MANAN FS AGAR TUM SATH HO BANNER ADDED ON PG 153 - Page 26

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: navla

Amazing update...
manik is not came home ...all r worried for him...
nyonika loves nandu lot n cares for her...
manik came to nandini room ...all r relex after looking at him...
Manik didnot spoke to anyone & directly went n sleep in nandini lap...All r happy watching their bond...they knw each other abt every single thg...
but manik didnt realise his feeling for her...
manik was angry on nadu...but nandu want to realise tht after marriage he will b alone...
manik cute antics...love it..
manik ignore aryaman n sleep in nandu lap...
manik shoked listening abt the reality tht she leave no ther for him permanently...
keep smiling ...


Summary in short 😊 thank u so much...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rimsha01

Yeh manik itna idiot kb ho gya. Kuch samajh kyu ni raha. Plz issey jldi thodi akal do yaar.

Nd i so wanna know what nandini meant when she said ki voh aesi bht saari chize ni kr skte jo phle krte the. Aesa kya krte the Manan
Nd i hope aryamann smjhe nd he wont marry nandini.
Oh please manan ko jldi mila do. I cant bear any distance between manan.
Nd dear Anu
Yaar u used to update daily. Ab kya ho gya. I know there would be somethings in ur life keeping you busy but if not daily atleast weekly twice to update kro. Please be our good writer like before. I really miss reading ur stories daily. Please be like before nd give regular updates with more nd more Manan.😃



akal dene ki koshish karri hoon par wo sune thab na...batha doon batha doon naa khud hi sochlo akhir wo log karthe kya the..don't worry u will get to know everything soon...i know dear am updating rarely par trust me am trying maximum to post regularly...am sry for making u wait par i promise i will surely try not to make u wait more...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anumanan



Lol let's just chuck it for now...we will continue this later...personally...


Lol😛👍🏼😆
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Vidhiarora1

God i seriously can't understand manik's behavior
Y can't he understand dat he loves nandu

Problem kya h


Plzzz pretty pretty please solve the mystery sooon jaldi post karna yr eagerly waiting for next part dear

Hope aryamaan becomes the cupid for our manan

Eagerly waiting for manan's wedding day yr


Post asap


Don't worry you will get to know everything soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kanika28

Thanks for updating..after a long time..

Now to start from the update..
Loved nandinis parents bonding with manik..
And manik parents bonding with nandini..
Nandini parents always defends and support manik same is the case with manik parents..it good to see soo strong bond..
Angry manik was soo cute..he was behaving like a small baby..n bechara aryaman manik ne usee bhi nahi choda..
Manan conversatiom was nice..
I hope now he realise his mistake..
Keep it up..
Well done.


Thank u so much...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: reet0143

hey thanks for the pm...


i just came across to the story.,...

maine padhi nahi thi...

but after reading it i wanna speciallly thank u that u pm me

such a superb concept

manik nandu se pyar karta hai lekin usse is baat ka ehsaas hi nahi hai

uske bina sab jaante hai bs ek vo hi samajh nahi pa raha

use kisi ke saath dekh nahi sakta ...

khane ke liye nandu chahiye

ek baar usne manik ko manaya nahi...uske piche nahi gayiii

aaryaman ke saath dekh kar itna gussa ho gya

to use samajh mein nahi a raha k it's love

pata nahi kitna aur time lega ye realise karne mein

but i think nandu ke behaviour se usse jaldi realise ho jayega

amazing chapter

pls continue soon

thanks

keep shining

stay blessed

Reet


Thank u so much...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: daddysjaan

oh my my... ds is such a amazing story... manik loves nandini...he is so possessive. but usse realise nae ho raha... plz pls update jaldi se


Awww thank u so much...
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 3A :

The entire night passed but neither HE could sleep nor SHE...

He was sitting on ground leaning to bed looking towards door not blinking his eyes for once as if his MISHTEE would walk back to him saying that she was joking and didn't meant a single word...

Door gets opened and his hopeful eyes immediately turn into a sad one seeing preethi standing at door instead of his MISHTEE...

preeti walks towards him and settles beside him while he still sits in the same position looking towards door...

