MaNan FS -- PAY BACK -- (UPDATED LAST PART) Pg 17 9/1/16

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Hollaaa Amigoss !!!!! 😃

I am again here with a brand new head chewing short story.

It will be of three or four parts. It's a crop of my baseless random thoughts .
Just last night my velle mind poked me about it and tonight here I am with the first part.

Basically I myself not sure with the plot and story. I don't even have no idea of what will be in my next part.
Confused soul you know !!!😕

So am stopping my bakwas rantings. And I wish you guys will digest my random velle product and pardon me if it's too irritating. Chaapals are welcome. 😆😆😆

#okaythanksbye. ( chuckle n wink). ☺️ 😉




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Posted: 9 years ago
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~~~~~ PAY BACK ~~~~~

PART 1


" you have to marry me? " He demanded firmly.

" But why all of a sudden? It wasn't informed at first place. " she was surprised.

" I don't care if it wasn't informed or what. But I am saying you that now. And you can't disagree. " his voice was hard emotionless yet stiff like rock.

" And if I do then? " her voice was confident whilst composed.

" Come again " he demanded turning around with his narrow killing smirk.

She inhaled deeply and replied carrying same tone " If I disagree toh? "

He gazed at her being amazed. " After all that happened still she had that guts to fight back ? " his mind poked his inner cheek.

He rubbed his lips together tightly and after doing a few antic tongue dance inside his mouth he finally blurted " Interesting . But you can't baby. "

He then slowly started pacing towards her . His each move choked her throat. It was like a hunter is slowly approaching towards his prey.
There was something different in his eyes unlike other days which hitched her heartbeat.

As the gap between them decreases the more her palpitations increased. She wanted to run away from the place right there. But couldn't. As her feet were froze over there by some dark spell of his tempting dark brown eyes.

" You can't as no one dares to go against me. No one dares to mess with Manik Malhotra. " saying he blow a hot air on the delicate milky neck of his prey and stood back with his victory smirk winning over her flushed hot redden flesh.

It really took her few minutes to gather her senses. Then after this she just lower her gaze in embarrassment as well as anger.

" So.. you agreed. Then let's take it to the next. " he stated brushing his blazer with a winning bossy tone.

But again the fighter raised back inside his that delicate petite prey as she sniffed saying

" Not really. I am still not in. And I don't think it was in my contract. Was it? "

It impressed him again. Her fight back nature really left him stunned and amused. He gave his one of the alluring smirk for which any dam girl could die over.

And said " Well in that case Ms. Moorthy I have to inform you with a heavy heart that it wasn't even it Is in the contract itself that you can not say No to any of my orders. As I don't like taking No. Get that ? "

She again felt disgusted with his words. Her inner self was shouting to give him left right centre then and there but she composed herself. After all she was bounded. Bounded by... !!! No. Not then. It wasn't the desired topic of that disgusted hour.

" oh come on. Stop thinking about the patterns to hit me now. You will get more time for that honey. Don't you think we have better things to do rather than this now ? " his husky tone , hot calling breath brushing her face again started doing their dirty jobs as she was having tough time to hold the pathetic strength of his knees.

Both of their breathes were fanning there face like cool tempting air. They were too lost in their thumping hearts and rhythmic beats that they had missed the intercom ring.

He leaned more towards her all the while checking out her bare arms through his shameless long thing index finger and was about to claim her trembling puffy pouty lips when suddenly the intercom started ringing for the second good time.

Both of them were shocked with their own karma. Both of them were stunned with their closeness. Both of them were embarrassed by their acts.

They moved apart from each other looking here and there but except each other as in if they did , then they would be fall for the what they were afraid of.


" yeee hello. " his husky still little gasping voice grabbed her lost attention who was then busy straightening herself.

" hmmm... then ... okay.. no..no.. yaah... get that ready... no... she agreed... yeah Aman... she will. Okay... Soon "
He completed his talk over phone and she just kept looking his disgustedly.

" What?? Ayesa look kya de rahi ho? " he asked carrying his evil smirk which was clearly saying that he was very well knew what was going on her mind.

He chuckled with her frowns. coming close he touched them by his two fingers and then uttered " I know eventually you have to come along . So its better to get those papers ready. I don't want any more f**king delay now. Okay darling. "

He left a smirk with a naughty wink and left the room leaving a frustrated Nandini.


"Why Manik? Why again are you going to mess my life? What deed I actually have done to you ? " she let the tears roll down of her eyes freely.


