MaNan SS -Tedha hai par Mera hai chapter 5-page36 17.06.16 - Page 5

Originally posted by: archu_asok

Awesome update. Loved it to core. The way manik made nandini have her food was amazing .manik's flimy lines were mindblowing. Irritated nandini was funny. Nandini's POV was hilarious.manan's moments were beautifully penned. Jealousy nandini was phenomenal.totally an entertaining update. Keep up the good work. Waiting for next update. Thanks for pm.

Keep writing.

Stay blessed😊

Thanks for ur precious comments.

Originally posted by: lovePANI

Hilarious update..

what dis manik says..

n name he gives to nandu is out of the mind..hahaha..

what is khatmal???!!

Aaaii from where she got manik..??

sometimes manik speak eng so fluently... m.confused..

n yaa aap logo ne what changes brang on character..hahaha ..

trilok kaka thank lord atleast it is not ramu..

nyonika yellow salwar hahaha..

oho nandu was jealous.. :)

Now she got talli
what gonna happen??

waiting eagerly..

keep smiling n take care

Thanks for ur precious comments.
Thank god someone notice it Manik charecter is not like that what he shown... Wait some more hope u get ur ans...

Originally posted by: ashitha.kerala

wow wonderful updatemanan nd their conversation too goodmanik omg his language nd his each nd every word superbmanik is so funnyjealousy nandu ohhu penned it beautifulthanks for pmcontinue soon

Thank you so much for ur precious comments

Originally posted by: shweta6767

This is amazing story..
I like it and Manik laungage was hilarious..
Such a great idea dear.. Update fast..plz...

Thanks for ur precious comments dear

Originally posted by: epshitatabassum

Awesome

Fab

Nice

Superb

Rofl

I think manik plan karkya aya hai

Maybe he's educated, well manner boy but nandu toh tedha hai usay sihdha karnay ayiya hai

I think manik uski dad ki choose hai

But srssly it hilarious

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Wait For some more updates hope u get this ans...

Originally posted by: hinzi

dis prt was awesome

great

hilarious

super duper funny

agr manik real mein aisa hota to?

Thanks for ur precious time comments.
Agar manik real main aisa hota shayed show off air nehi jata..

Originally posted by: shaan...

this story is totally hillarious...
m luvng it...& especially manik's pagalpanti...
plz continue soon...

Jab do pagal milte hai esi pagalpanti wali story banti hai...
Thanks for loving It & Manik pagalpanti...

Originally posted by: Pari_mananholic

Wow update...

I soo luved tjis manik ki pagalpanti...

But I think he is jst pretending to be like this..

He may be loves nandu and want to win her heart...

Nandu is also falling for him..

She was jealous of muku...

Nandu talli..its going to be fun...

Luved it...

Update soon...

Thanks for loving it.
Wait some more updates hope you get ur ans...

