MANAN SS ' A FRAGILE BELIEF' Chapter 3 updated! ..pms later - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Snehasn

Hiii kiddoo!!finally i made my way to your updates... Thanks for the pm...These two updates shook me to the core...as I never ever thought you can write these stuffs...I mean my ever joyous kiddoo is writing heart wrenching one...bow to you baccha!!
The sanes you used was mind blowing...
Its indeed true... The one who promise you to stay forever is the one who leaves you early as ever...
What happened last day that changed the equations of her life...
How come the most beautiful reality become the worst nightmare of her life?
Navni's bond was just awesome... They say na...friends are the first relationship after mom's who knows the other well.. As true one can sense every invisible emotions too...and if they are our weakness... They knows to become our strength too for time being...same was with Navya...
Hope nandu will soon collect her shattered and broken pieces...
But what's forcing him to give her the pain of life?? When he can't tolerate her hatredness why he's forcing her to hate him??
Soha!! What's her equation with Manik... Is she the one behind all these things??
Nandu is already broken... Why he's making her to feel disgut for loving him? Their cute moments was good one...she had the same effect from him which were till yesterday ... Their moment was disturbed by our very own cabiraa
His mocking was something we miss in the show...Cabir can't watch his bestie like this... But still he can't do anything to make everything alright... As he also don't know the reason of Manik's behavior...
Many questions are popping... Need answer's... Update soonish
Take care stay blessed

PS- kiddoo!!! When your didu is here there is no question of mood upset... I'm their to blow up your mood...Their is two persons who's eagerly waiting to meet you... But scared coz you're going to beat them black and blue... Reason is very known to you... Just think what it is.. And why they're scared to meet you?? When you get the answers meet me in scrap... Bbyee...will be waiting for you...


Well didu! That is the story all about...so u have to wait for the update...every thing will be cleared soon!!!...n yeah! I m upset didu...the reason i tell in scrap. Tha k u once for making me happy ...u know all my battisi are flashing after reading ur comment...u r truly the most amazing person i ever talked to..so a tight and warm hug from my side in this cold winters..i luv you ...😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: krazzy_parthian

hey shivani...

chapter was tooo good...

nandu's pov...i loved it...

soha is really a b***h...
i hate her soo much

uff...manik's description...it was awesome...

manan's cute romance...
his effect on her...
amazingly written...

cabi...aah...i love him...

the resignation thing...loved it...

all in all this chapter was amazingly awesome...

one question...is this chapter a flashback...

waiting fo nxt part...

continue soon


LOVE
SANJANA


Thank u for appreciating dear means alot...and the chapter is not in flashback it is a continuos chp after prologue...and ch1😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Awesome update
Superb update

Fab update

Loved it

Loved the update

Waiting for the next part

Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Guyzz i know u all are waiting for d update but i am sorry i won't be able to update before 16 anyhow as my exams are till 16 December... Sorry for d delay 😭 😭
Edited by shivanichauhan1 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Come on kiddoo!!
Why are you becoming cry baby... Day by day..
Only two more days are left naa...then you'll be back with a bang...so chill naa babu...come on be my pehle waale kiddoo who used to be joyous and chirpy... Aakhir DILLI waale hai pyaar toh barsna hii hai right??... Come on baccha...don't whimper... Rock your exam
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: Snehasn

Come on kiddoo!!
Why are you becoming cry baby... Day by day..
Only two more days are left naa...then you'll be back with a bang...so chill naa babu...come on be my pehle waale kiddoo who used to be joyous and chirpy... Aakhir DILLI waale hai pyaar toh barsna hii hai right??... Come on baccha...don't whimper... Rock your exam



Di..mujhe lagta hai mujhe aapse ISHQ ho gya hai...and promish i will smile bahut sarra ...akhir aapse hi tho sikha haihai 😃 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: Snehasn