"wo nahi aayi" and he utters in a low voice looking towards door...

"Rath se intezar karra hoon par ab thak nahi aayi" and he almost whispers as if talking to himself without blinking his eyes...

"manikkk" and preeti calls him controlling her eyes...

"yehi pe thi wo...kal rath...dekh na apne..." and he speaks slowly turning towards her...

"patha hain...wo kehri thi ki ab hamare beech pehle jaisa kuch nahi ho saktha hain...ham pehle jaise sath nahi reh sakthe hain...wo... woo aise kaise keh sakthi hain..." and he continuous to speak making preethi hard to control her tears...

"aap...aap janthe hain na...ham ham ek gante se zyada kabhi alag nahi rahe hain...main kaise rahunga uske bina...wo kaise rahegi mere bina" and he holds her hands letting his tears flow down

"tu khud chahtha tha ki uski shadi ho tho kya thab tune ye sab nahi socha" and she finally asks him a question which was torturing her silently since long...

"nahi...nahi...mujhe nahi patha tha ki wo aise mujhe dhoka degi" and he answers innocently nodding his head

dhoka???? and she becomes completely shocked...

haan...mujhe laga hamare beech kuch nahi badlega...mujhe laga meri MISHTEE hamare beech kuch badal ne degi hi nahi...mujhe laga chahe kuch bi ho ham usi tharah rahenge jaisa rehthe aye hain...par nahi wo badal gayi...usne mujhe dhoka de diya and he blabbers making her numb at her place...

usne aisa kyu ki...boliye na...usne mujhe dhoka kyu diya...ab..main kya karu...kya hoga mera and he shouting loud shakes her crying badly...

"Kya mere ek sawal ka jawab dega" and she asks him calmly looking into his eyes

Manik looks her blinking his eyes while she taking it as a yes continues further "kya tu nandini se pyar kartha hain"

He leaves her hands and without answering anything turns his head silently...

"nahi na...tho phir tujhe kuch nahi hoga..." and she smiling faintly utters slowly making him look her...

"par agar tujhe usse pyar hain aur tu ye bath jantha nahi...tho phir tera kya hoga...wo koyi nahi batha saktha hain...shayad tu khud bi nahi..." and she finally completes letting her tears roll down making manik froze at his place...

"rath se soya nahi hain...thodi der aram karle" and she kissing his forhead walks out silently leaving a numb manik behind...

nandu was sitting on ground leaning to bed same like manik in HIS house, HIS room thinking about him crying silently...

Nyonika heart skips a beat seeing her like that and gathering a lot of courage slowly walking towards her "nandu"

she looks her with teary eyes but says nothing...

Nyonika sits on her knees infront of her and slowly wiping away her tears nods her head as a no...

"wo nahi reh saktha mere bina...wo jee nahi payega..." and she mutters in a mere audible tone looking nyonika not letting her tears stop for once...

nyonika takes her into a bone crashing hug rubbing her back continuously sobbing silently while nandu hugs her back even more tightly crying loudly...

After sometime hearing no crying sound nyonika slowly breaks the hug opening her eyes only to find a unconscious nandu lying in her arms...

nandu...nandu...and she pats her cheeks crying loudly and then shouts on top of her voice raj...raj...

raj comes running and seeing nandini unconscious quickly makes her lie on bed without saying anything while nyonika calls their family docter asking him to come soon...

Within no time FAB 4,rakesh,preeti including aryaman family every one reach there except manik and get worried seeing nandu lying unconscious inspite of trying again and again to wake her up...

NYONIKA : aap aap phir ek baar call kijiye na docter ko

RAJ : haan haan main kar tha hoon

PREETI : nandu...nandu...ut beta...ankhe kol... please... nandu... nandu...

MUKTHI : aap aise pareshan math huyiye sambaliye na khud ko

KABIR : nandu ko kuch nahi hoga

RAKESH : nandu jaan ut na please dekh yaha sab kitne pareshan hain ek baar ankhe kol dekh ham sabko please beta nandu...nandu...