****
Manik's house


" heyyy princess... " he picked up a little angel in his arms and started drooling over her angelic face.

" mera babyyy. . Missed me?? " he uttered with so much honey in his tone. His affection was pouring like pure rain drop.

That little kid just giggled when he adorably nuzzled his face on the cute soft tummy of her. In happiness that angel patted his nose with her most affectionate giggle.

" awwwaaa my princess missed papa that much... " he kissed softly the lips of that angel and in return got few saliva mixed wet kisses all over his face.
That gave heavenly bless to his heart. And He Hugged Her With much more love.


" Manik. Give her to me. She must be hungry. " a lady of her late 20 came and took her from him. The little pie started crying missing the warmth of his dad but the lady took her to feed her.

After bidding his princess bye with a heavy heart Manik laid down on the bed. He was tired. Tired of his life.

His eyes rolled around his own room. It was a huge life sized room with fantastic Italian touch in the interior which had given an elegant look to his room. But yet that world class design couldn't satisfied his eyes like it was made to do. It failed to grab the attention of that deep chocolaty mesmerising eyes . And as a result it was kept hidden brutally by the dark shade of no lights.
Only a dim yellow light of the side lamp was the aura of that dark room of that dark king.

He absent mindedly opened the side table drawer like a thief and traced that thing lightly. His fingers were trembling when he stealthily took out the frame from the drawer and looked at it with the yellow light.

He caressed the photo frame for good next few minutes then suddenly something hit his mind and he just put it inside and locked the drawer with uttermost anger in his eyes.

" why? Why? Why did you do this to me? What Have I done to you? WHY WHY WHY ? " he shouted like a maniac collapsing on the floor. He cried helplessly . Cried vigorously clutching his knees. Then suddenly got up. Grabbed his car keys and left the room like a storm.


****

Nandini returned to her small apartment and went straight to the kitchen to fetch herself some water.

That day office encounter with him literally choked her throat. She gifted her long back dry throat with some cold water. After relaxing a bit she entered into her bedroom and sighed a frustrated breath looking the image in front of her.

Everything was in messed up condition. Her cloths , bed all are in pathetic situation. She Sighed passing them and hopped over the bed.

Closing her eyes she started recalling her morning encounter with her ruthless boss.

She was in her thoughts when her cell buzzed making a noise on that pin drop silence room.

Gazing at the caller name her forehead kissed some frowns along with few scared sweat.

She gulped her saliva down and in trembling finger slide the green sensor of her phone to answer.

*****
club


" heyyy babes. What's up? " he greeted a sexy long leg girl sliding his hand on her little back.

" hey handsome. " she leaned and kissed his cheek in a seductive way then in a cheeky way said clinging onto him " Manik... I so missed you baby. "
Manik smirked with her acts as it was very much regular to him. And he knew how to play the game .

" Really? Then I know how to compensate the missing thing. Don't I ? " he replied with his ever so bewitching smirk planting the imprint of his words on her cheek.

That was enough for both of them to click the next of their steps. The girl took that as a lucky hint and whispered in his ears " hotel Plazo, room no 444, 1 am, after the party. " and went to dance floor with her other friends.

Manik shoot a disgusted glare at her back and gulped the chilled bitter drink to burn himself as his own compensate of something hard.


The night grew as it's own accord so that the chain of his drinks . About 11 pm his phone beeped and he frowned reading it. He inhaled a deep breath and gulped his seventh left over drink and walked out of the club with slight shaky head.

As he was walking towards his car an wanted pair of arm jumped on his back and hugged him tightly.

" what the hell. " he promptly jerked the hands off him and turned.

" hey baby. Calm down its me" that girl came forwards and again threw herself on his well toned abs .

"Yeee Aliyaaa... " Manik tried to free himself from her irritating hold. And while doing so Aliya deliberately slipped which leaded to an accidental kiss on his lips by her.

Manik was fully disgusted by then and about to push her when he heard her. Heard the mellifluous voice of her.


" Mmmanik. !!!! " Nandini called him softly. She was little taken aback witnessing the scenario. Was hiddenly a bit heartbroken too. But somehow managed to keep her face straight.

" Manik you called me? Why so ? That too here in this hour? " Nandini asked him without making any eye contact.

" I have called you? When? " he frowned. The intoxicating effect of alcohol started affecting his mind.

" Aree kuch der pahle hi you called me to come over here . Check I have messaged you too after reaching here. " she politely made him remember.

