MaNan FS -- PAY BACK -- (UPDATED LAST PART) Pg 17 9/1/16 - Page 4

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PART 2



" Strip Yourself "

He ordered . But it sounded like so dirty filthy spat to her face. She just couldn't believe what she had received from him that time.

She promptly turned and stared a glare at him. But her heart sank finding him still unaffected emotionless dark.

" kya hua suna nehi, I said Strip Your Clothes Right Now. "

His sudden cloud breaking shout started echoing into her small room. The humiliated tears started flowing off her eyes.

" ohhh stop your drama. " he shouted again seeing her drenched in tears. And in the next just ripped her shirt roughly to make the buttons scattered around the floor here and there.

Nandini was shocked with his abrupt act. Her mind was continuously asking her to hide herself from that dark monster but surprisingly she just stood there like a living fossil, exposing her lacy skin coloured inner garment . Only the heavy rain of tears were there to support her.

Manik saw her. He was expecting some movement from her side to protest to protect herself. But all he found was a living dead standing crying in front of him.

For sudden moment he felt a deep urge to embrace her taking her all pain. But as expected he did Nothing.

This nothingness again poked the monster inside him and those unexpected soft marks again turned into firm disgust.

" I said stop crying dammit. Can't you get it you timwit? " he shouted jerking her , digging his nails on her shoulder. He just wanted her to react .

While doing so accidentally his hands brushed on her delicate portion. And a sudden current flew down through their spines. That current radiated life to her lifeless body and calmness to those frowns on his forehead.

Both looked at each other not understanding what to do next. That mere touch had affected that much effectiveness that it just left them made baffled.

In the most natural way Manik's hands suddenly started pacing from her shoulder to her arms. And backwards without breaking the eyelock.

The intoxicating effect of alcohol and her intoxicated frame both started overpowering his mind. His fingers then slowly traced her collar bone to upwards till her forehead. She closed her eyes in anticipation. His touch started creating havoc inside her. Her thumping chest were provoking him to the extent.
He leaned more and kissed her neck. It was soft peck at first but experiencing his that mere affect on her , he couldn't stop the monster more inside him and bit her neck harshly imprinting the symbol of the demon of him.

Nandini hissed in pain and clutched his jacket firmly for support. Her hiss made him smirk and he licked the place to sooth her. His saliva on her skin started throwing biggest challenge to her desires and as per this a wild arousal moan escaped from her mouth.

That moan oiled the beast again and he stripped off her shirt , threw it away without showing little mercy to that already tore shirt. He then pulled her iner strap down with his one hand and shamelessly moving his another one on her bare back.

He tilted his head to see her. She had her eyes closed to feel his tempting touch on her desperately.

Manik's eyes then checking out her hummock like delicate part shamelessly which were invoking the passion and without wasting a mere second he placed a open mouth kiss on her cleavage.

Nandini was then equally aroused pulling him towards her as much as possible by pulling his hairs.
He kissed her delicate part over her inner garment. When he was busy giving her pleasure with his kisses , his hands moved her back and about to unclasp her inner , his cell started buzzing with its full potential.

And that's it. The reality slapped them hard . Both of them were equally confused and embarrassed with their abrupt unexpected act.

Manik gasped guiltily then rubbed his face to calm himself and took out of the cell and answered.

" hhheellloo...
what? When? Shit?
How's she?
Wait I am coming...
You take care of her...
I am on my way. " He started panicking.

Nandini understood something bad had happened with his tensed face.

" Manik Manik what happened? " she worriedly asked blocking his way.

" Move !!! " he roared and rushed out of her apartment panicking hard.

*****
Manik's house


" hey princess... hey baby... stop crying... papa is here no. Everything will be alright " Manik started nuzzling his daughter to stop her sob.

" heyy sweetheart please don't cry na. You're my strong baby. Papa loves you. " tears came out on its accord from his eyes seeing his daughter cry.

" Manik don't know why pichle ek ghante se she is crying like hell. I have tried all possible way to make her stop. But don't know what happened with her today. " that girl of her late 20 narrated.

" you are of no use. Ek bachchi nehi sambhali jati tumse? Get the hell out of here. "
He shouted at her frustratingly. She was hurt but yet won't mind with his outrage as for him, his daughter was his entire world. And how vulnerable he became around his daughter. She sighed and keeping the feeder left the room silently praying for the little angel and her dad.

