MaNan FS -- PAY BACK -- (UPDATED LAST PART) Pg 17 9/1/16

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Yathignna Arhitha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

It's interesting and exciting
And full of mystery
At last what Nandini had done that bad to him
And who is Myrah and she is Manik's daughter
Uff lot of confusion
Pls continue soon

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mairaallauddin

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Awesome update

Superb update

Fab update

What happened between manan

Waiting for the next part

Update the next part soon

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Tanvi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Wow...what has nandini done to deserve such hatered !!!

Myrah is cute...n whos the girl who has been taking care of myrah...just a maid or someone important...

Manik's helpless emotions n nandini bearing all the tortures all these are very interesting...different concept...

Too good

Keep writing

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Tanvi

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farhana12

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

nice update

but what is the mystery of manik's behavior

and how nandini is related to myrah

but manik his daughter relation was really cute

lovely

sweet

loved the update

cont soon

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Aamikrish

@Aamikrish

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Superb update.

Little angel is so cute.

Der r so many q in my mind? Is d baby is manans baby, Wat did nandini done.

Update soon.

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Annieeeeiee

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Hey !

This story is so intriguing. I am a little confused but I know that as the story will progess all the confusion will be cleared. :)

Why do I have a feeling that myrah is Manan's baby?? Hmph! Looking forward to read more from you :D

Nice concept xoxo

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Pinkswan_24

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Read both parts...n it was amazing...soo interesting
Wondering what past manan has? Dat made manik sooo harsh...dat he iz hurting nandini...

Myrah iz Manan's child????sooo eager to know how is it gonna reveal...
Will be waiting for next update...

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sonia1000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

This is so nice and different..I loved both updates..I'm so curious to know what must have happened between them..there is so much mystery ..how is nandini responsible for his destruction..and why can't she say no to him...aaa...I'm pulling my hair to figure it out lol..please continue super soon...I just can't wait to read more