Manan ff : ishq soofiyana updated Page 47(15 A ) - Page 7

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angellovemanan thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
such a funny scene when nandini said that she will be his sister
aww that romance was good and passionate love it
continue soon do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
I like it..
But its just too fast..
I mean this dosen't happen..
On the second day of their meeting..
So take it slow..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Hi just came across your story today
It is totally awesome
Pls pm me when you update next
Take care and stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Awesome dear
Manan romance is super cute
Continu soon
Take care
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Nyc update..good..continue soon..mkeep it up..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66
Nice update...
Nandini sister too much fun...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
Osmmm but too short next prt jaldiii
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68



pm me too
Hi dear that was awesome updates both are confused regarding their feelings update next one soon




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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
Hii...guys...i know it's late but am sorry i was little busy...

But now i am back i hope you will like it...


Part 6

Both were lost in their this wierd but beautiful moment...

Both were feeling each other...

Manik hold her waist tightly...
He was feeling helpless in fragrence of her...girl to whome he only met today...

He was feeling as is something lost have came back...

He title his head towards her face from neck while she was standing their helplessly...moaning his name.

Her eyes were closed lips were shivering...she was confused whether she wanted this or not

Manik opens his eyes and..

M : you...you..are beautiful...

Nandini opens her eyes at this sudden statement...and bluahes hard after seeing that intense gaze of him on her...

While a sweet smile appears on his face...seeing her blushing...


Their sweet moment was disturbed by loud voice...

They leave eachother and starts looking here and their...

Again same voice

Manik : umm...mukti...it's mukti...


Nandini looks towards door and than at manik...

M : umm...so ya...chalein...

Nandu nods and they starts walking...when suddenly...

N : are...mai..mai kaise...

Manik gives her serious expression raising his eyebrows upward...

N : i...i..mean...they don't know am herw right...and...vaise..bhi...they all hate me right...specially...vo..v.. Mukti...so

Manik : are...no...nothing like that..
It's ok...you come...

Nandini : umm...you..sure..

Manik : ya...come...

Nandini smilea faintly and follows manik...

She was taking baby steps...and result was manik already was in hole while she was still covering her rest of the journey giggling and imagining the wierd faces of his friends can come...possibly...

Manik : hello...guys...

All were sitting on big big sofas...
All stands up and hug him..one by one...

M : umm...guys kya hua..you guys herw all ok ...

Mukti : kyunn...aa..ni.sakte...

M : are...na..anytime...

Abhi : haan...thik hai baith...

Manik nods and was about to sit when..

M : are guys i want you guya to meet someone...probably member of my family...

All gives him wierds look...

He turns towards stairs and all follows him...

As soon as they see girl in black crop top and maroon skirt...

Smirk appears on cabir's face...

Alya,navya both were looking excited...

Abhi,dhruv were looking with confusion yet calmness..

Mukti with wierdo look ...

Cabir moves towards manik and put his hand on his shoulder...

C : waa mere sher itni jaldi...
I mean it's too fast man...

All looks towards manik with naughty gleam...

Manik looks at every one and understanding them.

M : what...what...are you saying... No...just stop...cabirrerr...

Nandini comes and stand beside cabir..

N : hey...guys...

All smiles... Their was awkward silence...which was really not liked by our cupid...

C : umm..itna sannata...
Chalo tu fir...hey nandini am cabir...

He speaks and take her in hug while nandini too...gave in..

Than dhruv
Than abhi...

But all this while one person was standing their jealousy eyes...

Manik pov...

Wht the fu...
How can they hug her...
And see look at this girs...
They are standing their and smiling like an idiots...
Wake up you girls...
You bf are hugging her...

His yrance was broken by..

C : kya hua chal na baithenge...

Manik nods...and see all were settled before only when he busy in his dukh bari kahani...

He sits beside nandini...

As all couple were sitting together hugging each other cozily...

Nandini looks at all of them and understand that thet all are lovers

Nandini smiles looking at them and holds manik hand...

Manik looks at her surprisingly

Nandini come close to manik's ear and whispers...

N : inhe kya ho gya...meri class kab lenge...





Ok...so..i.
Know short hai but...itna hi hua...


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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
Loved it
The way manik introduced to nandini was too cute
Amazing update
Continue soon
So pm me

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