" hey princess ... kya hua bachcha? Mad at papa? "
He cutely asked and that angel pouted in between her sob looking at her dad.

" Papa won't giving you time now a days hain na ? "
He said and that cutie pie frowned slapping his face with her tiny palm still sneezing.

" Sorry baby. " he kissed her palms then continued
" Papa is veryyy sooorryyy. Papaaa won't do it again. Manik promise. " he stopped then changing it said " Myrah promise. "

And his cute baby started clapping giggling giving him the solace he was longing for badly.

Manik kept stroking Myrah's soft silky hears till she fell in slumber. After near half an hour he felt her even breath. He carefully placed her on his bed and kissed the dry tear drops of her chubby baby cheeks. He smiled seeing his daughter sucking her tiny thumb in sleep.

Thought he did not like her that nature of sucking thumb in her sleep as it was always made him remember of her mother. Actually Myrah was pure carbon copy of her mother except her cute little nose and pinkish white skin tone which were inhabited from Manik. He smiled and leaned towards and kissed her forehead . Tucking few pillows as a barrier around her he sneaked out of the room to the adjacent open air balcony.

He exhaled the night cool breeze coming from the Arabian ocean. He closed his eyes to allow the breeze touch him to sooth his shattered life.

Unexpectedly the face of Nandini flashed in front of him as soon as he closed jos eyes. The abrupt one hour before encounter with her haunted his sense.
He then and there opened his eyes.
" what was that ? " he asked himself.
" what the hell I was doing with her? " he was disturbed with himself.
" here my daughter was crying for me and what hell I was doing with her? " he cursed himself.
" that girl is not a good news. She is definitely not a good news. " he firmly stated as if tried to make himself understand that.
" but just now I need her. I need her for my child. After that she can be rotten anywhere. I don't care. " he determinedly spoke.

He came back after some time and laid down beside Myrah pulling her delicate frame towards himself and cuddled her. He lovingly caressed her angelic face then placing a peck on her rosy soft lips said " Papa is extremely sorry baby . Papa should give much attention to you hain na? Sorry baby. Next time se papa will be always with you. And papa will for sure protect you from this world. "

A lone tear kissed his cheek. Wiping that away he slept feeling his daughter's warmth.

****
Next day Office


" Aman all the papers are ready? I don't want anyone loop holes in the contract. " Manik asked his manager.
Aman nodded and handed over the file to him.

He checked the papers and Aman kept checking out his boss who was going through each clause of the contract wrapping himself sometimes with frowns, sometimes with moist hidden emotions.

" Excellent. " Manik said closing the file. Then continued " I want everything to be perfect Aman. I just can't take risk with her. I have to save my daughter from the evil witch. "

Manik then again said
" And one more thing get that marriage papers ready by today itself. okay. And ask Nandini to come in my cabin now. "

Aman just kept staring at him. He knew all the things he was doing for his only daughter. But yet somewhere the pain was not only killing his boss but also him too as a loyal companion of his boss who was a 'hard outside soft inside' kind of coconut person.

" sir. Are you really wanting this? I mean this contract and all... " Aman couldn't spoke further earning glares from his boss.

" Am I not clear to you still Aman? " his curtly used stern words scared Aman. And he left just waving a half will affirmation nod.

Manik himself wasn't sure with his own acts but just then it was all about his baby. And he could go to any extent to save her.

So throwing all the weird dilemmas on the dustbin, he kept himself bonded by the vow of a father.

After like five minutes there was a knock on his cabin.

He looked at the visitor and his eyes automatically changed its colour.

" Ms. Moorthy. " he cleared his about to moist voice and adjusting his attitudal rough yet husky tone said " Come let's sit "

Nandini sat one of the chairs but didn't looked at him.

" good you came. Now look at me. I need to discuss you about the contract. " he said looking at the contract file.

Manik noticed her avoiding gaze and unknowingly again that monster inside him started struggling to came out.

" I said look at me " he chewed again and that roughness on his voice made her flickering eyelashes paced there way to his face.

" I guess you are well aware of the contract. Firvi I want you to re read them and sign by today itself . " he literally ordered her ignoring her moist eyes which were somehow piercing his heart.


