#2 MANAN SS- ONE MISTAKE CHP18 PG110 (15/2) *PMS TOM

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anya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#101

marvelous update...

loved it...

all those past nd present scenes...

manik's care 4r nandini is smthg different...

he wants her 2 trust him back...

will he b succeed in dat?

nd in past dat 1st nyt scene...

ahhh...lovely...

nandini's innocence...

manik's talk...loved it...

wtng 4r d nxt part...

cont soon...

keep smiling!!!!

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sowmya-pamya

@sowmya-pamya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#102

Long enough ...
Thanku...
Gud one...
Was thinking of day nyt description...
Wating tp read sauted things soon...
U r doing a grt job...
Continue soonn...

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Arunima

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Posted: 9 years ago

#103

Hey dear i just read the whole story in a go and i must say im loving it! Its very beautifully written and im looking forward to reading how manik convinces his nandu... Cant wait to read what's next! Please continue soon and do PM me! Im in 12th so might not be very regular due to exams and bad health but i will definitely read and comment whenever possible!
Love,
Arunima

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kishubedi

@kishubedi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#104

Thanks for the pm

Loved it!

So now they re at a farmhouse far away from city

hope this will bring them closer to eachother!

i so can understand nandu its difficult for her to

forgive manik but she is tryin she is just not showing it

n loved the flashback of the first nigt

manik was so understanding

n nandu so innoccent n cute!

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mehak_ahuja

@mehak_ahuja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#105

Hey... Just found ur story and read it in one go...

N it was awesome loved it so So so much...

Firstly loved the concept n the name of the story too... N also I really like the fact that nandini is not giving in to his pleeds so easily .. Really like it how you are showing a strong women who is ready to fight.. Even in a broken state...

Thank u for sharing such beautiful story...

Conti soon

Keep smiling

Stay blessed

😊

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Swagatika

@sws2

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Posted: 9 years ago

#106

Nice updates.

Thanks for pm.

😊

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beautifulchaos

@beautifulchaos

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Posted: 9 years ago

#107

Firstly, congrats for a brand new thread... You deserve it...

Secondly, you have done a commendable job in the latest chapter and the story so far...

Coming to the latest update, I liked your vivid description of the farmhouse... Nandini will get time and ambience to gather herself and pull up her socks there for sure.. I like this Nandini broken, yet a fighter...

Coming to Manik and the flashback of their wedding night, I would give it to him that he is decent but apart from that I do not feel any sympathy for this guy...

He was marvelling on Nandini's beauty on way to farmhouse!!! Like seriously???? What about his deliberate blindness during the period they were married?? Also certain what ifs have not yet made peace with me.. What if Soha was not caught red handed? What if Nandini was not pregnant??? He would have moved on without a remorse.. His remorses and guilts do not cut slack with me, at least not at this juncture ...The guy is selfish- out and out. He wants Nandini and the child cause the lonliness haunts him.. It is only ' I, Me and Myself' for this guy . He is still lucky to get that one chance from Nandini...

However, I feel that Nandini deserves a chance to reconsider her decision - she should know about Soha's fiasco.. Give him another earful and announce her decision. In the meantime she would also need a loyal friend- except Kabir and Navya -- someone like Abhimanyu probably. Also she should try and be independent- not saying she should start something strenuous at the time being but anything that makes her independent much to Manik's chagrin.

I know you have an amazing story lined up and I look forward to reading more updates from you...

Update soon. Thanks for all the pms...

Love and God bless

Anura

Edited by bitasta - 9 years ago

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Pravallika69

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Posted: 9 years ago

#108

Awesome chapter loved the flashback how caring n loving Manik was towards nandu how much he understand her... Nandu was too cute n present meh loved concerned Manik... As always Manan were too cute n hope they both get together soon ... Waiting for next chapter update soon dear

Thanks for PM
Love you
Pravallika aka PraNi