ROOMMATE: The Right Mistake(new ff) [ON HOLD] - Page 4

Originally posted by: priakachan

Interesting concept! Continue soon!😃 All the best! 👍🏼

thank you Friend 😃

Originally posted by: Sonalmanan

Interesting!! Please continue soon... But I don't understand, if there are 10 rooms in the apartment then why nandini needs to share the room with a guy only.. She can share it with any of the girl from fab5... Please do explore this part also in ur story... 😊 😊

yeah every room is booked already thats y
thanku😆

Originally posted by: Adya05

Okay.. So we have a new guy over here..!!

Okay.. I know.. You must be feeling.. Weird..!! Less guys.. No no.. Very less guys and like.. Many girls..!! But don't worry.. We all are very friendly..!!

And i am always up for making friends..!! So friends..?? But i am just in class-8 and about you.. I don't know.. But hardly matters...!! Friends are friends..

Achha.. Okay.. Enough.. Even i talk alot..!!

So.. The idea was nice..!! And you know what..!!

I am just addicted to this forum..!!

Update the chapter-1 soon..!!

REGARDS..

ADYA..

hey yeah friends
so you are also little doll
here i found 2 dolls one u 2nd mayra

thank u doll

Originally posted by: soothu

hai rahul...

welcome to manan world...

waiting for update with lot of manan😃

thank you😃

Originally posted by: vaishnavigarla

nice storyline
cont soon

thankx😃

Originally posted by: ruhimak1

Interesting concept

Update soon...😛

thank you😃

Interesting concept... It will really nice... Update 1st soon

Concept is good...
Continue soon...
It will get a good response...
Will be waiting for the update...

thank you so much for this precious comment and likes, i got so much response

thank you thank you very much

guys i am new here na to can't post more than 10 post in a day, so can't reply everyone comment

here i am posting part 1

tell me how is it

Part 1

At Mumbai

Manik, Cabir, Druv, Aliya, Mukti these 5 are friends from school time. They all are famous for their music band FAB5, in school time they are not that much famous.

Cabir is brother soul of manik, he knows him in and out, druv is buddy of manik, and manik can do anything for druv, aliya have her crush on manik and manik knows it, he knows that aliya ike him and that like only attraction so whenever she tries to come close to him, he always make en excuse and leave that topic but ayliya is aliya she didn't stopping herself from taking near manik, now manik got frustrated by aliyas this act, many times said that he consider that he only like her his best friend and nothing more, he doesn't like her like she do. Mukti she is crazy gril and always makes problems for fab5 and fab5 always stop her from doing her mischief on anyone anything.

From 12^th these 5 lives together in an apartment on rent and went homes to meet their parents at weekends. All of them families are quit rich but they prefer to live together with their friends.

At school time they make excuse that they want to do study together and study can't happen at homes so they want to live together and want to group study

So their parents agree, because they also open minded person and gives open freedom to their children.

In that apartment 10 rooms or we can say 10 SMALL SMALL APARTMENT IN THAT BUILDING, and in each APARTMENT 1 BADROOM, 1 HALL, 1 BATHROOM and 2 KITCHEN and ONLY 1BIG WALL ALMIRA are present.4 at ground Flore and 3, 3 on 1^st and 2^nd Flore. All Apartments are 2 sitters only because only 2 single bad come in that bedrooms, or 1 single double bad can feet in it easily so only 2 people can leave together.

On top Flores 3 apartments are booked by Fab5, in which one for MUKTI ALIYA, 2^nd for CABIR DRUV, and 3^rd for MANIK MALHOTRA.

In Cabir and Druvs rooms 2 single bad are present, and aliya mukti have only a single double bad in their room

Yes because manik want to live alone he don't want to share room with anyone.

Yes maniks bedroom is bigger than other rooms and he has special arranging in his room because sometimes all fab5 spend their night in maniks apartment only when they parties

In maniks room 1 very big Double Bad is present on which minimum 4 person can sleep at one time and a single bad also present near that big bad. And a couch a bean bag and a big mirror and many things

He room looks like fully home.

All the other room also booked already.

Now its one year of living together fab5. They enjoy their life fully.

12^th exams finish and they all are free birds now,

They went for tours and do fun at their and now this one month also complete and from tomorrow their new journey is starting.

