INKAAR MAGAR IQRAAT HUM HI SE KAR BAITHE...
N: Ye kya bakwas gana ga rahe ho..ye meri cabin he koi music room nehi...gana he to bahar jaw mujhe tang mat karo
M: Wo to main is Romeo ko tips de raha tha apni laila ko patane k liye...
N: What rome..what laila...yaha hum dono k ilawa or koi nehi he dikhai nehi deta kya tumhe...
M: Ye bowl me jo 2 machli he wo kya tumhe dikhai nehi de rahi bollo rani...chalo pahari wala baba k pas le jati hu tumhe wo tumhari ankho ki ilaj kar dega...
N: Tum or tumhara pahari wale baba bhar me jaw...or tumhe kis ne kaha ye 2 fishes ka naam romeo or laila he?
M: Abhi in dono ne he kaha mujhe...
N: O really machlia batein bhi karne lage?
M: Haan karte he na...agar nehi karte to ek dusre se batein kaise karte or in ka to hath bhi nehi he ishara karne k liye...
N: Whatever mujhe disturb mat karo..
After some time...
M: HAHAHAHAHA...
N: Tumhara problem kya he?
M: Billo rani dekho ye romeo kitna buddhu he...
N: Kya?
M: Ha dekho na iss ki laila iss se pyar ka ijhar nehi kar rahi to romeo ne laila se kya kaha janti ho...kaha Laila agar aj tumne apni dil pyar ka ijhar nehi kia na to me PANI me kud k apni jaan de dunga...hahaha
Hearing this nandini also start laughing...
M: Haayyy aj kya katal karne ki irada he kya...hasi he ya do dhari talwar maan to kar raha he khud he iss talwar se katal ho jau...
N: Manik get out...niklo meri cabin se mujhe kam karne do...
M: Thik he aap ki hukum sar ankho par...chal romeo tu apni laila ko utha or main tujhe uthata hu hum NIYONIKA JI k pas chalet he waha hum shanty se batein bhi kar sakenge or NIYONIKA JI se pehchan bhi bara lenge...
Saying this manik was about to leave then nandini stoped him
N: Ruko...ye hi baitho...main nehi chahti meri stuff meri so called husband ko le kar batein kare...
M: O ho aisa he kya...
Manik was about to say something then suddenly nandini's phn start buzzing...Nandini picked up the call
N: Hey al (It was alya..nandini calls her al n alya calls her nands they r bff)
A: I hate u nands...aise bina bataye shadi kar lia or bulaya bhi nehi...huh
N: Sorry al plz gussa mat ho baby...um sorry ye sab bohot achanak hua batane ka time he nehi mila..
A: Ok chal maf kia par aj sham ko royal club me party he or tujhe apni husband k sath ana he must. Soha mukri dhruv or varun bhi ayenge. Koi bahana nehi chaleha...u have to come
N: Aj...hmmm ok a jaungi...see u then...
A: U r too good thanks nands...love you
N: Love u too Al...bye
A: Bye
Hearing this Baby n LOVE U TOO stuff manik became shocked
Manik Pov:
HAIN...ye main kya sun raha hu...BABY...LOVE U TOO...iss khun chusne wali nagin ki sapola kaha se paida ho gaya (sapola means saap ki bacche) pata karna parega...
N: Manik aj sham ko ek party he meri friends k sath royal club pe tumhe bhi ana he or plz request he waha par aapni ye zuban par qabu rakhna jeyada batein mat kar na or please BEHAVE...
M: Ji hujur jaisa aap bolengi wesa hi hoga...
N: Abhi tum shopping pe jaw sham k liye kuch kharid lo or kuch dhang ka kharid na please...ye lo meri credit card le jaw
M: wese to jarurat nehi he par tum itni pyaar se de rahi ho to le leta hu.biwi ki credit card se shopping karne wala pati shayad main dunia me pehla hu. hay manik beta tu kitna kismet wala he tujhe itna pyar karne wali patni mili...:p
N: Abhi pher se shuru mat ho jaw...GO
M: Ok billo rani apna kheyal rakhna...or ye lo urne wali pappi (flying kiss :p )
N: Jate ho ya...
M: Ok ok jata hu...soch raha tha ek urne wali pappi NIYONIKA JI ko bhi... ;)
N: YOU CHEEP...
Then manik left
After finishing her work nandini went to home
Nandini Pov:
Pata nehi kya kya utha laya hoga. mujhe khud he jana chahiye tha shopping k liye...uss ka kya bharosa...waise he kaha wo noutanki...bula bhi nehi sakti warna phir se apna cheep harkatein shuru kar dega...dekhti hu room me...
Whwn nandini was looking hare n there suddenly manik came for her behind n huskily whispered
M: Mujhe dhund rahi thi billo rani?
Nandini felt some shiver on her body n manik saw it
N: Wo...wo..main
M: Haan boliyen...
N: Credit card...Credit card lene ayi hu...wapas karo
M: Ooo card chahiye...thik he le lo meri jacket ki andar ki pocket pe hath dalo waha se nikal lo
N: MAIN NIKALU!!
