Manan ff : Tu Mera Jahan Hai updated pg 60 ( note ) - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61
Nice update n story n pls soha KO beech me mat Lana I hate her n pls make manik realize that he love her soon nandu itna hurt Hui tabhi bhi use realize nhi hua that he love her manik is really a jerk n pls don't show nandu weak. Manik be itna hurt KIA hai nandu KO now its time for him to pay back
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62
Awesome update
Finally manik has started showing concern for nandini in front of every one
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63
Story is interesting.. Loved the whole chapters.. Bichari nandu she is a pure soul, hope she don't get hurt more with manik's behaviour..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#64
Just loved all the part. Do pm me for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#65
Finally manik has started showing concern for nandini in front of every one Just loved all the part. Do pm me for the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#66

Ok...so here i am with new part...
I know its late m sorry...it was some problem...
By the way enjoy it...😉


Part 7...

All were confused by the sudden behaviour of manik... While mr.malhotra was just wishing for her happiness...
Because he had witnessed that side of nandini which is not seen by anyone...


They all settles in their cars and drives towards malhotra mansion...

Meanwhile manik was having his own plans... He take out his phone and call soha...

M : hey...what's up???.

S : hii...manik...nothing just sad...

M : y?? Everything ok???.

S : no...was just missing you...
Where r u???
M : unnmm...ya actually m busy...
Ummm...soha...

S: yes...speak...what...happen

M : can...umm..can i cancel trip for goa...???
You know i ..i can't show up...

Soha who was sitting calmly now stands with a jerk..as she ws having plans for him..to make her's...

S : what???...but y????
She speaks furiously..

M : umm...vo you know m..am busy with the meetings...and need to manage it all...so ya am sorry please cancel my tickets .

S : but..mani

Manik interrupts her

M : oh...hii...mr aman
Ummm...a min please...umm..soha bye will call yaa...

And he cuts the call...while soha just curses her fate...


Manik cuts the call and smiles hugely as if he got his Grammy...

But as soon as he looks on his other side his all smile fades away...

All this while when he was talking to soha that pure soul was flowing tears on thought... That how life has changed...

She was the who rarely cries but now opposite...


Manik stops his car on side it was alone road no one was around except trees...

M : nandini kya hua??? Y u r crying...

Nandini local ks towards him... Her eyes were sayi g all her pain... Her insecurities... Her lacking confidence ...

N : k...yy..uunnn...gaye the tum...mu...jhe chidkar...

She was crying her voice cracking...

Manik was shocked by this sudden question...

M : nandini,...

N : tumhe pata hai kitna dar gayi thi mai...mujhe laga...tum ab kabhi wapas nhi aayoge...tum...kisi aur se pyaar karne lage ho...

While speaking this nandini comes put from the car ...

Manik too follows her...

Their was pain in her voice...her eyew...

Nandu turns towards manik..

N : m...aani kya tumhe kabhi bhi meri yaad nhi aaye...mere baare mein nhi socha...

Listening to this manik turns his face
He remembers how he used cry for love which was not for him...

N : b...o...lo naa...manii...

M : tum...sabko bht yaad karta tha mai...roj sochta tha ki kab mai yahan se wapas aaunga...


N : tu kyun nhi aaye...

M : v...ii..bhaa...

N : vibha...

M : yes...vibha...my..l..ove...

And that was the thing manik shouldn't have said it...

Nandini was numb... She was not able to react the person for whome she cried... For whome she waited for 5 years... For whome she was alive after her parents death never loved her...instead lover someone else...

Manik turns towards nandu and sees no more tears were coming out..

She was standini there motionless

Manik walks tiwards her and cups her cheek...

M : nandu...i...i..don't know...kaise ye sab hua... I tu never talked her...
Vo na mere PA ki bhain thi... Vo office aaya karti thi... But slowly we both fell in love...i really..lo

N mandu cut him off...

N : i love you manii...i love you...
Manik was shocked he knew about it but he didn't knew that he will face that situation that too so fast..

