THE UNWILLING SERIES the unwilling wife...Thread 2 Chap 14 page 20

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lovePANI

@lovePANI

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Finally finally..
this update gave me a little relief..
Manan Cavya Mukshad...
it is treat to watch them all together..
u wrote beautifully..all their parts..

Ho..last part who is it...????
hope it's manan...

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Uma

@uma88

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

Omg three pairs got equal space.

Manik manik manik

He is very unpredictable.

Like our RK.

I was waiting eagerly for the holi part as that's my fav in rishbala.

Though u have brought a little bit if it. I missed it so much.

And the last part was manan right.

Reg ur new story and all ur writings in future am eagerly waiting to read.

Yours are always out of box.

Different genre.

And we love to read it.

So continue soon.

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@ps_angel

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#163

so much happened

aryaman tried to kill manik

he got mre angry

harshad married mukti

feelin bad fr her

amazing holi laws

manik ne kya neha ko dekhaa nai

loved d way he claimed her as wife on holi

cabir is soo obessed fr navyaa

n she has cancer

so finally he has realised his love

looking forwrd fr the next part...

continue soon :)

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Vidhiarora1

@Vidhiarora1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Wowww such an amazing post

Truely a treat to read it yr

Keep it up yr

U have great writing skills

Sooo excited for finally a good manan tym together

Hopefully

Milega na hmmm

Plzzz pm me next part pretty pretty please

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Sonalmanan

@Sonalmanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Awesome!! Manik can't tolerate anyone else apply color on her girl... Then their intimate moment.. 😳 I feel really bad for mukti,poor girl has to b marry Harshad to save her father... Loved Neha n rishab bonding... Navya has cancer,ohh god!! Last part was interesting, finally manik realises that he loves her...Ab nandu kya kregi... Manik has been behaving as a jerk...he needs to repent a lot... Waiting for the sequal... Thanks for pm... 😊 😊

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ArSha_ManNan

@ArSha_ManNan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Awesome update
Oh no harshad found mukti n forced her to marry him...
Poor mukti...
What ... Navya ko cancer... What will cabir do??
Manik is so possessive... He didnt lyk aryamaan applying colour on nandu...
Usne seedha maang bhar di...
Finally he realised that he loves her...
Superb
Thnkz 4 the pm

I lyked the new story's summary... It's interesting... Would love to read it