DHRUV : ye docter kyu nahi aara

RAJ : phone try karra hoon main par shayad drive karra hain isliye call uta nahi raha hain

DAMINI : agar koyi aur docter paas main hain tho unhe bula lijiye na

ARYAMAN : yaha paas ke ek docter ko main jantha hoon rukiye

ALIA : nandini...nandiniii...please wake up na...

NYONIKA : beta please anke kol nandu...nandu...

ARYAMAN : maine unhe msg kar diya hain wo are hain

MISHTEE...and every one turns towards door only to witness a panting manik malhotra with pale face looking hell horrified who came running like a manic forgetting everything as soon as hearing news of her unconsciousness from a servant...

Reaching near her in seconds he simply scoops her in his arms without wasting a second and runs out ever so speedly not paying any heed to everyone's shouts behind him...

shock would be an underestimate for aryaman,damini and roshan while everyone else sigh as it was not a new sight for them...

DHRUV : hame chelna chahiye

KABIR : haan

RAKESH : main gadi nikal tha hoon

PREETI : chel nyonika

NYONIKA : aryaman

ARYAMAN : haaa haa cheliye

Every one walks out silently as nandu was more important to them at that particular condition...

uncle...uncle... and manik runs inside the hospital holding his mishtee protectively...

"manik...am sry emergency agaya tha main bas nikal ne hi vala tha"

uncle jaldi cheliye na dekhiye mishtee ankhen kol hi nahi rahi hain and he pleads having tears in his eyes...

"Haan chel" and they run into a room while everyone too reaches there at the same time...

RAJ : wo dekh manik andar jara

RAKESH : haan chel

Manik makes nandu lie on bed carefully while everyone too enter inside the room being hell worried...

RAJ : kya hua meri bachi ko

"mujhe dekhne de aur chintha math kar"

PREETI : please jaldi kijiye na

"Haan aap sab bahar intezar kijiye please"

everyone stands looking manik who was holding her hand with his left one...continously patting her cheek with his right hand... ever so gently... not moving an inch... instead of walking out...

HE was not going to move...never ever...as his breath got stucked seeing her like that...hence without paying attention to anything he was busy trying to wake up his MISHTEE the only one who could help him breath normally again...

Even docter knew how important his MISHTEE was for HIM...as he was looking them both since their childhood...so without wasting any time understanding the situatation he once again pleads everyone to stay out while everyone still stand looking manik without blinking their eyes...

"Problem kya hain...sunayi nahi detha kya...jayiye bahar" and HE shouts ever so loudly making his voice echo in the room and everyone walk out instantly bringing them into senses...

With in no time docter checks nandu and "manik relax zyada chintha karne ki bath nahi hain... bohuth weak hogayi hain nandu tho isliye behosh ho gayi...maine injection de diya hain... kuch hi der main usse hosh ajayega"

"Kitni der" and he asks instantly looking her

"bas kuch das pandra minute ya shayad usse bi pehle"

manik doesn't say anything while docter simply walks out not wanting to disturb him...

PREETI : docter nandu

"Wo teek hain...thodi der baad usse hosh ayega...thab thak intezar kijiye"

RAJ : kya ham use mil sakthe hain

"Am sry raj philal ke liye sab nahi bas do ya teen log ander ja sakthe hain"

RAJ : teek hain thnx

"Your most welcome...main thodi der baad phir ake check kartha hoon" and leaves

RAJ : rakesh thu pehle preeti ke sath ja

PREETI : nahi bayya aap dono jayiye

RAJ : nahi teek hain pehle tum dono jao

Rakesh and preeti walk inside only to get more hurt seeing manik sitting beside nandu holding her hand crying silently

They say nothing and lightly pecking nandu forhead walk out immediately as he was with her and which is the only thing she needed at that moment...

PREETI : nyonika

ROSHAN : rakesh aryaman nandu se milna chahtha hain

DAMINI : wo bohuth pareshan hain uski hone vali patni ko aise halath main dekh kar

Tears fill in nyonika eyes and she controlling herself "beta jaa na mile nandu se"

ARYAMAN : nahi aunty main teek hoon

RAJ : nahi beta jaa ek baar dekh ke aaja nandu ko

ARYAMAN : nahi wo main

DAMINI : itna kyu formal banra... hak hain tera...jaa

ARYAMAN : maa

ROSHAN : jaa aryaman

ARYAMAN : teek hain

Fab 4 who were witnessing everything silently walk out not being able to control their tears while preeti and rakesh look nyonika and raj with guilty eyes...

