Voyage: A Manik-Nandini Fiction| *Completed* Ch11, Pg 27

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: jainishah061997
Nice chapter ...but it was very small!!!!
Pls nxt time update a big one. 😊

Thank You. And I am sorry for the small updates. But I'd hate to break this to you, however, I need to, that this is how this story would be.

Originally posted by: snow_manan
hmmm interesting ...stage 1 is complete thats good
now what is the matter wid nandini
curious now
and ya i m pretty much interested in the story
would like to read more
thanks for the pm😊

Thank You!! Well, you'll get to know about matter(s) with Nandini as and when the story unfolds, till then - Patience,

You'll get to read more and of course, the PMs too.

Originally posted by: manya_189
Ok so i so love the drabbles!
And you write so well!
The way u have portrayed his confusion is somewhat relatable ( as in for me :p )
Totally loving it!

P.S. I had read all the three chapter now! Sp would be glad to receive PM's of the updates :) have send the Buddy Request already ^__^

Thank You! I am glad people love drabbles.

Its good that you can relate to the confusion and you think that I do write well. Means, I've somehow managed to convey his confusions well.

PS: It's absolutely fine. Even if you wouldn't have sent me a buddy request you would have received the PMs anyway. About receiving the PMs, you'd receive one for the upcoming chapter :)

Originally posted by: Anapneo3003
I'll edit here on monday if i don forget😳
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Okayyy M back here 😎

Chap - 2

Amazingly penned shenz👏
I really lovedd how u described manik's confusion his feelings abt nandini here😊
And these lines

she was the reason behind his smile, every time - every damn single time. She had managed to bring out a smile on his face, tackled the sadness off him earning a chuckle or bubbles of laughter in response. And a sense of pride filled him when his eyes drew the sight of her happiness, her laughter in few - him ☺️☺️ Brings soo many pheels☺️

I so love Mukti for creating such confusion in his mind 😆😆

Chap-3

Again an amazing chappyyy👏
I can imagine him taking the help of google😆
His fear of losing her is understandable😳
Nandu's call again not another prank is it😊
Well penned shenzieee🤗

I really love this Stage 1,2,3 thingy😊
Sounds interesting😊
Continue soonish wit the Stage 2

Ciao🤗

Thanks Aishu!! 🤗

Do your exams well, girl!

Don't you think your love for Mukti is growing with each passing day! 🤣

Well, I can imagine most of the people taking the help of Google ;P

Thank You so much!! I am continuing!! 😛

Edited by -shenz- - 9 years ago

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Shahnaz

@ShenzK

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

I am in a rush, but I apologize for the chapter being this idiotic? Because I for one, do not understand what or why have I even typed a chapter like this. Though I'd try to make the next chapter better and not cringe-worthy.

Stage II {Steps}

Chapter Four

He entered her apartment only to find her sprawled on the floor, with her back resting against the bed. The sight in front of him made his heart clench and he swore it ached pretty bad. She wore a slight cut across her jaw and the corner of her mouth bleeding. She had hit hard to sport a swollen ankle.

She vaguely explained that she had slipped across the bathroom floor, while searching for something in the uppermost cabinet which was undoubtedly out of her reach. Surprisingly her roommate was out of town, so she had reached to her knight in shining armour for help. He was like her personal helpline number, if she didn't know where to reach out for help, he was the only way out for her. When she'd have no one around, the only person she rings up is him.

If this didn't mean anything, he was clueless what did.

He was clueless how one could be careless enough to slip flat on their bathroom floors. Shaking his head to clear his thoughts, he padded to where she lay. Bending down, he spooned her into his arms and carried her out, directly to hospital, inspite of her protest.

The injuries were minor but he was furious with the mere thought about the injuries being major. His thoughts travelled to the space where his worries multiplied.

She behaved cranky throughout, while he was the one who was supposed to be cranky. She would have now been sporting a fractured leg, had the injury been serious. And if that would have been the case, he would have prepared himself for accusing her of being careless.

Though, her ankle had just sprained, he carried her in his arms. She scrunched her nose in distaste and commented, "You know, it's a minor sprain," not receiving any reply from the concerned person, she poked his shoulder, "Manik," that did the trick. His eyes trailed from the path he was walking on, to hers, "I can walk."