" How will you be so sure that I am going marry you? " her sudden statement made him scrunched his eyebrows.

" Because you don't have any way out. " he stated firmly leaning towards her

Then fisting the desk he got up from his place and retorted " Because tumhare pass aur koi rasta nehi hai? You have no other dam choice Nandini Moorthy. "

Nandini literally choked with his abrupt sharp shout.

" Bohot lia hai tumne , now it's time to Pay Back baby. " his words were sharp like needles. And they were thrusting her with thousands of times with his each mere alphabet.

" You feel crying ? tumko rona aa raha hai? You feel bad? Awaaa " Manik dramatically gave a sarcastic smile touching her tears.

For a good next moment his sense was captivated by the poor tears drops. He so wanted to wipe them off by kissing them senseless. But again that monster inside him slapped him hard and he came back from his trances and said

" But do you know something? You deserve this. " he flickered his finger in her hair roughly and continued " You Deserved Every Single Bit Of It. "

Nandini just couldn't held more accusations and asked between her sob
" Akhir kia kya hai main ne Manik? Why are you hurting me? "

" I am hurting you? " he waved his words in a surprised tone. Then abruptly grabbed her shoulder and yelled
" It's you who has hurt me. Tumne mujhe takleef dia hai Nandini. "

His words were seemed like hot molten lava to her , all ready to burn her skin . His hot breath on her flesh were like Volcanic burning pores which were burning her each tissue for thousands of times.


" Mmmanikkk " she tried to touch him in her sob but he jerked her hands off brutally.

" Don't Touch Me. " he sternly said pressing each words gritting his teeth.

" Please don't ... don't do this to me na. " Nandini helplessly cried out .

Her each tear drops were thrusting him. He so wanted to hug her. Wanted to calm her giving his warmth. Last night it was so enhancing between them. But yet he stopped his deep desire to sooth her pain making himself recite that he was more hurt than her. And she was the reason behind all his sadness. darkness. For her only his princess, his only lifeline, his Myrah was cursed with no mother. She had snatched every good thing from his life.
Only she was the reason for his destruction.

And now it's the time for her to Pay Back.



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Feel free to comment and critise. Its first time I am trying something off bit from my zone. Stay tune.

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Edited by musicialtie - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
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sorry sorry...am very late...

bt update has made me all the more more confused...

manik..urghh...why he behaved like that...
the way he treated nandu...and asked her to strip herself...
why...why is he doing this...

i know he is hurt with something...bt wats the relation of nandu with that thing...

myrah...that cute lil girl...
i loved manik and her bond...
manik himself is pondering over for answer of his own deed...
plz...plz...ayesha solve the mystery...

and this contract...
wat's this contract for...
and y was aman saying to rethink...

urghh..my head will burst while thinking of the mystery...

continue soon plz...

waiting


LOVE
SANJANA


Edited by krazzy_parthian - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
Very nice update
Andt Wat has nandu done
whose d mother
Plz update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
Nice update!!
Thanks for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#35
THAT WAS AWESOME!! I M SURE NANDINI IS MYRAH'S MOTHER
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Posted: 9 years ago
#36
In ur story papa and princes myrah rumance is so touchy sooo cute.
Realy I'm loving ur story baby papa relationship.
But I don't know why manik is so hurt because if nandni,
Will wait for next update.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
Interesting yet confusing
Who is the mother of myrah
Y he wants to marry nandini
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow...Nyc concept. .
What has nandu done
Who is the mother
Do update soon
Waiting eagerly
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Posted: 9 years ago
#39
Amazing update. What is the reason behind manik's rudness towards nandani
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Posted: 9 years ago
#40
Omg I'm sooo loving this FS ... Bht interesting hai yaar .. Seriously ... What is the mystery behind Manik's hatred towards Nandini ??? How she is responsible fr Myrah's mother's separation ??? What is the back story I'm very curious to know ... Nd does Nandini knows abt Manik having a daughter ???
Who is Myrah's mother .??? I'm soo confused .. Bt Manik really loves his daughter a lot ... He can actually do anything for her ...
There r soo many questions to be answered ... Nd I'm looking forward to it ...
I'm waiting fr the nxt part ... Very very excited to read it ... This part was to jst fabulous ...
Thank u sooo much for the update ...

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