Part-2

This time I post it but next time I skipped all part jo main send kar dungi only comments karne walon ko
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CHAPTER - 2
Manik: Jaan enough bohot hua abhi bas chalo lets go home...
Nandini (Drunk) : Nehi mujhe varun ko harana he...tum jaw...mukti k sath matak matak k dance karo jaw...
Mukti: chalo manik hum dance karte he...nandini ko rehne do
Nandini: Haawww...mukti tumhe bara maza a raha he mera pati k sath nachne me???
Mukti: Ow chill chill...Nandini we were just dancing yr whats the big deal??
Nandini: Seriously mukti...tumhe kya main andhi dikhai deti hu...main bohot acche se dekh rahi thi ki kaise tum meri bhole se pati ko dance k bahane idhar udhar chu rahi thi...mera bechara pati kuch bol bhi nehi paya...
Mukti: What the...what r u trying to say nandini
Nandini: Main pehle hi bohot acchi tarha se tumhe dekh lia tha...mere pati ko dekh k kaisa tumhara ankhein bhuki billi ki tarha chamak rahi thi...lag rahi thi jaise abhi tut paro ge mere pati k upar...jalan ho rahi he mera itna handsome pati ko dekh k? Manik sirf or sirf mera pati he tumhare ye sab karne se tumhe kuch nehi milega...dur raho mere pati se samajh me aya
Mukti: Shut up nandini...mera pati.. mera pati...lagta he bohot ghamand ho rahe he tumhe...itne din akele rehne k baad abhi ek pati kya mil gaya tumhari to tevar he badal gaya...he koun tumhare life me koi bhi nehi...tum itni irritating ho ki koi bhi tumhare sath nehi reh sakta...shayad tumhare mom ko pehe he pata chal gaya tha issiliye wo tumhe birth dene k time he mar chuki thi pher tumhari dad ne tumhe boarding school bhej dia wo bhi tumhe jhelna nehi chahta tha...waha par bhi tumhari koi friend nehi thi iss lesbo aliya k ilawa...or pher college me dhruv wah kya friend selection he...ek lesbian or ek gay...hahaha tumhare liye ye log he thik he pata nehi manik ko kaise tum mil gaye...
Everyone was so shocked...aliya soha dhruv varun they were being freeze they even couldn't utter a single word but manik was fuming in hell anger...mukti's words were enough for bringing monster manik... ;)
Manik: How dare u...how bloody dare u...till now I didn't say anything that doesn't mean I won't say anything...himmat kaisi hue tumhari meri nandini k upar chilane ka haan? ye haq maine duniya me kisi ko nehi dia not even myself...toh pher tum hoti koun ho...who the bloody hell r u?...
Mukti: Manik..i...
Manik: Oh just shut ur bloody mouth up...bohot bol lia...abhi main bolunga or tum suno ge...tum sirf meri nandini ka nahi uski sari friends ka bhi insult kia us ki mom dad ka insult kia...tum to nandini ki mom dad k bare m bat mat he karo...if I m not wrong tum Navya vardhan ki beti ho na mukti vardhan opps sorry not vardhan actually mukti gupta right? Bloody controversy maker vikas gupta or navya vardhan ki beti...
Mukti (Shocked): Tum...tumhe kaise...
Manik: Mujhe or bhi bohot kuch pata he agar bol ne pe utar aya na to tumhari family ki puri ki puri history biography nikal aye ga jo tum shayad itne logo k samne sunna nehi chaho gi or baki raha nandini ki friends ki sexuality k bare me...kapre to modern pehne ho par soch itni purani rakhti ho chi...shayad tumhe pata nehi ye natural hota he...iss me koi abnormal wali baat nehi he..jaise tum feel karte ho tumhare partner k liye aise hi aliya or dhruv bhi feel karte he un k partner k liye...in logo ka relation pure he in ka mazak bana ne ka koi haq nehi he tumhe...agar tum kisi ladke k sath pyar karti ho shadi karte ho to kya ye galat baat hoga,hum log tumhara mazak banayenge? nehi na? to bas ye hi same baat apni iss choti si dimag me fit kar lo ki inn logo k sath bhi ye same thing he hai...bohot si country me ye legal bhi ho gaya he wo din dur nehi jab puri world me ye legal ho jayega...tum to khud modeling karti ho tumhe nehi pata fashion or modeling ki world me bohot sare famous personality he jo gay or lesbians he...un sab ko bhi choro America ki president Barack Hussein Obama wo...wo kya hei tumhe nehi pata? wo bhi to GAY he na...unse bhi tumhe problem he kya?