M : na...nn..di...ni...

Nanduturns...

M : vo...mai...nadu..
I'm sorry... I.can't... Nandu...

Nandini starts walking she was not able to understand anything...
She was so numb to react...

Manik was scared he can't see one more imp.. Person of his life walking away...

Tears were continuously flowing from his eyes...

M : don't go nandu...mujhe...chodkar... I will not be able to handle this...i can't...
Vo bhi chali gayi...is duniya bht dur..
Vo kabhi nyi aayi ab tum mat jao please...

Listening to this nandini freezed she was shocked...she looks back and her heart pierce into zillionth pieces

Manii was on his knees and was crying...

Nandu was not able to understand what ro do or not...

She takes deep breathe... As she knew she have to this for her friend.. For her manii...

She walks towards him...
Sits on her knees and quietly place her face on her heart and keeps her arms around his...

Manik needed this...he quickly hugs hee...as soon as he hugs her he found his solace... But he was not in state to understand...


After 15 min...

Both were sitting near cliff...on bench...

Manik's head was in her lap and she was ruffling his hair...

M : nandu...I'm sorry...

Nandu looks towards him and faintly smiles...

Manik too faintly smiles...

Manik takes deep breathe : vo...use.. Cancer tha...i...miss her...


N : isliye you never talked me manii...
Ek dost samajh ke tu baat karte manik... Believe me ek baar bolte mai tumhari zindagi se bht door chali...

There was pain in her voice...
Listening ti this his heart was paining but y he himself was unaware...

M : no..i did not wanted to loose you. Isliye...

Nandu : mai harshad se pyaar nhi karti thi...

M : hmm...i...know...

Manik stands from her lap..he sits on his knees and takes her hand in his

M : listen...i...i..don't ki mai tumhe kabhi bhi pyaar kar pavings... Bur i will always their for you as a friend...and you know what my love is more pure for you as a friend nandini... I will always protect you.. Always... I...will..there for you till my last breathe nandini



Listening to this nandini smiles and hugs him...but still IT HURT'S...

Acha ek joke ho jaaye...

Person to god...
P : fod aapke liye ye duniya ke saare paise kitne hai...
G: beta athani ke barabar
P : aur duniya ka saara time...ab tak...
G : 1 second...
P : bhagwan mujhe athani dedo...
G : beta 1 second ruk jaa...

He he he he he he he😃

Ok guys i know it's big crao...
I'm sorry for this but...m sorry...ye hi hua...
Mistakes ke liye maaf karna...
😆

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Posted: 9 years ago
#67
I m damn confused manik was in love with vibha...he is in affair now soha...n married to nandini...why r u making nandini typical 19 century women who loves husband after knowing he is cheating...plz be practical...he was just angry bcoz harshad proposed nandini...n what he did ...ye Bhaut sahi khud to muh marro after all..but wife should be commuted n love him only...plz ...make nandini independent n make her move on...make an inspiration to women strong ness not abla n crying women...waiting for one side love of husband lifetime...plz be practical ...we r not watching ekta kapoor serial...I beg u...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#68
means he came back bcoz she died...otherwise he would never come back to see nandini alive or dead...he enjoyed everything with vibha now needs someone shoulder to cry...so came back...plz...make cabir get divorced both n make her free...n happy...love bring happiness also not only crying n tears...make happy with Arya...as a friend...everyone has rite to be happy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
hey...
just read last two updates...

manik is hurt...
he loved her bt saying it as lust...
go and get some brains dude...he is so confused...urghh..

ab yeh vibha ka kya chakkar hai...

haawww.she died of cancer...

finally nandini said...wat she needed to say...

loved their frndship...

bt manik ko thoda sort out dikhao...
his life is all messed up

i loved the update

continue soon


LOVE
SANJANA
Edited by krazzy_parthian - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#70
amazing
and vibha vala part was amazing
but manik nandini se pyaar nahi karta kya
continue
soon
do pm me

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