He wasn't going to let her walk, "So?" His concern was that she would stress her ankle and end up hurting it more, while she protested that she would do completely fine. But the question was, whether he really doing this for her hurt ankle?

Somewhere deep down he knew the answer as well, no matter how much his brain chanted that it was just for her well being.

"So?" She yelled throwing her hands up in surrender, "So put me down," she suggested.

Though, her voice held warning, he conveniently ignored it. "I won't."

"You are being bossy," she spat pointedly. A smile crept across his features as her words hit him. Yes, he was bossy; and he'd be for her.

Only for you, he thought.

"If that's what you call being caring, then," he shrugged in fake disappointment. He could change shades with smooth transitions - from being serious to playful, from concerned to mock disappointment - he had mastered it all.

"I wouldn't have to be, if someone wasn't being immature." Her jaws hung open at the insult directed at her, her eyes held his interrogatively as she shook her head at him.

"You just did not call me immature," just like her big round eyes, her words held surprise.

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Gently placing her on the bed, he moved back, "Do you want me to stay back?" However, he really wished she allowed. He wasn't willing to leave her alone when she could barely walk with his support. Things were worse with her roommate's absence. For him, choosing to stay back and accompany felt like the right thing. Though, no one can ever define what goes through a girl's head, whatever one's intention be.

"Sure," she casually rolled a shoulder into a shrug and added further, "I'd like to have some company when I am bored." Her face broke into a mischievous grin.

A minute later, she turned with a thoughtful expression and said, "Though, you are not going to behave like a bossy jerk who thinks to be in charge of anything and everything?"

His smile widened at her question and he stared into her questioning eyes, "that I can't promise." Before disappearing out of her sight, he playfully winked at her as the pillow she aimed at him went slamming across the adjacent door.

Chapter 5

That's all. I will send out the PMs later, right now I am in a rush.

Edited by -shenz- - 8 years ago

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filter.coffee

@filter.coffee

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#103

res will comment later.kinda unwell.also disturbed :/

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LoveIsManan

@LoveIsManan

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#104

That was good..

He can do anything for her..

He has realised his feelings but is not bringing it on the surface...

Good ...

Let see what stored in the next installment...

Stay blessed darling..

Keep giving us this good work of yours..

Lots of love

Diksha

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kneha25

@kneha25

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#105

he is realising his feelings but not accepting...anyways nyc update

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Drashtiii

@Drashtiii

Navigator

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Ahh. . Wrong guess. .

I guessed the call would be surprise for him,
but to my surprise, she really was in need of help. .

Caring and mocking is a treat to read. .

Now that he is staying with her lets see what happens next. .

Continue soon. .

Lots of love.

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asmi.6

@asmi.6

Navigator

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Nice!😊

I am in a rush too, so reserving my long comment for later!

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SNEHA

@snow_manan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#108

amazing chapter

i like worried manik that too specially for nandini

just shows how much he love her

thanks for the pm😊

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aishwarya

@Dreamer3003

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#109

Amazing update again

He is indeed her knight in shining armour

Love this caring and protective side of him for her😳

Continue soonish Shenzie😛

And abt loving mukti😆

i loved her n ur story for asking such a question to him😛😆

Everyone takes help of google but Manik taking the help of that is something surprising for me😛

Thanx Shenz hope i do my remaining exams well😊

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mona

@cmamona

Voyager

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#110

Hey

It was beautiful...
Yup he is really a master in changing his expression... Dats y he is a expression king...

He is just so awsm...
He is really cute when he just fight with her just to annoy her or to tease her...
And ur explanations are really making him more cute...
He was carrying nandani and she said to put her down he behave bossy... So good yr...

And abt ur short update so let me tell you
I m definitely so in love with dis chotu and cute se updates...
And ya I understood whatever u said...
And trust me I love to read it bit by bit as it is updated...

And gives me trill and excitement dat now what's gonna happen...

I m loving it...

And I will wait till it came to confession day...
And I would love to wait till then ...
So don't worry I will be here...
And stick to ur story... :)

Keep smiling
Stay blessed