Come on kiddoo!!
Why are you becoming cry baby... Day by day..
Only two more days are left naa...then you'll be back with a bang...so chill naa babu...come on be my pehle waale kiddoo who used to be joyous and chirpy... Aakhir DILLI waale hai pyaar toh barsna hii hai right??... Come on baccha...don't whimper... Rock your exam



Di..mujhe lagta hai mujhe aapse ISHQ ho gya hai...and promish i will smile bahut sarra ...akhir aapse hi tho sikha haihai 😃 😃 and thank u for d wishes...didu...aapko meri taraf se ek tight wala hug..muahh!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: shivanichauhan1



Di..mujhe lagta hai mujhe aapse ISHQ ho gya hai...and promish i will smile bahut sarra ...akhir aapse hi tho sikha haihai 😃 😃 and thank u for d wishes...didu...aapko meri taraf se ek tight wala hug..muahh!!



wow!! My darling sis ko ISHQ ho gaye hai hamse...kya baat hai?? 😛 hamne toh kuch kiye hii nahi phir bhi ISHQ ho gaye...am i that lucky?? Chalo jii phir toh apne MOHABBAT ko paane k liye kuch risks lena hii parenge... DELHI here i comes...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sorry for being late i will update soon 😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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CHAPTER 3


He thought how could he have done this?how does it go so far so fast? He wasn't sure but he knew, he felt it deep down inside that he shouldn't have done this and he knew he would regret it ...
well! he already did.

She was supposed to be an easy target. A beautiful girl with an innocent smile and odd colored eyes which came unafraid to his. Those eyes shout what her lips feared to say. He wasn't supposed to fall in love with him and she wasn't supposed to make him a better person. He thought that he was fine before and he was going with the flow earlier till the time he made the beautiful mistake of allowing her to become his entire world. He loved her though, he loved her so much that he was terrified her, for losing her meant losing himself.
But he didn't have a choice as he has to do this to make her stand on her feet to make her fight her own battles and he knew he had taken a rocky path but he also knew that people take rocky path and find lasting love.
His thoughts were interrupted by a phone call and the screen flashed the name of Dr.Abhimanyu. He instantly picked the call and a loud manly voice roared from the other end which said, " Manik are you insane.. or what ?? I mean how could you be so irresponsible man!!..knowing her condition how could you be so harsh on her...hmm??!!"
He was taken aback by the sudden outburst but keeping himself calm he asked," what happened bro?? why are you behaving as in she jumped of the cliff??"
"Well! than she probably was on her way. I just saved her, she was about get an accident"
He was shocked and numb at the same time as he panicked," What ...listen bro stop playing these funny games with Ok!! it's not a joke!"
"I' m serious brother! and you know what she said when I asked her what she is doing at the middle of the road...
It's so easy to keep walking on the sidewalk but bhai... I prefer the middle of the road so if I get hit...there is no mistaking my intentions.
And I was taken aback for awhile but let me warn you Manik that if anything happened to my little sister than be ready for the worse"
Abhi replied furiously.
"Is she fine now?" Manik asked but he heard a beeping sound as the call was cut.

The very next moment he received a message...

"You feed off my anxiety
Telling me I'm stupid
For caring
Even though you don't have any reason
To do what you've done
What you're doing right now
I don't know why
You're trying to make me feel this way
Small
Insignificant
Ugly
Worthless
It's working
You've done it so congrats
I've always felt this way thanks to you
I want you to stay the hell away from me
Forever
Don't come near me
I hate what you make me feel
About myself
I hate it
So stay away
Since I'm so worthless
It shouldn't be a problem."

He sighed as he knew this was coming.</font>


First of all extremely sorry for being late...I know u guyzz were waiting ...I know this is not enough but this is it...i promise to compensate in the next update. ...which would be soon hopefully ..luv u all...please like and comment ur views to get me going...
😃 😃
Keep smiling! 😃 😃
HAPPY NEW YEAR!! 🤗 🥳 [:D/]
Edited by shivanichauhan1 - 9 years ago

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