#4 Devil's Bride manan ff part 42 in thread 5 link is on pg 1 - Page 77

Hey dear nice update finally manik realised his mistake wsiting for next one

Wow
Thankx for d update ... :)
it was needed ...
family moment luvly
Finally manik realized thank god !!
Its so beautiful

Wow so eager to read more
Plz update soon

Hello dear wanna tel u one thing haters gonna hate but nvr bother tat as u said thr are likes hundreds who love n UR story so jus throw them in shit n always think of ppl who love... The one who commeted took too much effort but har usse utna pblm ho Rahi she shud not read it usse appreciate karna nahi Atha tho she have no ryt to criticise too... Anyways aise log r like dogs tail unke duum kabhi seedha nahi hotha so jus chill v love u alot so dnt bother abt them

Coming to story
Awww so early u updated
Lovely finally manik aur nyonika ka Milan loved the trio manik mukti n nyonika
No nandu in update but no pblm much neede update finally nyo spill the beans
Awww dhruv alya couple awww manik misuntdtud
Shit hope manik try his best to apologise her
The POV as always no one can write like u the pain the emotions the way u out in words s jus awesome dear lovely
Jus superb
Can't wait for next part n see nandu reaction seeing manik apologise
Waiting

Thanks for PM
Lots of love
Pravallika aka PraNi

Amazing update

hi you know that you are the beast writer .i like all your stores .i am a big fun of you so quip going .1000/1000 .

Plzzz add some Manan actions plzzz onlyy POV m hi sara update khatam!!!! Plzzz update next ASAP plzzz zzz

Finally manik knows the truth...but i wm still waiting for the day whenmanik comes to know about pregnancy..
And girl you shouldnt get bothered by such bashers. Many would come & go.

U knw wt baby, u don't need anyone to support u or to worry abt u.. Seriously.. Sabke liye tum akele hi kaafi haii to deal with .. Kya mast answers diya haii apne.. I was literally hooting.. U r an amazing person.. Really really.. I knw, u don't give a damn abt the bashing, still wanted to tell u ki , it was not just for u.. It was for all of us,, all the readers.. If the writer is bad, then readers must be really really bad na.. So itsNotU..itsUs .. So let's party OK..
And I don't want to bash that person.. She is expecting I knw.. But I don't think, v shud give that much importance to that person.. And abt the things which she said.. Oh god.. It was really funny.. Actually very funny.. I think she only knw abt ur ff's.. Kuch aur ff usne dhekha bhi nai.. And she is accusing all these abt Devil's bride.. Dude, its a dark ff.. An emotional ff.. And top of that, only one make out happened in it.. Usme kya kharaabhi dhi.. U r calling it vulgar.. Then vulgarity ko kya bologi.. One thing I really didn't lykd is she talked shit abt ur character.. That was really disgusting.. Ooye, u need to consult a psychiatrist... Yes.. I think na, uttu or vj ke saath saath isko bhi ksi aur planet mei bhejna padega.. She totally lost it..
I must say , the way u reacted to her is lyk Wowww.. U actually updated 2 stories.. Lyk wowww.. Itne jaldi.. Jungli billi..
And baby,love u for continuing this.. I have seen many writers who actually discontinued their ff coz of bashing.. But u r too gud.. And one more thing, vaise toh Devil mei toh sab kuch teeek hone wala haii na, so one more make out scene toh chalega..lol.. Dude am serious.. V don't want normal 'I LOVE U, I WILL NEVER HURT U AGAIN' wala scene.. Arrey itne dino se wait kar raha haii for their reunion.. So it shudnt be normal na..
And abt the other one, One night stand, its really amazing.. Was Really waiting for it.. Thanku so much for the updates.. Yaar..I toh luv u bohath shaaraaa.. Mwaaah

Originally posted by: Lizbeth

U knw wt baby, u don't need anyone to support u or to worry abt u.. Seriously.. Sabke liye tum akele hi kaafi haii to deal with .. Kya mast answers diya haii apne.. I was literally hooting.. U r an amazing person.. Really really.. I knw, u don't give a damn abt the bashing, still wanted to tell u ki , it was not just for u.. It was for all of us,, all the readers.. If the writer is bad, then readers must be really really bad na.. So itsNotU..itsUs .. So let's party OK..
And I don't want to bash that person.. She is expecting I knw.. But I don't think, v shud give that much importance to that person.. And abt the things which she said.. Oh god.. It was really funny.. Actually very funny.. I think she only knw abt ur ff's.. Kuch aur ff usne dhekha bhi nai.. And she is accusing all these abt Devil's bride.. Dude, its a dark ff.. An emotional ff.. And top of that, only one make out happened in it.. Usme kya kharaabhi dhi.. U r calling it vulgar.. Then vulgarity ko kya bologi.. One thing I really didn't lykd is she talked shit abt ur character.. That was really disgusting.. Ooye, u need to consult a psychiatrist... Yes.. I think na, uttu or vj ke saath saath isko bhi ksi aur planet mei bhejna padega.. She totally lost it..
I must say , the way u reacted to her is lyk Wowww.. U actually updated 2 stories.. Lyk wowww.. Itne jaldi.. Jungli billi..
And baby,love u for continuing this.. I have seen many writers who actually discontinued their ff coz of bashing.. But u r too gud.. And one more thing, vaise toh Devil mei toh sab kuch teeek hone wala haii na, so one more make out scene toh chalega..lol.. Dude am serious.. V don't want normal 'I LOVE U, I WILL NEVER HURT U AGAIN' wala scene.. Arrey itne dino se wait kar raha haii for their reunion.. So it shudnt be normal na..
And abt the other one, One night stand, its really amazing.. Was Really waiting for it.. Thanku so much for the updates.. Yaar..I toh luv u bohath shaaraaa.. Mwaaah

pheww finally your satisfied with nyonica manik scene wese about the make out abhi i need 5 6 updates for this healing process make out will be there in epilogue or yes devils me aj tk kuch sidha hua h apology bhi awesome hogi or nandini ko pura tym milne wala h chill and yeah that character comment only that comment irked me otherwise baki toh sb kachra tha i m not pro in writing bas trying to improve myself or i gave shit about this bashing this bashers can't make me quit i will more stories more adult scene below 15 ke jitne bhi h sbko bigd dungi jo ukhadna h usko ukhad le but me quit krne wali i will improve myself with each update