MANAN SS :#1 LIFE IS BEAUTIFUL:Journey frm MsMurthy 2 MrsMalhotra - Page 52

Originally posted by: manan_0711

Hey came across ur story...

Its beautiful...

Loved all d parts...

Manan r so cute...

But one request...plz make nandu call manik as tum only n not aap... it's kinda weird...so plz if u can do dat...n if possible let manik only ask her to call him as tum... plz pls...

Plz continue soon...

ll' b waiting for d update...

Originally posted by: sneha_glamarous

Wow awesome update...

Manik is soo caring...he didn't hd his lunch becoz Nandu also didn't had... WOW... SO SWEET OF HIM...

Nandu was soo happy to see manik in college...

Jst hope this avinash don't do anything nasty..PLZZZ DON'T SPOIL TEACHER N STUDENT RELATION...AS WAS IN THE KYY... PLZZZ

Manan had fun at beach...SO NICE IT WAS...N THEIR TALK ON THE BEACH...
MERA NAAM LEKE BOLAON NANDU... awww

Luved Manan room scene...
Manan r soo romantic...
Luved it...

waiting for next update...
Thnx for pm.. Update soon...

Originally posted by: yashikalily

omg

omg

omg

omg

omg

👏

it was not upto d mark only

bt it was beyond perfection

u nailed it

😊😉

dam amazing

i just loved it to d core

n ya manan romance was very beautiful n ur pics were just lyk 😳

fuel to d fire

mindblowing update

for me it was one of ur best chapis

n ya

just a suggestion plz show some family scenes n convo too

they r little less

i mean some nok jhok, teasing n all

i hope u wont mind its my opinion baki its ur wish

super duper awesome parts

yashika

Originally posted by: Monstuholic4evr

Okay this is going to be a chotu sa comment but I have every aspect of the update to mention.
First of all the beginning of the update with Manik and Nandini's call and Manik rushing to his girl for lunch, given the circumstances... That's like so sweet and my most favourite part of the update.

Then Avinash and Manik face off was a treat again.. And the way Avinash got angry seeing MaNan lost was a treat...

I read that part of the update.. So so much

Then Manik taking her for lunch and then beach was very sweet of him.
In addition he heard Nandini's side of the story and understood her and made her feel better... That was so considerate of him. And that's real love for me. Not judging her, he just stood by her side.

Manik playing with Nandini's hand, I just find this gesture so endearing. I always add it in the stories I write too :p

The last part was nice too...

Okay.. This turned out to be a fairly long comment too.. Patting my back myself ;)

Will I sound too greedy if I ask for an update soon?

Love
Nandini