MANAN FS AGAR TUM SATH HO BANNER ADDED ON PG 153

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Holaaa people...lo main phir agayi tum logon ka dimak kaane hehehe...I guess kuch log janthe hain mujhe aur jo log nahi janthe for them let me introuduce myself i am anu one of the fan of MANAN like you all...now coming to the point getting an idea dont from where here i am writing a four shot on our very own MANAN...dont wana irritate you more so here you go with the prologue...do let me know how it is...

PROLOGUE :

A guy wearing a black shirt and torn jeens was sitting on a couch with his eyes closed rubbing his forhead with his two fingers while four people (two girls and two boys) were standing exactly opposite to him looking him without blinks their eyes...

one of the boy moves a little close to couch and "abi bi vakth hain"

second boy moves further and "ham situatation ko handle kar sakthe hain..."

girls take a deep breath and speaks one after the other "ek baar aur iske baare main soch..." "aur phir phaisla le...!!!"

kisse bath karre ho tum sab??? a women walks into room wearing a angry glare all the time looking the guy on couch...

aunty...!!!! one of the boys starts speaking...

nahi kabir iss bar nahi and the women nods her head...

dekiye aunty...another boy tries to speak only to get stopped in between again...

dhruv...!!!! and women raises her hand gesturing to stop all the time looking the guy infront of him...

girls close their eyes and moving close to the women sleep on her shoulder on either sides letting tears flow down their eyes

alia...mukthi...please...and women cups their cheek with her both hands...

ALIA : ye samaj nahi raha hain

MUKTHI : khud apne hatho se sab barbad karra hain

women closes her eyes and then slowly opening them bahar sab intezar karre hain patha hain main kitne der se tum logon ko dund ri hoon

ALIA : wo hum

kair chodo aur chelo bohuth kaam pada hain vaha par and saying this women quickly wipes alia and mukthi's tears...

Nyonikaaa...!!!!!!

women turns and raj aap yaha kya karre ho...

RAJ : tumhe bulane aaya hoon vaha preethi sab akele hi karri hain

NYONIKA : acha aap cheliye main ari hoon

raj walks into room instead of going out and kya hogaya hain meri pyari betiyon ko

nyonika sighs and gestures to the guy sitting on the couch who was still sitting in the same position

RAJ : beta sach ko jitna jaldi accept karlo utna hi hamare liye acha hoga

MUKTHI : ye sab acha nahi hora hain

ALIA : hame ye bilkul pasandh nahi hain

RAJ : ye sab kisi ko bi pasandh nahi hain beta par kya kare jo insan vaha aram se baita hain na ye sab usi ki vajah se hora hain

KABIR : aap ek baar bath kariye na

DHRUV : ek baar samjane ki koshish kariye

Nyonika laughs and kisse...kisse bath kare...iss insan se...jiski ankhe kaam nahi karre hain...kaan sunayi nahi dere hain...isse..!!!!

nyonikaaa and raj side hugging her please bache hain...

nyonika wipes some lone tears and ab kuch nahi ho saktha...issne sab bigad diya hain...

NAHI...NAHI...NAHI...MAINE KUCH NAHI BIGADA HAIN...SUNA AAP SABNE... shouts the guy on top of his voice getting up from the couch...

KYA...KYA GALTHI HAIN MERI HAAN...NAHI KARTHA MAIN MISHTEE SE PYAR...NAHI KARTHA MAIN "NANDINI" SE PYAR...PHIR KYU KYU USSE SHADI KARU...KYU USKI YE SHADI ROKU...BOLO... and the guy continues looking everyone with his blood red eyes...

KABIR : haan sahi kaha tune nahi kartha tu usse pyar NANDINI se pyar...

DHRUV : roj suba uska chehre dekhe bagair ut tha nahi hain

ALIA : aur rath ko uske godh main bina sar rake sotha nahi hain

MUKTHI : par pyar...pyar thodi na kartha hain tu usse nahi nahi...

