Manan ff : Tu Mera Jahan Hai updated pg 60 ( note )

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hello to all of you
I am new to this forum
It's gonna be our first story that too on sinfully hot couple Manan
So we need your support and love

You can call us by name SaYa I and my best friend
We will write this story together...

Now coming back to story
In our story Manan are Married but love is yet to be come which will be fun
As I like story in which there is pain love yearning so my story gonna be with this things
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INDEX

Character sketch : page 1
Part 1 : page 1...
Part 2 : A and B : page 2
Promo : page 2
Part 3 : page 4
Part 3 B part : 5
Part 4 : page 6
Part 4 B : page 7
Part 5 : page 8
Part 6 : page 10
Part 7 : page 13
Part 8 : page 14
Part 9 : page 16
Part 10 : page : 18
Part 11A : page 20
Part 11 B : page 22
Part 12 : page 25
Part 13 : pg 27
Part 14 : pg 28
Page 14 B : pg 31
Part 15 : pg 33
Part 15 B : pg 40
Part 16 A pg 46
Part 16 B pg 48
Part 17

Part 18 pg 54

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Character sketch
Malhotra's

Raj Malhotra : Best husband,father,friend and businessman... He is...
He loves his family so much...and pampers his daughter in law very much...

Nyonika Malhotra : mother of two children's... Love her family so much...she is best mum...loves her daughter in law like her own daughter...

Manik Malhotra : Hot handsome hunk of 25...he can make any girl fall on her knees...only higher of malhotra industry...passion is music have his own band fab 5..
Loves his friend's and family very much... Pampers his younger sister the most...

Mukti Malhota : hot,sweet girl...loves her friends and family very much...is engaged to Abhimanu thakkar her love...
Pampers her bhabhi cum sissy a lot...member of fab 5

Nandini Malhotra : the youngest member in this cute si family of 22...she is doctor...she is pride of her family...
She is an orphan but never felt like one as...
She have brothers like abhi and cabir
Sissy like alya and mukti
Bff like navya and dhruv
Parents like nyonika and raj...
She have so much of love but STILL It HEARTS...
Still she crave for love of her soul,love, world, jahan...
For which she is waiting from last 3 months...

...
Others character sketch is down

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Others characters are same as show...

Cavya and dhrulya are married...

Mukbhi are engaged..

Manan are married

Manan parents were best friends..

...
All boys are of 25...

Alya and Navya are of 24...

Mukti of 23...

Nandini of 22...

Ho gyaa...yipeee...guys please like it comment...

And i need banner...for my story...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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This is so nice...

Loved the cs...

Continue soon

LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Helloo guys...i m back that tooo very soon
Kya karun ruka ni jara to pen it down...
On tuesday exam is their and don't know any thing...
But its ok because i can't wait to write it...
Acha ab bakwas ho gyi..

So here is chappy..
Part 1

Mumbai roads were busy as always...sea sound giving its touch to noise coming from vehicle..and a shining moon...
Spreading its light all over...

But bit far from their in a farmhouse pare is going on...
And on bar counter is sitting guy in black tuxedo... All girl are drooling over him they only want one chance and they will through themselves ON him...but he is busy with his thoughts that his life took 360 turn in last 3 months...

But suddenly his thoughts were broken by voice...

Voice : what's up bro...u alone baaki sab kahan hai..

He : oh..abhi hii...ya baaki sab...hmm they ya they are coming...

Abhi : oh ok...by the thanks for coming..Manik..

Manik : ahh no no y r u saying thanks...u r family man...

While taking him in warm friendly hug...

Abhi : ya...he turns and... Yes here they are...

Manik too turns and see cavya and mukti coming together..

Abhi : hello guys...u r late...
Ant take mukti in a hug...
Muku : hawww...my baby missed mee...

Cabir : aaj kal ke bacho mein sharam ni hai...suna nhi shaadi se phle...haat bhi ni lagate...
Navya : dekhte bhi ni haii...

Abhi takes mukti in side hug...

Abhi : acha..par cabir kya kare sharam tu humne bech khayi...

Cabir : hmm...dikh ra hai...by the way party is nice...

Abhi : thank you but where is alya dhruv and of course mu babu doll...

Muku : ya they are coming...together...

She turns towqrds manik and give him hug...

Muku : u r looking hoott bhai...

Manik smiles and
Manik : not more than u my princess...

All smile seeing their lovey talks...

Navya : yee here they are...

Alya and dhruv in a side hug coming laughingly... And behind then baby doll dressed in black saree with silver border her backless blouse and milky skin with little eye make up was making her look etheral...and seeing her everu one was ogling her...

Abhi : here come my doll...

He hugs her...

Cabir : someone is looking hot...

Nandini blushes and hide inside abhi' coat...and all go aww on her cute antics...while manik was standing their lost in beauty standing in front of him...

Every one hug each other...and than cabir breaks the trance of manik...

Cabir : manik tu ni karega hug nandini ko
Listening to this manan eyes become wide and all look towards manik smilingly...

Manik : woh mai woh...

Dhruv : are hug kr naa...

