#2 MANAN SS- ONE MISTAKE CHP18 PG110 (15/2) *PMS TOM - Page 10

I really sorry for replying late.i didnt comment on the previous chapter.because i read it only today actually .i was little busy on my exams in last 2 weeks.

and coming to previous update it was a small one but i really liked it.u penned both manik and nandini s inner emotions very beautifully.he did a big mistake in his own words a crime.initially i hated him but now i really feel for him.u wrote his helpness very beautifully.

In latest update i liked the last portion manik thougt that nandini didnt trust him.that is also my question how cow could she trust him after doing this much.let him earn her trust.hope i will see a loving and caring husband in next updates.and nandini should also realize the change in manik.because she she deserve all the hapiness from her love.

PLZ UPDATE FAST

AND ALSO CONGRATULATIONS FOR NEW THREAD

THANKS FOR THE PM

plz kindly ignore my grammatical errors.

aww...poor nandu fell down..hehehe
u are so good wen u potray nandini's beauty..its like i start to imagine her in the way u write...i love ur writing yaar ...i m big fan of ur writing...
thanks for the pm

Amazin one. Feeling very bad fr manik. Knw dat voh bohath bura kiya nandini je saath. But still feeling bad fr him. Voh kab maaf karega

Wow!!
It's awesome update...
Both r broken..
Manik had so much pain when he got to know that she doesn't trust him anymore...
Flashback is superb...
Continue soon...
Thnxxx for the pm..
Looking forward to read further parts...

Hello darling,

😉😉😉😉😉😉😉😉

first of all, i love the threat!!!!.. good going..

Secondly, i read the update in watt pad as well. Did you update there first then here.. ????

I loved it when manik said i will never let you fall.. and Nandu heard it.. i also thought having the flashback was just hitting the right nail because i would looove to know how did she fell in love .. how she became his habit.. how they came close to each other..

All of these matters.. i loved the way you put the flash back within the story..

Why dont you update this regularly.. you update this chapter after long time..

Waiting for more...

Firstly to congrats for a new thread..
God bless u...

Secondly thanks for such a long update..

I loved it alot..not only this update but full story and whole concept..

U beautifully describe the house and that why manik particularly that place only..

Manik need to do hard work and with patience to win over her trust on his love and overall on him all over again..

Manik was sweet during their marriage time..
God knows ab kya ho gya ki he hurt her to this extend..

Loved it..
Cont soon...waiting.
LOVE,
MINI.

Amazing story...and amazing updates..read all chapter in a go...m loved them..plz do continue

Tank you soo much for the lonnng update
Loved manan moments
Maniks care towards her
Hope they patch up soon
And fab update
U just killed it ...
Thanks a lot for the pm dear!!

first of all thank you so much for the looonnnggg update. and pm...