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archu_asok

@archu_asok

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Posted: 9 years ago

Awesome story with an happy ending note.the update was amazing. Manan's convo was beautifully penned.

Keep smiling.

Stay blessed😛

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esh ;)

@ps_angel

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Posted: 9 years ago

nandin itne months chup q rahi

pagal kahi ki

anyways

awesme stry

grt one :)

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srividhya68

@srividhya68

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Posted: 9 years ago

fabulous story
read in a go
loved it
written so beautifully

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sneha_glamarous

@sneha_glamarous

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Posted: 9 years ago

woe wht a story...
nice...
do come up with its sequel if not sequel then give epilogue at least...

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Coolgal_muskan

@Coolgal_muskan

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Posted: 9 years ago

Superb story!!

Poor mayra phass gai mama papa ke beech!!

It was an emotional n romantic update!!

Loved it

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Geet *wink*

@dreamy_doll15

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Posted: 9 years ago

that was so awesome.

finally all misunderstanding cleared..

hureee

yipeee..

manan moments was amazing.

n that baby to kitni cute h..
a perfect happy family ending. .

loveee it...

Love Geet

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Pagalpinky

@Pagalpinky

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Posted: 9 years ago

Thanks for a great story
Loved the mystery
Great job
Hope to read more from you

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