MANAN SS :#1 LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL:Journey frm MsMurthy 2 MrsMalhotra - Page 95

Originally posted by: yashikalily

hey writer

first of all i m so sorry for commenting so late 😭

bt i was stuck somwhere so cant make it up

ok so now coming to d updates 😆

omg

chapter 11

lyk seriously

u were super duper perfect

👏

i mean u left me speechless

it was amazing update

manan ki convo ufff so perfect na n its only coz of u

😉

nw mukbhi will b together gud 😊

so, the trust scene n manik's confession was beautiful

😳

n ya manik's idea of posting d pic was very unique

loved it n d caption too , d sunrise scene uff kya bolu mai 😆

so cute n hahahahah greedy manik aur chahiye

last bt not d least cabir ka caption hahahaha

khaha se aate h aise brilliant ideas tum ko

must say dat ur creative skills r amazing

hatts off to u

😊

u just killed it

d update was dam dam dam dam FANTASTIC

so coming to chapter 12

ofcourse it was

upto d mark

breakfast scene n cabir ka taunt lol 😃

rofel

cant stop laughing

🤣

swimming scene

again wanna compliment u for ur skills 👏

as u kept d character to what they r

i mean most of d tym writer goes off d track

to show some bold scene

bt u didnt go

as nandani is a shy typo char n u beautifully conveyed it n to compromise d romantic pool scene u gave us d room wala scene

that was my take on ur write up rest

i dont know what u thought while writing

uff bahut bolti hu na mai i knw bt kya karu acha

now , back to d update

hawtt hunter manik n shy prey nandu 😳

deadly combo

d sweet tortures were very nyc

u very well wrote d cozy scene

i could visualise it very well

n it s only coz of u

👍🏼👏

so i hope

i m able to tell to that

in short d updates were mesmerizing

n

u did a WONDERFUL JOB

i really loved both d updates

i was really impressed by ur writing skills 😊

keep it up

hoping to see u soon with yet another rocking update

loads of love

yashika

Update was sweet... *_* update next part soon

So cute one

Hey dear,
Though the update was short but it was awesome.
Manik's that pic during swimming that was too hot yar.
Manan moment was really nice.
Good job dear.
Waiting for the nxt update.
With Lots of love.

amazing update...
manik can't stay away from her...
always find some xcuse to meet her...
but loved them way too much...
manik wants her to swim with him...
continue soon...
stay blessed...

absolutely its too good...keep updating ...superb😳

u dont need to

Nice update. Chotu sa tha par cute Sa episode . Looking some more manan moments before wedding

Superb update...

Supeeb update abha..