Voyage: A Manik-Nandini Fiction| *Completed* Ch11, Pg 27

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wonderstar13

@wonderstar13

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Posted: 9 years ago

#91

Finally!good or bad he is into it for good now.

Thanks for the pm.

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jainishah061997

@jainishah061997

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Posted: 9 years ago

#92

Nice chapter ...but it was very small!!!!
Pls nxt time update a big one. 😊

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SNEHA

@snow_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#93

hmmm interesting ...stage 1 is complete thats good

now what is the matter wid nandini

curious now

and ya i m pretty much interested in the story

would like to read more

thanks for the pm😊

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Manya

@manya_189

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#94

Ok so i so love the drabbles!
And you write so well!
The way u have portrayed his confusion is somewhat relatable ( as in for me :p )
Totally loving it!

P.S. I had read all the three chapter now! Sp would be glad to receive PM's of the updates :) have send the Buddy Request already ^__^

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LoveIsManan

@LoveIsManan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#95

That was nice...

And like seriously some really Google's to know is it love?

I haven't heard of something like that though around me...

Nevertheless he has realised that it's beyond friendship but on the shore of love...

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mona

@cmamona

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#96

Hey

Awsmstic chapters...

I don't know what to say...
I m having mixed emotions I m happy to read ur another awsm work... But I m sad dat it is short...
But it is only having maniks pov
R u going to add nandanis pov also...
What she thinks about him...
Did she only like him as abest frnd or she is also confuse like manik...

But it so beautifully penned down...

Manik is so much confused dat he couldn't decide to tell her abt his feelings or not...

Keep smiling
Stay blessed

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#97

I'll edit here on monday if i don forget😳

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Okayyy M back here 😎

Chap - 2

Amazingly penned shenz👏

I really lovedd how u described manik's confusion his feelings abt nandini here😊

And these lines

she was the reason behind his smile, every time - every damn single time. She had managed to bring out a smile on his face, tackled the sadness off him earning a chuckle or bubbles of laughter in response. And a sense of pride filled him when his eyes drew the sight of her happiness, her laughter in few - him ☺️☺️ Brings soo many pheels☺️

I so love Mukti for creating such confusion in his mind 😆😆

Chap-3

Again an amazing chappyyy👏

I can imagine him taking the help of google😆

His fear of losing her is understandable😳

Nandu's call again not another prank is it😊

Well penned shenzieee🤗

I really love this Stage 1,2,3 thingy😊

Sounds interesting😊

Continue soonish wit the Stage 2

Ciao🤗

Edited by Anapneo3003 - 9 years ago

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Zoha Sadaqat

@zohasad2.0

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Posted: 9 years ago

#98

Shenz, I love how he's almost on the brink of accepting it to himself loud and clear.

BTW pliss update Collisions, I'm waiting for it for long!

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: asmi.6
Happy realisation to Mr. Manik Malhotra! Yayy!
It was perect ! ^.^

Yes, Happy realization to him 😆

Thank You, though it wasn't perfect.

Originally posted by: DhruShti
Okay. .This time am late. .

And you are too early. . Like i loved the pace of ur updating. .

And about the update manik and his confusion. .

I never a thought a confusion can be explained this beautifully. .

I liked the way you portrayed manik. . Literally in a big dilemma. .
But finally happy realization Manik Malhotra

His fear is also correct if she just walks out of his life, that would break him. .

And m sure there would be another surprise for him and this time he will freak out i guess. .

Continue soon. .

Lots of love
Take care

Thank You!

No you are not late and neither am I too early. I think the pace of updating comes with the advantage that I don't have to present a long update. So there's less of planning to be done and I can just type whatever fits in.

You think confusion was beautiful? Thanks but I had some other word to describe it, which I must say was somewhat opposite to what you'd describe ;P

I hope his freaking out or not, you people do not freak out with whatever Nandini has done this time ;P

Originally posted by: LoveIsManan
That was nice...
And like seriously some really Google's to know is it love?
I haven't heard of something like that though around me...
Nevertheless he has realised that it's beyond friendship but on the shore of love...

Thank You!

Trust me, people do Google to find whether it's love or not. Well, even I got to do some digging in for the information at from Google. But you know what, nothing helps.

Let's see where his realization takes him. 😉

Originally posted by: cmamona
Hey

Awsmstic chapters...

I don't know what to say...
I m having mixed emotions I m happy to read ur another awsm work... But I m sad dat it is short...
But it is only having maniks pov
R u going to add nandanis pov also...
What she thinks about him...
Did she only like him as abest frnd or she is also confuse like manik...

But it so beautifully penned down...

Manik is so much confused dat he couldn't decide to tell her abt his feelings or not...

Keep smiling
Stay blessed

Hey, Thanks. I am glad you like the work. However, I also understand that it's short and people don't really wish to read small updates. It seems like a waste of time. But to maintain a steady pace for the updates, I gotta do this. Though, you are free to choose whether you need to continue to read or not, or you wish to read at every weekend or when it ends. It's absolutely your choice. I'd be fine with your decision.

AS I said, it is Manik's journey from Realization to Confession. Yes, Nandini is very much an integral part of it but her views would be concealed. Because if I reveal what Nandini's thoughts are, there wouldn't be any suspense or curiosity left among the readers. There would be an ultimate opinion as to what happens on the day when he confesses and what she'd answer.

And I do not wish like spoiling that.

Though, you'd be able to read about her reactions to his actions and her vague comments. Basically, you'll live the mystery along with Manik and be exposed to the unveiling of mystery as Manik does.

I hope this answers.

Thanks once again.

Edited by -shenz- - 9 years ago

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#100

Originally posted by: Lizbeth
Going good

Thank You!!

Originally posted by: peehu99
Nice STory.. update pls

Thank You!! I am updating, relax!

Originally posted by: suraiya77
Awesome
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Amazin'
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Mindblowin'
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Fantastic
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Fabulous update
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Loved it

Thanks I am glad you loved it! ^_^

Originally posted by: wonderstar13
Finally!good or bad he is into it for good now.
Thanks for the pm.

Thank You. Let's see whether it's for good or not! :P

Originally posted by: zohasad2.0
Shenz, I love how he's almost on the brink of accepting it to himself loud and clear.

BTW pliss update Collisions, I'm waiting for it for long!

Thanks, Zoha!

I know, all you people have been waiting for it for long - Collision, that is. But I seriously beg you all to be patient for a few more days, I am sorting it out. I am stuck at one particular point and I don't really know what to present next. There are ten scenarios but nothing is good enough to actually go for it. I am really sorry but you've got to wait for some more time. Please, pretty please. 🤓

Edited by -shenz- - 9 years ago