Writer Pov:
guyz! guyz! hold on its just an FF so please take it easy...bohot jeyada serious ho raha tha issiliye kuch funny likh dia...I hope kisi ne mind nehi kia ho ga Obama wale baat pe. thank u
Aliya & Soha was like Awww...
But Dhruv & Varun was like: TUJH ME RAB DIKHTA HE YARA MAIN KYA KARU...( :p )
Manik: or raha sawal meri nandini ka...us ki life k chinta tum mat karo...us k liye main hu...main nandini ko nehi mila nandini mujhe mili. she is the most beautiful gift that I ever had from god...I m lucky to have her...us ki jaisa koi dusri nehi ho sakta...she is a pure soul with an golden heart... she is a strong women so don't even try to manipulate her ever...pehle wo NANDINI MUTY thi akeli hajar ki barabar thi ab wo NANDINI MANIK MALHOTRA he baki khud soch lo...so be aware next time
Then manik took nandini n they left...
In car
Nandini ( Drunk+emotional): Manik...tum...tum uss mukti ko itna kuch bola...mere liye?
Manik: Haan meri dil ki rani...tumhare liye bola...
Nandini: Par kiu? main to tumhe bohot dantti hu na?
Manik: Wo hi to tumhara pyar kar ne ka tarika he meri rani...
Nandini: Maine to kabhi nehi kaha ki main tumse pyar karti hu to phir?
Manik: Nehi billo rani tum to hamesha kehti ho par apni ankho se...
Nandini: Manik tum bohot acche ho please hamesha meri pas rehna...agar main jyada daant du phir bhi maat jana mujhe chor k
Manik was like Aww she is sooo cute...
Manik: Nehi jaunga baccha I promise...
Nandini: Khaw tumhari pahari wale baba ki kasam
Manik: HAHAHA...accha baba pahari wale baba ki kasam kabhi nehi jaunga tumhe chor k abhi ghar chalo
Nandini: Nehi nehi ghar nehi jana
Manik: billo rani abhi ghar chalo tum bohot thak gayi ho tumhe aram kana chahiye
Nandini: Nehi nehi nehi jana...
saying this she step down from car n run towards a near by park manik too got down n start running after nandini
Manik: Stop billo rani...kaha ja rahi ho tum gir jao ge...stop stop stop accha abhi ghar nehi jayenge promise
Nandini: That's like my puchku...
Manik: Puchku??? tumhe main puchku lagta hu??
Nandini: Ha tum bohot pyare ho iss liye puchku...accha to puchku abhi mujhe asman me udna he plane ki tarha
Manik: Hain?? accha idhar ao
Nandini: Puchku ye kya kar rahe ho...mujhe aise ulta kar k kiu uthaya
Manik: Tumhe udna he na...abhi dekho tumhe udati hu...apni do hatho ko plane k tarha kar do
Nandini: Aise?
Manik: Haan abhi meri billo rani udegi
Nandini: yeeeyyy puchku bohot maza aa raha he...or jor se bhago (manik was holding her in his arm n he was running here n there like an kid)
Manik: oh...billo rani main thak gayi abhi bas or nehi
Nandini: kya puchku...itne me hi thak gaye...accha chalo abhi mujhe tree pe cdhaw
Manik: Tumhe ata he tree pe chadhna?
Nandini : Nehi :p
Manik: accha chalo main tree banta hut um mujh pe chadh jao
Nandini: U r awesome puchku...
Manik: par is k baad hum ghar jayenge ok?
Nandini: Ok
Manik: Chalo mere ye leg k upar ek pao do ha aise...or left hand se mera shoulder pakro haan or right hand se mera shirt tight kar k pakro...haan abhi apne aap ko upar pull karo...haan daro mat giraunga nehi...haan ye lo ho gaya
Nandini: Mujhe pata he puchku tum mujhe girne nehi do ge...wow puchku kitna maza aa raha he..puchku hilo mat tree hilte nehi chup chap khade raho...
after 5 mint
Manik: Billo rani abhi bohot hua chalo niche aao
Nandini: Puchku suno na mujhe kaisa lag raha he tumhe pata he?
Manik: Kaisa?
Nandini: Mujhe lag raha he tum ek sach much ka tree ho or mai ek beautiful se monkey :p HIHIHIHI
Manik: HAHAHA...abhi bohot hua ghar chalte he chalo...
Nandini: ok
suddenly puchku puchku puchku stop the car...
Manik: kya hua billo rani tum thik to ho na?
