#2 MANAN SS- ONE MISTAKE CHP18 PG110 (15/2) *PMS TOM

rimsha01

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Awesome update.

Manik is reminiscing the old times when they were together nd happy.

Nd d same memories are torturous for nandini cause she feels manik faked everything.

Not everyone gets a second chance, but manik has got one.

Now its upto him how he makes amends. Though he is heartbroken cause nandini has lost her trust in him, but its all because of his idiocy.

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love_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

heya..u are right...it was such a big update...but believe me it was worth reading..maza aa gaya padh ke...i feel very sad for manik...uski ek galti ke vajah se he lost his love...she doesnt trust him at all...and that last me night vals part..hahah...hillarious...waiting for nxt part...plzz...update more than frnds...waiting for it..

Lots of love

Manan

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crazydreamer

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Marvelous part dear Update sooon waiting for real 😊

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prasanna77

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

it was amazing and long update😊...loved it...

now manik really loves and cares for nandini..u expressed that very nicely👏..

manik was trying hard to gain nandini's trust once again...

when manik was carrying her...she caught his shirt tightly because she doesn't trust manik like before

this was because of the one mistake done by manik...so obviously he must go through all this pain

and loved manan's first night...it was cute romance😳

again waiting eagerly for next part...

plz do update fast...

thanks for pm

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shruti1997

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Awesome
Loved the update
Manan r so cute

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riya_10101

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

NICE BADA WALA UPDATE...

CONT SOON😛...

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tanishasac

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

It was the longest and the best update till date.. I loved it to the core:* Thanks for the PM :*

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music_manan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

It was really beautiful update with mixture of past n present. It was a really big update with lots of emotions. I liked the flashback part very much. So manik is damn desperate to fix everything. Beautifully penned by u. Keep updating.

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Cooldude101

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

This was so beautiful thoug I'm pissed at manik for being the biggest moron but yet, the first night showed me that he want really a bad guy.
What he did is still pretty wrong. If they took the step after getting to know each other, how did Nandu not find out about him not loving her?
I can't help but wait to see how karma rewards him for his work.
Thank you continue soon

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