Nandini was looking towards manik having HOPE that maybe for once he will come and hug her greet her but she know thar maybe she is not that lucky...
Manik ignores question and looks away...and everyone too understand situation and change topic but suddenly voice comes and make every one hell anoyed,angry,hurt...

Voice : Baby...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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Only silent readers,...but it's OK... It will take time...
Ok so next part today afternoon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome!
Mindblowing
amazin'
superb update
I hope that girl isn't Manik's gf and even if she is I just hope she's not soha!!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part 2

part A

every one was annoyed by the entry of unwanted person...manik turns hos face towards the owner of the voice and smiles
while all make an irritated face as they all are aware of manik so called friend real side...

manik : soha...

soha comes and through herself on manik first manik was taken aback but than he also gave in hug...
all were irritated...while nandini was standing their rolling her pallu in her fingires and tears were filled in her eyes and her gaze was fixed on manik's hand which were hugging soha...

nandini's pov

ayippa manik always ignores me...
till now he never hugged me...
but soha??????
am i not capable of hos love...???
am i that unlucky ki i do not deserne his love????.
...

soha: i missed you...

manik : its only have been 3days...

soha : hmmm...and she tightens the hug manik was feeling awkward now...he was going to break hug ehen his eyes fell on nandini...he was confused first but than he immediately breaks the hug...

soha : what happen????...

manik : aah...vo mai...mai keh ra tha ki you here...

he fumbled with his words...

soha : ya wo actually dads partner in buisness party so...

manik nods with a smile...soha was again going to hug him but cabir intruppted...

cabir : ahh...soha humse bhi tu mil lo...

soha turns toward cabir and smiles annoyingly...

soha : hello cabir...how are you..??????

cabir mumbles : tumhare aannne sr pehle sab thik tha...soha : what??? sry..

cabir : nothing...

soha than greet everyone and than her eyes falls on nandu...she goes near her...

while boys turns towatds bar counter as they were standing on side of it...and girls started talking about party...

soha : helli nandini...

nandini smiles faintly and : hey...

soha : you ate looking pretty...

nandu : thanx...

soha smirks : but u knw what tumhare itna tayar hone ka koi fayada ni hai ab dekho na manik tu dekh bhi ni rha...dekha kaise hug kar ra tha...tumhe shayad hi usne hug...are vo ti door ki baat touch kiya ho galti se...and she laugh


nandu was in teats it wasnot like ki she was not syrong but the time soha spoke about manik and her...she was true...do nandu keept num...

soha was speaking this so slowly so that no one heats but little did she knew the damage was already done...



naxt b part in a while
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part B...

alya listens all this as she was standing on nandu side...first she was quiet but than nandu's tear fell on her hand which was kept on nandini left...she bursts out...

alya : soha...you don't need to tell that how she is looking or not...

she speaks it sternly siha was confused while all their friends turns towa
ards them and were confused but when they listen nandini name they understands that soha had done somethng accept manik...


alya : aur rhi baat show off ki tu it only suits bitch like you...not a girl like nandini...and about manik tu he is stupid that he is not seeing your real bloody side.. ...
nandini kuch ni kehti it doesnt means u will talk shitss...

she speaks all this angrily...

muktu : soha if you have for today so pkease just leve...

soha shocked alya rocked...
she stomps her foot and leaves angrily... 😡 😡

manik was shocked...

manik : what was that???? alya...

muku : bhai pleease if you don't know any thing so don't speak...

manik : but muk...

he was abot to say further but stops sering nandini running towards main door...no one react as they knew she needs time...

manik : what happened???????

all ignores his question and...

alya : guys m not feeling well you know if we can go...home..

muku : hmmm...mmee yooo...

cabir : ti chalte hai...

navya :hmmm...abhi hum bhi chalte hai...

abhi : ya guys...its ilok...

manik ; so ill also coming...

they all come out side...manik take cabir keys and goes to get car...

manik was walking without seeing down...

their were so many broken glasses were lying...it was looking as some has done it intentionally...

suddenly water fall from up on manik and he turns...he was not fully drenched but his shoes wrre...

manik : oh shit...ye pani kahan se aise gir gaya ...shoes utarne padengge...

he take out his shoes and take tham in hand and start moving towards car...and was abot to kerp his foot on that glasse piece when...

voice : maaanniiikk...and push manik down due to sudden push manik losses his balance and he fell down and person also fall down with back on glasses...but manik was safe...

manik immediately stands up and make the person stand by holding from back...he feel something...
on his hand and to check it he bring to him sef and was shocked to see blood on his hand...he shouts...

manik : nandiini... ...




all also come their by listening voice...and were baffled...to see nandini in manik arm and glass pieces all over around and blood falling from nandini shoulders and waist...

as nandu was wearing backless blouse so all glass pieces hurt her all over her back...

cabir runs towards them and took fainted nandi in his arms and run towards car while all follow hom but manik was still their schoked...


guys sorry for mistake ye hi hai jo hai...
read it and tell me if you want me to add any thing...
actually my exams are going on soo...late update but i got silent readers more...'"
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awwsuumm . . Il ove such concept .. Plz continue soon .. Waitin for der luv realization

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