They all 5 take admission in SPACE academy in MUMBAI. And they have less marks in 12^th but due to their previous record of music and their one performance for test, SPACE trusties got very much IMPRESSED and they Provide SPECIAL TREATMENT to FAB5

In SPACE FAB5 has their own separate room for jamming other then COMMON MUSIC ROOM, fab5 room are made by their choice and room is sound proof, collage provide them A RECORDING SET UP ALSO in that room, their they can records their MUSIC.

Their families also got impressed by their children and happy that they are so much talented. Now they stop saying to stay at home because they now understand that these kids are happy when they are together their happiness in with each other so they are happy with their children happiness.

Now it's been 1month starting Collage and FAB5 got famous in just 1 month, they do JAMMING open Ground sometimes and all the space teachers and students hear them and are very much happy to have so much talented students in their collage.

In their 1^st year FAB5 got much Famous that all the seniors who is in music field are burning in jealous and find many ways to make them low.

But Fab5 are 1 feet in front of them, they know what people think of them, and they are not less than if somebody mess with them then they will not leave that person easily, and this thing everybody got knows in 1 months easily so no one is dares to come in way of Fab5.

Today 1 month complete starting new collage

EVENING

Its Sunday

Fab5 are sleeping in maniks room together because this Saturday they record their 1^st song of their life and in the happiness of creating a awesome song they done list night completely party till morning and all ther fab5 sleep in maniks apartment only.

Manik is sleeping in his hall and fab4 are in his bad because they 4 sleep on his bad the single bad is dirty with the can of bears and alcohol, and also bear also spills on it due to which that bad is wet and manik is sleeping on couch in hall.

Now it's 4 of clock of evening and fab5 still sleeping.

Suddenly door bell ring

Nobody answer it, then again it rang

Still no buddy open that room, they 5 are sleeping like they are died

The person outside the apartment start bagging the boor and ringing the bell continuously,

Fab4 inside the room wake up b this sound but don't have strength to come and open the door.

Manik still sleeping because he slept after making his friends comfortable on his bad at last, he really loves his friends vey much

Suddenly alya mukti cabir druv shouting

MANIKKK

And manik wake up by their shouting and saw that they are sleeping and someone is banging the door and ringing the bell.

He saw that his friends are shouting from inside to open the door

He with closed eyes went near door after crushing his friend to break his beautiful sleep.

He with sleepy eyes opens the door and said with closed eyes

Manik: who is there at this early morning?

The person who is standing outside got angry because 1^st he is not opening door and when he opened it he is talking nonsense.

Person: DID YOU CHECK YOUR WATCH MANIK? IT IS 4 O CLOCK OF EVENING AND U R STILL SLEEPING in angry tone

By hearing this maniks eyes suddenly opens and he check his hand for time but didn't find his watch then he look backwards and saw time in hall watch and said

Manik: ohh shit shit shit... how I can be so careless today to I have to go home to meet my mom dad. These all happened because of that cabir he made me drink so much that I forgot it and crushing cabir in his mind.

Person: did you hear me manik again in a angry tone when he find him lost in his thoughts

Manik: ji uncle ji, tell me what happen? Why you come here today? I to pay my rent na yesterday night itself.

Person: I didn't come here for rent, I come here to meet you with your roommate

Manik: ROOMMATE?? MATLAB??

Person: he looks his backwards and said

"MEET HER, SHE IS NANDINI MURTY FROM MANGLORE AND YOUR NEW ROOMMATE"

Manik: WHAT?? And he looks towards her and saw that

A tinny girl whose height is very lower than him or we can say he is very taller than her; she is only looking towards him with shocked and surprised face.

Manik notice that she wearing a white top with full slaves and reaching till her mid thighs and wearing black jeans. Her hair are open and her earrings are sparkling due to sunrays which is directly falling on her face by window which is just beside the gate. And her white skin is glowing in the rays of sun. manik completely lost in her and he saw that her eyes are big and lips are looks like rose petals. And then he notice her shape of lips

She is making a pouty lips with a shape of O and looking at him continuously at that time manik Trans broke

And he looks towards himself and notice that he is standing only in his jeans and he is half necked from upper part and nandini only looking his bare chest and muscular body.

Manik feel embarrassed and runs inside take a t shirt and wear it and come out side

He notices that nandin also got completely red when she come out from dream that she is checking him.