Nandini: Puchku wo dekho flowers...mujhe chahiye wo red wala wo purple wala or blue wala or pink or sabhi colors ki par black color ki nehi I hate that black rose -_-
Manik: Ok tum ruko gari me main leke ata hu
after 5 mints he came back with lots of colorful flowers
Manik: ye meri phoolon ki malika k liye
Nandini: wow manik its sooo pretty abhi chalo
After some time
Manik: billo rani...utho dekho hum ghar pohoch gaye
Nandini: Puchku mejhe sone do...
Manik: Billo rani tumne kuch khaya bhi nehi utho warna main jar raha hu
Nandini: nehi nehi please mat jao main utha rahi hu...
Then they go insie the house
Manik: baby tum yaha baitho main 2 mint me tumhare liye noodle bana k lata hu...sona mat
Nandini: (sleepily) Ook..puch..ku
after 5 mint
Manik: jaan open ur mouth...see kitna yammy noodle he...jaan...jaaannn
Nandini: I don't want to eat..i want to sleeep puchku
Manik: Ok tum apni eyes bandh rakho main khila deta hu tum mu kholo
Nandini: Haaa...
Manik: that's like my princess accha princess tumhe to black rose pasand nehi to uss din kiu laye the
Nandini: (closing her eyes) Kiu ki black rose kisi ko pasand nehi ata its like an curse...koe isse nehi chahta jeise ki main...koi mujhe nehi chata..mukti ne kaha tha na...sach kaha tha mera kie nehi he...main bohot akeli hu...I m also a curse
saying this she started crying...
Manik: shh shhh chup ho jao meri jaan..kisne kaha tum curse ho tum to god ki sabse acchi wali blessing ho jaan...or tum akele kaha main hu na tumhare sath...I m with u jaan & I will be hamesha..pakka..abhi no crying only smiling
then they hug each other...
Manik: Abhi khana khatam karo jaan jaldi
Nandini: ok
After finishing her food manik carrying her in his arm n took her to the bedroom
Manik: Abhi tum so jaw jaan good night
Nandini: puchku wo flowers mere side table par rakh do ge please
Manik: Ok princess anything else?
Nandini: pehle rakho pher batati hu
Manik: ye lo rakh dia abhi bolo or kya hukum he jaan
Nandini: Tum mere pas so jaw please...mujhe akele mein bohot dar lagta he par main kisi ko batati nehi hu please please mat jaw puchku
Manik: Ok baba nehi jaungi...tum so jaw me yehi hu...
Nandini : (Hugging him tightly) Manik tumhe pata he main bachpan me mom dad ko bohot miss karti thi...mom ko to maine dekha bhi nehi or dad wo kabhi mere sath the hi nehi...main kitna ro ti thi...main kya itni buri hu ki koi mujhe pyar hi nehi karta
Manik: Nandini meri jaan aisa kiu bol rahi ho...main hu na tumse pyar karne k liye...or mom dad bhi tumse bohot pyaar karte he issiliye to wo god k pas ja k bola ki god ji meri nandu k liye wo lambu sa manik ko bhej do jo use bohot sara pyar karega or khayal rakkhe ga...n see now I m hare...god ne un dono ki wish puri kar dia
Nandini: Sacchi manik? they love me sooo much?
Manik: yes jaan they love you so much...abhi tum so jaw ok
Nandini: Ok Puchku good night
Manik: Good night billo rani
Nandini: Manik..
Manik: ab kya hua princess?
Nandini: mujhe kuch chahiye
Manik: ha jaan bolo kya chahiye tumhe
Nandini: tum apni ankhe bandh karo main kaan me batati hu
Manik: Okay ( smilingly)
Nandini slowly moved toward manik n slowly took his lips for a passionate kiss
firstly manik was lil shocked then he also start responding her back...they were get lost in there soul taking kiss...after an passionate kiss seasion they both slept in each other arms..

Bolo bolo kaisi hai part?????
#mayra ne toh Obama ko bhi nehi chodra???
Socho socho age kya hoga kis kis ki entry hogi?????
Nandini kyu esi hai e bhi pata chal gaya?????

1st kiss bhi Hogaya..
Next part pe kya hoga think think kya nandini ko sab yaad hoga????
Jane k liye bana rahiye sirf yaha aur kaha...
Lots of love
Mayra & Purna

hey, read chapter 1A & 1B now... oh manik 's language is hilarious... except mukti & nandu nandu's friend all are lesbo &gay seriously???? rofl... can't stop laughing... rofl... jealous drunk nandu... can you please pm me chapter 2 ???