Aryaman enters inside the room and slowly walks towards nandu all the time having his eyes on manik...

He stands beside nandini and gets surprised to see manik condition instead of nandu's

He simply without saying anything walks out silently having a quick glance of manan...

das pandra minute ho gaye... mishtee ko ab thak hosh kyu nahi aya and he questions as soon as docter enters into room listening to his shout along with others...

Docter sighs and gesturing everyone to once again walk out reaches near nandu and ajayega manik don't worry

Kab and he questions back

Nandu starts moving slightly and seeing her move he makes his grip tighter on her hands waiting for her to open her eyes making docter smile seeing him...

Finally tilting her head left and right several times she opens her eyes ever so lazily only to get locked with her favourite chocolate paired eyes which belonged to none other than her jaan...

she gets up slowly taking his help and he without thinking once takes her into a bone crashing hug immediately hiding his face in crook of her neck closing his eyes crying loud...

she closes her eyes rubbing his back with her one hand and caressing his hairs with the other while he too was doing nothing different from her...
Docter walks out while fab 4 too reaches back near room controlling themselves...

NYONIKA : hosh agaya kya nandu ko

nahi...ab thak nahi...

DAMINI : hame shayad thoda aur vakth intezar karna padega

ROSHAN : docter kya ham nandini ko dekh sakthe hain

nahi...nahi...abi bi nahi am sryyy and he excusing himself quickly messages to kabir

kabir after checking the msg comes forward and aryaman gar pe guests intezar karre hain aur hamara parivar pura ka pura yaha hain...uncle aunty tho nandu ko chodke nahi ayenge tho isliye kya tum hamare sath gar cheloge thaki we handle them together...

DAMINI : beta tum yaha ruko main aur tere papa jayenge inke sath

KABIR : nahi aunty...dulhan nahi hain tho at least dulha tho hona chahiye na...gar pe

ROSHAN : haan par

KABIR : uncle vaise bi yaha hame andar nahi jane dere tho yaha rehke bi kya faida

DAMINI : teek hain phir aap log jayiye main rukthi hoon

KABIR : nahi aunty aap kaise ruk sakthe hain hame cheze samjane ke liye apka hona zaruri hain

ARYAMAN : teek hain na maa cheliye

ROSHAN : rakesh ham chelthe hain phone karthe rehna

RAKESH : teek hain

DAMINI : aap nahi chelenge

NYONIKA : jee preethi akeli hojayegi aap log jayiye ham yahi rukenge

DAMINI : teek hain

Kabir gestures FAB 3 to follow him silently who were looking him with doubt full eyes

aryaman notices this and slowly after walking half way behind them simply runs back and reaches near nandu room again...

NYONIKA : patha nahi kya kel kelra bagwan

RAJ : shhh sambalo khud ko

PREETI : kya galthi hogayi mere bachon se jo unhe itna pareshan karra hain wo

RAKESH : bas bas chup hoja

NYONIKA : kyu kyu sirf mere bache hi

RAJ : shhh deere deere

If hearing them all was one shock then seeing sight infront of him was another one for aryaman who entered into room finding no one outside the room...

One damn whole night...they haven't seen each other...they haven't cuddled with each other... they haven't slept with each other... and hence as soon as getting their peace back that is each other arms they drift into sleep cuddling with each other lying on bed automatically forgetting everything else...




Chelo katham hogayi update ab jaldi bathao kaisa laga...am waiting...keep smiling...stay blessed...tc...

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Posted: 9 years ago
This is the best till date. .
I really loved it. .
Manik really loves nandini. But hasn't realised that. .
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
IT was very emotional.
Like it.
Hope Manik will soon realize his feeling for Nandini.

Waiting or next Part.

Please PM me ones u upload next part.


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