#2 MANAN SS- ONE MISTAKE CHP18 PG110 (15/2) *PMS TOM

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A12609z

@A12609z

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Posted: 9 years ago

#61

Now come to the 2nd part flashback of thr 1st nyt...
It was sooo cuteee...n heart touching...

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plzzz esse hi kuch flash back add karna

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Add thr 1st Intimacy with Manik's POV

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A12609z

@A12609z

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Posted: 9 years ago

#62

Plzzz Update next part ASAP plzzz plzz atleast weekly to update karooo plzzz

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plzzz ff Bet n Billeniors plzzz plzzz

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Anushi

@anushi3012

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Posted: 9 years ago

#63

Thanks for the update.

Well, Manik taking her to the farmhouse, really hoping that it will turn to be positive for them...

Like the way how Manik was feeling concerned for her...

It was sad to see him being hurt... but, he deserved it.

As for Nandu, really hoping that nothing serious happened to her health...

Many thanks for the flashback!!!

I was really finding it very cute the way Nandu was reacting!!!

Even Manik was cute in his way.

Loved how their bond started...

Thanks for the pm.

Looking forward how their stay at the farmhouse will be.

Please keep it up with the good work you are doing!!

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dhillon90

@dhillon90

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Posted: 9 years ago

#64

Wowww awesome
Fab
Amazing
Fantastic
Superb
Mindblowing
Outstanding update
U penned it really beautifull...enjoyed a lot...flashback was awesome...lovd it
Continue soon

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urvxshi

@urvxshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#65

its awesome, amazing so good...feeling sad hw such a beautiful understanding got smashed by Maniks one mistake, hw cld he fall for another girl...wht did he feel ws missing..nandu badly hurt ..hope things get sorted out soon, you have beautiful described each of them's feelings, their farmhouse..it seems it all is happening in front of r eyes great hats off to you!

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Urvi Saini

@urvisaini

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#66

Mother nature nurses and heals her every child!

Manan are no less... along with their unborn child

I felt bad when manik picked up an injured nandini and she gave him cold shoulder. ...

But we'll he deserved every bit of it!

The wedding throwback memories. ...

Beautiful

Loved it

Thanks for the pm

Continue soon

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windowseatbug

@windowseatbug

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Posted: 9 years ago

#67

Awesome update.

Manik is really trying to fill Nandini now.

Liked his way of making peace with her.

Taking her out of busy city & staying with her close to nature.

He got hell worried listening to her scream.

Nandini doesn't trust him anymore.

Her small gestures before she observing are hurting him.

Old memories are also hurting them.

Loved the flashback.

They were really adorable.

Nervous Nandini.

But Manik was pretty understanding & sensible.

Loved the update.

Thanks for update & pm.

Continue soon :)

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Sree

@Sreeja_babu

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#68

Awesum dear..
Long update..thnks yaar..
Thnku so much 4 d pm dear...

Really lvd d update...
Manik takin nandu 2 farmhouse...
Lvd d way manik cared 4 nandu...
he s vry concern 4 her n baby..
Manik desrerves dis reject of nandu..
sumtyms feels vry bad 4 manik also...

Flashback scenes was awesum...
there nandu trusts manik so much..
Lvd d innocent nandu...
he itslf broken d trust..
Hope nandu will 4gv manik...

Awesum update dear..Penned well
do continue...👏