KABIR : har adhe gante ko usse call kartha hain

DHRUV : uss par nazar raktha hain

ALIA : par tu usse pyar nahi kartha right

MUKTHI : hmmm kana kilane ke liye nandini chahiye...shopping jane ke liye nandini chahiye...picture dekhne ke liye nandini chahiye

KABIR : sube se rath thak har vakth har ek cheez har ek kaam karne ke liye nandini chahiye

DHRUV : magar tu nahi kartha usse pyar...NANDINI se pyar...

ENOUGH...JUST...JUST STOP IT and the guy starts walking without looking anyone

MANIK...!!!!!!! and the guy stops hearing his name from his mother after a very long time...

He turns back while nyonika walks close to him...

NYONIKA :

yaha par kada har ek insan jantha hain ki tu nandini se kitna pyar kartha hain...lekin tu kuch nahi samjega...kyuki tu kuch samaj na chahtha hi nahi hain...

char din...char din bache hain...phir uski shadi ho jayegi...wo kisi aur ki ho jayegi...aur thab...thab tujhe ehsaas hoga...kitna galath hain tu...jab tere samne teri MISHTEE kisi aur ka hath tham kar cheli jayegi...tujhse door...apna sansar basane...thab tu khud se kahega ki kash...kash main ek baar sochtha...ek baar bath kartha...ek baar meri mishtee ko rok letha...

aur meri bathe yaad rak...thab tere paas ansu bahane ke alawa kuch aur option nahi hoga...

Manik stands looking her saying nothing...

NYONIKA : meri beti akeli hain vaha cheliye sab

Everyone leaves while manik stands at the same position as if his legs got frozed...

MANIK :

Kya sab sach kehre hain...kya mujhse bohuth badi galthi hori hain...kya main nandini se meri mishtee se pyar kartha hoon...


Thank u so much jaan aka my dear manandeeplove...and u know why...!!!!!


INDEX

PART 1 - PG 16

PART 2A,2B - PG 27

PART 3A - PG 39

PART 3B - PG 53

PART 3C - PG 63

PART 4A - PG 75

PART 4B - PG 82

PART 4C - PG 123

PART 4D - PG 127

PART 4E - PG 144

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angellovemanan thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
loved it
new concept
manik will regret later
but on the whole awesome update
continue soon
and haan do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res
Unres
Omggg...
MISHTEE😆😛
Finally u updated d prologue...
Loved it sooo much...
Manik MISHTEE ka pyaarrr...oye hoye...❤️😳
Accha chance mara tune😛😆🤣
U knw wht m saying right?😆

Bt seriously loved ittt..
Nandini aka MISHTEE aka Manik ka pyaar ...
Uski shaadi...4 din baad...
Manik is confused abt his feelings for her...
Pata nahi kya chal raha hai iske dimag me...
Hope thodi akal aa jayegi usse ...woh bhi Mishtee ke shaadi se pehle ...😕

Cont soonishhh...
Waiting

PS ab tu mujhe thanx bhi bolegi????😡
Maar khana hai kya?

Edited by manandeeplove - 9 years ago
Knight99 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Waiting for more!
Thanks for pm
manancraze thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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First main to I got confused k yeh kya ho raha hain...
But then jab full update padhi to decision yeh hain ki...BOHAT SAHI HO RAHA HAIN...😃.

Plz cont soon...😛
Edited by manancraze - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Please please update soon eagerly waiting pretty please
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Posted: 9 years ago
#7
Nice start..
Manan seems to be friends..
Nandu is getting married...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#8
Thanks for the pm dear..
Manan seem to be best friends.. And Manik is living in denial I believe..
Interesting prologue...
Nice concept..
Continue soon..
shonkhonil thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#9
updateee...earlyyy... 😳 ..thanxxx..fr d pm...u r a swthrt.. ❤️
annie131 thumbnail
Posted: 9 years ago
#10
Wow
Nice concept
Amazing update
Loving it
Continue soon


Keep smiling
Stay blessed😊

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