Monster Manik Part:11ABCDpg-84&85(completed)21march - Page 43

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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update...
cont soon😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks for the pm...

how much he loves her,,,,

itna kuch hone k baad bhi he is only concerned about her...

cabir milvayega ab nandu or manik ko...

ye alya ki prob kya hai why she behaves like this with nandu.,...😡😡

smart cabir...kya tarika nikala manik aue nandu ko ik dusre ke paas rakhne ka...

again kabab mein haddi a gayi alia...

manik ne acha sabak sikhaya alya ko...how dae she talk to like this that to with his girl...

he scared the hell out of her...superb...

engagement postpone ho hi jani chahiye...

are nandu ko itna pyar karta hai manik use maan jana chahiye...why she thinks that there is no one to love her ...aur jo us se itna pyar karta hai use vo dur kar rahi hai...

what next now??

pls update soon...

thanks....
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Posted: 9 years ago
gosh ... do updte it fast yr...
this is do beautiful... n... ab kon aaya ?? :{
cabirrr. ... pls kuchhh kro... u r my only hope <3
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update. ...
manik loves nandu so much. ..
that aaliya, she is cunning girl. ...
just want to see manan together. ..
hope nandini also realise that she loves manik. ..
continue soon. ..stay blessed nd keep smiling. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dear Mehak
This is fabulous. You have really made something of all the characters. Can't w8 for the next chapter!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Damn emotional update... nandu ke life iss full of sadness... i think cabir hogaaa... update ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART : 9

Nandini turned to see the person and was shocked to see that he was no other then Manik...
Manik sees tears in Nandini eyes
Nandani- Sir aap??
Manik - hmm I have come here for office purpose only
Nandini become little sad
Manik- I have to go for Shimla today for a meeting, its gud if u also join me in the meeting and if u have any problem dan no problem I will handle the meeting myself...
Nandani- but kal aapki engagement hai
Manik- I will try to come fast...So, are u joining mee???
Nandini- nooo, I can't come
Manik- okkk
With dis Manik left, Nandini felt relieved that he didn't forced her to come with him
Scene: in evening
Nandini phone's rings
nandini sees dat it was of cabir, she picked the call
nandini- hiii cabir
cabir- (in tensed voice) hii nandini
nandini- kya hua any problem???
cabir- hmm yaar Manik ko gye hue itna time ho gya h, uska ek bhi call nhi aaya h
nandini- may b sir abhi meeting main ho
cabir- may b yaar, but tension ho rhi h, uska call nhi lag rha h and news main bhi its showing dat snow is falling in shimla, due to which chances of accident can b increased in the route going towards shimla
nandani- wat???
cabir- hmmm I don't know wat to do??? chaalo koi nhi... talk to u later...
byee nandini with dis he disconnect the call
nandini- par cabir... hello...
shit!!! call is disconnected
AIYAPPA!!!! wat to do now???? SIR safe toh honge naaa... kahi accident... nahi nahi... dis can't b happen... but I have to check him
hmmm...
but how????
yaaa Office call krke dekhti hu...
nandini ask the receptionist where he was going to stay in Shimla
Receptionist give her the address...
nandini - I have to go there and check him than only I can sleep peacefully...
She takes her car and leaves from her house
ON THE OTHER SIDE
phone conversation
cabir- I have tell her abt the weather!!!!! If she comes then she loves you or else
manik- or else wat???
cabir- or else She doesn't love u...
manik- I think that she will come here... and today I will make her accept that
She also luves meee
cabir- Someone seems very excited ...
manik smirked hearing that
cabir- If she will accept her feelings den uske baad
manik- kya uske baad??
cabir- uske baad Nandini and u... in same room... and kuch cozy scene
manik blushed hearing that
manik- I will talk to u later
cabir smiled and says that God plzz give him his happinesss, his life nandini...
On the other side
nandini reach the hotel and ask d receptionist
nandini - Excuse meee, in which room manik malhotra is staying???
recptionist- Sorry maam, but he has not arrived yet
nandini- not yet, okk
Nandini comes out of the hotel and sits on the bench
nandini's pov
Itni late ho gyi hain... sir ab tak nhi aaye...kahi koi problem, nhi nhi may b aane wale ho
hmmm, I will wait here
Scene: at 12 A.M
manik reached the hotel after the meeting and thinks nandini ab tak nhi aayi, pta nhi Nandini likes mee or not
then his eyes falls on Nandini sleeping on the bench outside the hotel
His happiness knew no bounds after seeing her
He goes near her, pat her cheeks
Nandini open her eyes and sees him
nandini at once hugs him tightly, he was taken back with this sudden hug but then he too hug her very tightly
for some minutes both were quiet, after some minutes
Nandini- (while hugging him) aap safe ho naaa, pta hain, how much scared I was
THANK U, AIYAPPA!!!!! aap safe ho
I was waiting for u for so long, Where were u????
manik was very happy, first of all nandini came here, den she hug him, and now she was saying that she was tensed for him
he was just smiling like a fool...
manik - U were tensed for meee!!!!!
nandini then realised wat she said
nandini broke the hug and look at manik
manik- bolo why do u care for mee???? U said that U don't luv mee naa then why???
nandini- vooo... I mean cabir has told mee dat sum accident...(stammering)
manik- then U have came here to check mee... why???
nandini- aapka phone nhi lg rha tha
manik- network problem but iske liye tum shimla aa gyi... hmmm
nandini was quiet
manik- bolo wat happened??? It will be gud naa if my accident has occured, U should b happy dat d biggest problem of your life has been removed for ever and
Nandini shushed him by keeping her hands on her mouth
Nandini nods nooo, tears has been filled in her eyes
nandini - Don't ever say dat...
manik- why???
nandini- because I love u...


So.. kaise.. lga.. confession.. ho gya... do.. comment.


Love Mehak


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Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
hiii dear...awsm confession...just amazing... love it...continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh my god!!!! She confessed. I'm flying over the moon.😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome. .
Finally she confessed..
Really excited for next
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly

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