Her heart was literally slapping her to talk with him so politely but yet she couldn't be rude to him.

" Manik... baby you have called her too why? Isn't it our night tonight ? Just you and me? " Aliyaaa seductively traced her filthy finger on his face and kissed his cheek wanted to make Nandini jealous.

Manik was trying to push her frame when she held herself tight and about to kiss the sexy mole just above the left side of his lips , Nandini's eyes popped out of its socket and without thinking twice she just cane forward and jerked her body off Manik and pushed her hardly. As a result of that suddenly cyclone on her , aliya lost her balance and hit with the bonet of one of the parked cars.

" wohhhooo !!!! " Manik exclaimed with the abrupt strom.

" how dare you touch him? You bloody good for nothing girl. Get out of my sight unless I will do something worse than this. " the ferocious Nandini roared at Aliya who was still in shock of her sudden 'tigress' look and just left from there shooting disgusted daggers to Nandini.

" freakkk !!!! What was that ? " Manik exclaimed with his alcohol affected tone and marched towards Nandini with his shaky post intoxicating effect.

Nandini was still gasping with the sudden unexpected encounter but the most that time worried her was Manik.

She without paying heed to Manik's witty look made him seat on the passenger seat of his car and drove away to her apartment.

****

The entire journey Manik kept blabbering his irritated accusations to Nandini and she just silently digested them without complain.


After reaching her small one bedroom apartment , she made Manik shifted on the bed and rushed to kitchen to fetch some lemonade for him.

Manik was laying down on her bed eyes closed. It was apparently looking that he was sleeping due to the he effect of alcohol but in reality he was wide awake and in his sense.

Nandini entered into her room with the lemon juice and called out his name hesitately.
But getting no response from him she considered him as sleeping and about to walk out of the room when she heard him .

" Nandini !!!! "

Her heart thumped against her chest listening him again like it was all perfect.
His that intense voice demanding her name spun her mind for fraction of seconds. It was so intoxicating.

Unknowingly her frame turned around to face him. And there he was all awake standing dipping his hands inside his pockets.

An evil smirk was complementing his luscious lips. His aura was travelling all over her messy room desperately.

But only one thing which was made her frown and scared were his deep ocean of emotions eyes. They were unimaginably dark that time. It was like some very bad was going to happen.

She gulped the extremely scared lump gazing his eyes and waiting for him praying the destiny.

" Nandini.. you are such a destroyer ." it was his first statement to her. There was something which stabbed her heart. She frowned exasperatedly tried To read him.

He understood her mind and started coming forward carrying same expression.

" kya yaar you have spoilt my night. " he curtly yet playfully said standing close to her.

The next moment there were silent. It was like there were giving chances to each other to read each other mind.

Nandini was the first to overcome the spell and asked " seriously? Have I destroyed your night? Then what do I need to do to make it up? "

There was little pain peeped in her choking voice. Manik just kept gazing at her expressionlessly.

Nandini felt horribly caged that moment that she just wanted to elope and poured her heart out hugging her tears which were then full ready to took over her.

So , when she didn't get any reply from him, she just turned around and about to leave she heard him. Heard him spitting on her with two words which just froze her world.

" Strip Yourself. "


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thank you for torturing your minds with my mindless writing. safe reading. Stay tuned.😊

PS- for pm Addrita.Jesin 😊
Edited by musicialtie - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Res

unres

hey ayesha...
sorry got late...
am really sory...

bt this one's superb...

am confused bout wats up wid manan???

the way behaved in starting...
and the contract thing...uff...kinna confusion hai...

manik's sudden change in behaviour...
who was that lil gal..i mean is she manan's daughter...

then club...manik ko multiple personality disorder ho gayi hain kya...

haha..nandu possessive for manik...dat too by alya...

and in the end...cliffhanger...uff...am gonna die of them one day...

all in all..super awesome start...

continue soon

waiting



LOVE
SANJANA

Edited by krazzy_parthian - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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yeyy!!
update !!!
very excited!!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Well thi is something different!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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My god...how do you think such stuff !!!
Great..mind blowing
Very very excited...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ok dude...
i m confused..
hehe..
bt it s amazing..
whateva it is😛
mindblowing
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1 - Scroll down
Part 2
Edited by Addrita.Jesin - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome!!!!!
waiting for nxt part!!!!!
countinue soon...
lyk the daughter father part sbse jayda...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome chappy...excited to know what happened between them...continue soon

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