MANAN FS - TU ISHQ MERA (LAST PART ON PAGE 27) 20JAN - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
Wow...

What a concept...

Nandini looking like a punjaban here...

oh manik...slap khane k baad bhi itni romentic lines...

ho bhi kyun na feelings ko words mein describe karna achi tarah ata hai use,,,,,,

loved the concept...

continue soon

Pleaseee

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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
Interesting...
Cont soon... And thnx for the pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
i just luved the dialoges
jaan ho tum meri
n each n ebry diologo n last wala to was dil le gaaya
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
awesome glimpse. ...
nice concept. ...
continue soon. ...
stay blessed. ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
that...was...intresting!!!...
aisa kya hogaya un dono k beech!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
its different and interesting..
nandu in totally different avatar..Manik is manavofying her kra kya usne..?
n do cont. would love to read it😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
interesting promo continue soon dear...last lines by manik are superb...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Nice
Loved it. Continue soon
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
New story!! Suprb..
Awesome prologue...
Lvd it...Y nandu hates manik so much??
Manik s still after Nandu..
Ek baaat toh sure he..
Manik s madly in lv vid nandu...
Prologue seems interesting...
Thnks so much 4 d pm dear...
do continue..
Waitin 4 first update..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40

Thank you SooO much Guys for ur lovely comments and likes...and sorry for updating so late ...chalo here is ur update ...hope you guys like it ...ENJOY😛


PART-1(A)


A girl is sitting on her kig size bed ...she was working on her laptop ...a guy entered in her room and sit next to her ...Girl looked at him


Girl : Aap yaha kya kar rahe ho ...


Guy smilingly said : Arre congrats bolne aaya hu ...dad ne bataya u got that contract haaa ...well am impressed ...


Girl smiled a little and said: Thanks bhai ...but really this is just a small contract ...why are so worked up ...


Guy shook his head and dramatically said


Guy dramatically said : what worked yaar nandu ...jab dekho tab ...kaam ...kaam ... or kaam ...ab tujhe apne bhai ki koi value hi nahi ha ...dekh kitne din ho gaye ha hum kahi bahar bhi nahi gaye ...par tujhe kya tu toh bas kaam hi karti reh ...


Nandani smiled and closed her laptop and hold guy hand ...and said


Nandani smilingly said : ese nahi ha abhi bhai ...I was just busy ...I want to give my best ...I want everyone to say ...Mr. Murthy ...ur daughter is the best daughter in the world ...I want dad happiness bhai ...


Abhi smilingly said : u knew nandani u r the world best daughter...sach me ...par agar tum sachme dad ki khushi chahti ho toh tumhe khud khush rehna hoga ...aur tum khush tabhi ho sakti ho jab tum usse ...


Abhi was about to say something but nandani cut off him in mid and said ...


Nandani coldly said : bhai please mujhe iss baare main koi baat nahi karni ...


Abhi:nandu...


Nandani didn't looked at him to which he gave up and said ...


Abhi:Accha chal ab tayar ho jaa ...


Nandani confusingly said : par kis liye ...


Abhi smilingly said : kyunki tum bahar jaa rahi ho ...u cracked the deal yaar ...party toh banti ha ...


Nandani : par bhai ...


Abhi smilingly said : No ...par var u r going and that's final ...


Nandani nodded her head as yes ...to which abhi kissed her forehead and said : tayar ho jaa ...


Nandani smiled a little and said: hmmm...


Abhi left from there ...nandani came on the balcony and looked towards the moon ...and said


Nandani said: Pyar Usko Milta Hai Jiski Taqdeer Hoti Hai ...

Bahot kam Hatho Main Ye Laqeer Hoti Hai ...

Kabhi Judaa Naa Ho Pyaar Kisi Ka ...

Kasam Se bahot taklif Hoti ha ...


Nandani : shayad meri hi Taqdeer main pyar nahi ...


A lone tear came from her eyes...she wiped it ...and went to get ready ...


NANDANI'S ATTIRE-



After getting ready nandani left from there ...for club ...


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Edited by diyaNarwal - 9 years ago

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