M: Haan kiu? sharam ati he tumhe billo rani? apne aap ko control nehi kar paogi kya :p
N: Aisi koi baat nehi he...tum khud nikal kiu nehi dete
M: Wo mera hatho me ata laga hua he...tumhare liye roti bana rahi thi na issi liye
N: Kis ne kaha bana ne k liye..
M: Mera dill ne
N: Uff idhar ao
Then she slowly put her hand to his pocket...she could feel his heart beat...her own heart beat grows faster...manik noticed his effect on her n smirked...nandini immediately garb the card and pull out his hand
N: Kuch bana ne ki jarurat nehi he abhi ready ho jaw ek ghante me hume nikal na he
M: Ok
Then nandini left n manik went to bothroom..after 1 hour they both step down n left for club. Nandini was wearing a black knee length top with red show her hair was tied up in a side pony with lil make up se was looking breathtaking hot n manik was wearing red tshirt with shiny black blazer n black pant with black shoe his hair was nicely gelled up. They both were complimenting each other with their out looks agter sometime they reached the club
A: Hey nands...
N: Hey Al...whats up guys...
Manik Pov:
Oh ye he meri billo rani ki baby...main to kuch aur he soch raha tha... :p
A: O my my u r looking hot babes...
N: Thanks Al...meet my husband Manik Malhotra... manik ye he meri bachpan ki dost aliya saxena.or ye he soha saxena ye he mukti vardhan ye he dhruv vedant or wo he varun vedant
M: Hi guys...
Every one : HI JIJA JI
M: Aliya soha or dhruv or varun kya brothers n sisters ho?
Hearing this everyone got shocked...
N: Excuse me gys...
A: No need babes...we can understand...let me tell him
Manik was confused...
A: actually me n soha and dhruv n varun r couples...
Now this makes manik shocked... he even didn't know how to react...
M: Oh...that's..umm that's great...I m sorry I didn't knew it
D: Its okay buddy...chalo lets have drinks
Manik Pov:
OMG...meri billo rani ki waise hi dost jeyada nehi he or jo he wo sab aisa nikla lesbian n gay...hahahaha...stop manik don't laugh...btw main to happy hu iss se
Everyone was busy in chit chat then mukti went near to manik
Mukti: Hey Handsome I m mukti n I m straight btw..
Manik ( confusingly) : Hi mukti
Mukti : chalo lets dance...
Manik: Ok chalo
Manik n mukti start dancing n nandini got jealous...then she start dringing vodka shots one by one
Aliya: Nands what happened to u darling...why r u dringing so much...tum to drink nehi karte na
Soha: Ha babes kya hua is any problem?
Nandini: Nothing guys shadi ki khushi me pe rahi hu
Varun: Ohho aisa kya then lets race koun jyada pe sakte he
Dhuv: No nandini koi race nehi karogi tum...whats this varun..tumhe pata he na nandini nehi pe ti to pher kiu
Nandini: Its okay dhruv...lets start varun
Varun: Bang on sweetheart it will be fun today I guess
Manik saw this n came near to nandini
Manik: Jaan tum itna kiu pe rahi ho choro
Nandini: Nehi manik I want to win..Nandini murty opps sorry Nandini malhotra always wins...
Nandini was then full talli...
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OMG maine bola tha ki e maine & Mayra ne plan kiya so story toh pagalpanti se bhara hoga..
But #mayra ne toh pagalpanti ki sab se bara example de di...😉 😉
Bengali magic. 😛
Kya part hai... 🤣 🤣 🤣
I love this type of nyonika... Usse toh manik ki flying kiss milte milte reh gayi... 👏 👏 👏
Nandini sari frnds toh VG ki relatives nikle
😎 😎 😎
Nandini jealous hai?????
Usse kuch kuch ho raha hai????
Manik kya plan kar raha hai????????
Tali nandini kya kamal dikhayegi??????
Jaane k liye bane rahiye srif yeh or kaha... 😊
Lots of love ❤️
Purna
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Ok friends hope u all enjoy this part.
Main ja rahi hu holiday pe so baki sab story milegi Monday k baad...
Maine meri crazy idea se phir ek os likha hai.
MaNan OS-Maan maa Emotion JAGE RE
but o half hi huya hai if I Complete it tonight then I will post it tomorrow morning or wait till monday...
Keep smiling
Stay blessed
Lots of love
Purna
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Posted: 9 years ago
#28
Wow update...
I soo luved tjis manik ki pagalpanti...
But I think he is jst pretending to be like this..
He may be loves nandu and want to win her heart...
Nandu is also falling for him..
She was jealous of muku...
Nandu talli..its going to be fun...
Luved it...
Update soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
This story is getting really hillarious maza aa raha he. .
Do come fast
and continue d story
plz
plz
jaldi aana
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
This is amazing story..
I like it and Manik laungage was hilarious..
Such a great idea dear.. Update fast..plz...

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