Manik: but uncle I said na I don't want to have roommate

Before uncle said something nandini also said

Nandini: yeah uncle I also don't want to live here, can you give me other room with girl and looks towards manik

Manik: look she also denying na, so plz take her away I don't want to share my room.

Uncle: nandini beta in this apartment no other room is vacant, only in this room you can live because manik alone lives here. All the rooms are 2 sitter but this room is bigger than others and you will easily lives with him.

Nandini: but

Uncle: you decide I only have this room if you want to check other place then its fine but I am telling you no one will give you room on rent on this less money which I am tacking from you. So u decides, I will not force you.

Nandini thinks sometime and then said

Nandini: okay uncle ji I will share room with him and looks towards him.

Manik: who is happy now that she is denying suddenly said yes he is shocked and said

Manik: what yes? I said no na then why don't you understand that I don't want you in my room?

Uncle: manik why you have problem with her? Everyone also leaves share room na then why not u? u have to share room and that final

Manik: noo I won't in loud voice

Uncle: that is fine then

Manik: in happy tone, so u didn't force me to live with her. Sending her away

Uncle: no she is not going anywhere

YOU ARE GOING FROM HERE LEAVING THIS ROOM BECAUSE FROM NOW ONWARDS NANDINI WILL LIVE HERE AND IF YOU WANT TO LIVE HERE THEN YOU HAVE TO SHARE ROOM WITH HER THAT'S FINAL in loud and clear voice

Manik: what?? Shocked

Uncle: yeah you hear right

Manik: not done yar, you can't do this me

Uncle: yes I am, so r u fine with her

Manik: I don't have other choice.

Uncle: good boy and then he turns towards nandini and said

Nandini beta now you will live here and if you have any problem then let me know

Nandini: ji uncle ji

Thank you

Uncle: welcome beta and leaves from their after giving last warning to manik about her to don't trouble her.

then manik looks towards nandini and thought in mind

'so i promise my self if i will not make her live this room in one week then i will change my NAME' and gives smirk to nandini and goes inside

he said: ANDAR AAJAYIYE NANDINI JI, AAPKA HI ROOM HAI.(plz come inside think your room it)

nandini feels happy and come inside but she don't know what destiny is waiting for her

she took her luggage and tries to take it inside

but that bag is very heavy and she needs help she saw that manik went and sit on couch in hall she thought to call him for help

nandini: manik, please can you take my bag inside? It's very heavy I can't lift it

manik: am I looking like COOLI( person which draw things from one place to other)

nandini: NOO, its just that we are roommates so we can help na eachother

manik: yeah ROOMMATESSS in sarcastic way

nandini: please na and makes a pout

manik saw that pout and unknowingly went and lift that bag and come inside his badroom and put that bag near the bad

nandini follows him behind and she is happy that manik helping her she also come inside their bedroom and said without notice rooms condition 4 other persons also sleeping their she said

nandini: thank you manik

That's when manik notice that he actually helped her he put that bag and said to himself how can I help her? I want her leave this room and here I am helping her, and abuses himself

Fab4 also waking up but didn't open their eyes and when they listen someone saying

THANK YOU MANIK

And manik didn't reply

So they 4 together said

FAB4: MANIK SAY WELCOME at least

Nandini notice at that time that 4 persons are sleeping on bad 2 girls and 2 boys she is shocked to see them like this she looks questioning eyes towards manik

Manik also looks towards her and understood her question which is not coming out of her mouth due to shock

Manik looks towards fab4 and saw that they are still closing their eyes

Manik: GUYS GUYS WAKE UP

Fab4: go away manik

Manik: guys I want to meet you someone

Fab4: we will meet him/her later

Manik: no you will meet her now because she is here itself

Fab4: who?

Manik:

GUYS MEET MY NEW ROOMMATE NANDINI MURTHY

Fab4: WHATTT???

And they wake up with shocked faces their sleep is nowhere to be seen, they 4 looking towards duo who is standing in front of them, with shocked face.

that it for today

i know in part 1 i didn't even give much new info so please forgive me, but this part is necessary to start my story, i promise from part 2 you will enjoy full.

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MyGuitarVina

(Rahul)

Amazing startBR]Lovd it
Continue soon