hey writer first of all i m so sorry for commenting so late 😭
bt i was stuck somwhere so cant make it up
ok so now coming to d updates 😆
omg
chapter 11
lyk seriously
u were super duper perfect
👏
i mean u left me speechless
it was amazing update
manan ki convo ufff so perfect na n its only coz of u
😉
nw mukbhi will b together gud 😊
so, the trust scene n manik's confession was beautiful
😳
n ya manik's idea of posting d pic was very unique
loved it n d caption too , d sunrise scene uff kya bolu mai 😆
so cute n hahahahah greedy manik aur chahiye
last bt not d least cabir ka caption hahahaha
khaha se aate h aise brilliant ideas tum ko
must say dat ur creative skills r amazing
hatts off to u
😊
u just killed it
d update was dam dam dam dam FANTASTIC
so coming to chapter 12
ofcourse it was
upto d mark
breakfast scene n cabir ka taunt lol 😃
rofel
cant stop laughing
🤣
swimming scene
again wanna compliment u for ur skills 👏
as u kept d character to what they r
i mean most of d tym writer goes off d track
to show some bold scene
bt u didnt go
as nandani is a shy typo char n u beautifully conveyed it n to compromise d romantic pool scene u gave us d room wala scene
that was my take on ur write up rest
i dont know what u thought while writing
uff bahut bolti hu na mai i knw bt kya karu acha
now , back to d update
hawtt hunter manik n shy prey nandu 😳
deadly combo
d sweet tortures were very nyc
u very well wrote d cozy scene
i could visualise it very well
n it s only coz of u
👍🏼👏
so i hope
i m able to tell to that
in short d updates were mesmerizing
n
u did a WONDERFUL JOB
i really loved both d updates
i was really impressed by ur writing skills 😊
keep it up
hoping to see u soon with yet another rocking update
loads of love
yashika
Anupamaa
Kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu Thi 2
