MANAN FS - TU ISHQ MERA (LAST PART ON PAGE 27) 20JAN

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Coming with a new story guys ...it's two shots ...but Firstly I thought to give you guys PROLOGUE ...so here is the prologue ...should I continue it Or not ...tell me by ur views ...hope you guys like it ...ENJOY😛


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A girl was sitting in a pub ...she was continuously drinking ...a girl came towards her and placed her hand on her shoulder and said

Girl : bas kar yaar aur kitna piyegi ...

Girl laughed sarcastically and said : Tujhe pata ha navya ...yeh jo sharaab ha naa bahot achi hoti ha ...saara dard ...Sara gham bhula deti ha ...yeh insaan nahi hoti naa ...jo beech raaste main chod de ...yeh toh itni acchi ha ki ...insaan ka saath marte dam tak nahi jhodti ...usse dard nahi deti ...

Navya felt like crying to see her condition ...but she managed to say

Navya : kyu khudko intna dard pahoncha rahi ho ...bhul jaa sab kuch ...manik ne jo bhi ...

Nandani shoutedly said : Don't ...Don't u dare speak a word ...I don't want to listen anything ...

Navya loudly said : kab tak ...kab tak haa ...kab tak tu iss tarah rahegi ...nandani maaf karde usse ...pyar ha voh tera ...ishq ha voh tera ...tu jaan ha uski ...yeh tu bhi jaanti ha...nahi jii payega tere bina ...mar jayega voh ... mat kar aisa ...

Nandani angrily said : marta ha toh mar jaane do ...par main maaf nahi karne waali ...

Manik who was listening all this ...he feels bad ...Navya looked at him helplessly to which he gives a assuring smile and came towards them ...

Manik smiled : arre ese kaise mar jaaun ...jaanta hu ek pal bhi nahi reh paaungi mere bina ...

Nandani looked at him and give a angry glare to him and said

Nandani angrily said: Tujh jaise insaan ko yaad kare meri jutti ...

Manik dramatically said : Arre jutti mat bolo jaana ...varna mere bechare dil ka kya hoga ...

Nandani frustratingly said: jab mera tujhse koi lena dena nahi ...toh tera dill ka kya aachar dallu ...

Manik : Arre waah tumhe aachar dalna aata ha ...tumhe pata ha ...I love aacchar ...agar tu banayegi toh aur bhi mazza aayega ...😉

Nandani looked at him in disbelief and about to go from there but manik holds her hand ...nandani turned and give him a tight slap on his cheek ...everyone was looked at them with shock ...manik placed his hand on his cheek ...

Nandani : don't u dare touch me ...aur aaj ke baad yeh jaana bhi mat bolna ...had ...ha ...mere peeche hi pad gaya ...samajh nahi aata kya ...nahi interested hu tujhme ...mar gayi tumhari jaana ...shakal bhi nahi dekhna chahti tujh jaise jhoothe insaan ki ...

Manik holds nandani both hands ...nandani tried to remove it but manik grip became tighter...nandani give him a angry glare but his grip didn't loose a bit ...he cupped her face lovingly and said

Manik lovingly said: KITNA PYAR HA TUMSE YEH JAAN LO ...TUM HI ZINDAGI HO MERI ... IS BAAT KO MAAN LO ...TUMHE DENE KO MERE PAAS KUCH NAHI ...BAS EK JAAN HA ...JAB JI CHAHE MAAG LO ...PAR APNI JAAN DENE KI BAAT MAT KAHO ...JI NAHI PAAUNGA ...JAAN HO TUM MERI ...MERI JAAN ...❤️

Nandani was just standing over there all numb ...





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So how's it ...like it or not ...
Continue karu yaah nahi ...
Accha ji ...agar pasand aaye toh please likes
Or comment karne mat bhulna ...
So what you think esa kya kiya
manik ne jo nandani gussa ha ...
Well here I clear ur confusion ...do u guys remember about kyy season 1 ...in which manik broke nandani's heart bcz of druv ...so this story starts from there ...ab aage ki story aap logo ko padne par hi pata lage gi ...
Take care guys
Love you all
Keep loving
Keep smiling
And
Keep shining For Ur loved ones
Love
Diya😛



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lovePANI thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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arre yeh b koi puchne wali baat hai
continue continue..

prologue look so sad

kya hua?????

oh my Jesus last para that manik said took my heart..
ur line???????????

keep smiling n take care
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kishubedi thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Thanks for pm
Super interesting
Continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing...
interesting ... different concept...
egarly waiting...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Amazing update...
Very well written...
Loved it to the core...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Yaarrr!
pllzzz.. suspense always kills mee/...
plzzz ise jaldi se khol de...😊

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Damn interesting prologue
And those last lines are just amazing

Thanks for PM.😊😊😊
Continue Soon.😊😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Drunkard nandini.. Don't make her too alchoholic,but i know tu wahi karegi.. And yeah, please make manik suffer a lot for what he did.. Love you..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please update soon eagerly waiting and really looking forward to it pretty please
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome n interesting so she's angry because of maniks stupidity nandu ka gussa bhi jayaz hai par ab mila do waiting for their superb romance n ur amazing story
Update soon dear

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