Manan ff : Tu Mera Jahan Hai updated pg 60 ( note ) - Page 9

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Posted: 9 years ago
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sorry dear I hurted u...nice twist...update soon...n I was not bashing u bas telling to show strong nandini
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update dear
Cont soon.. .
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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Nice update...
Manik is being blackmailed?
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
read the last 2 updates...
so manik loves her alot n there was no vibha...he was telling a lie to her...to keep her safe he is staying away from her n showing as if he dosent love her...
but he is entering her room every night since there wedding but how come he is doing this from last 3 months as after the marriage he had only at home for 1 month(as cabir said)...??
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
Awsmmm

But litttle confusion

Clear all the misunderstanding between manan

Coun sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86

Ok so i am here with new part...

I saw that some people were saying sorry...

But really it's ok...you have full right...as you all are the one who gives our story a name...

So ya..
No worries...
Ok so here is new part i hope you guys will enjoy this...


Part 9...

It was bright morning with new things...

Nandini opens her eyes as sunrays kisses her beautiful angelic face...

She slowly slowly opens her eyes...and sits straight...yawningly...

Sleep was still in her eyes due to immense pain she was having...

She joins her hand and prays to her ayippa for a good day unaware of fact actuallt what types of things her ayippa wanted her to cross and live happily or sad...

She after doing her praying and to mention praying only about all people of her life...but for herself was a big zero...

She takes her things and was going to enter in washroom when a paper of white colour lying on sofa catches her eyesights...

She keeps her things on sofa and takes paper in her hand...

N : ye kya..hai...umm..
Yahan kaise...

She was ammuzing about paper's master when her phone rings...

She keep paper back on table...
Ans goes to pic her phone...

While paper sighs...and thanks to ayippa..to save it's master from hiding his big secret...

N : hey..aryaman...what's up???

Arya : ok...am..cool...so..same..to you mada'm how r you???

N : am..better...so how come you called me?????

Arya : so you want any specific reasons from me to call...you...listen..you ate my friend and i can call you anytime i want...

He said in threatening voice...

Nandu chuckles...: it's nothing like i was just asking..you...as you call so early...

Arya : ya...just to check on you..

Nandini : umm...in that case am better..acha call you later i have to be ready...

Arya : ok...bye..
...

Nandini : good morning everyone...

She greets everyone sitting in dinning room...after havin bath

...everyone too greets her ofcourse...buy hugs..kisses and blesses..

She takes her place which was b/w...
Mom and dad...

She looks here and there searching for manik who was no where to be seen
...

Alya : if..you..are finding him tu he is...in study room...

Nandini looks here and there and speaks
Wo actually...mai khana room mein hi khalungi...so yaa..

She put dishes in two plates and quickly run from their to escape herself from others questiones...

All laughs...

Nyo : i hope soon...they will be able to mend their relation...

Raj : hope so...

All smiles but cabir was expressionless..
As he had listened from manik about not loving nandini even after knowing truth..

He sighs sadly..unknown to the fact that he is unaware of the fact...

Nandini enters in study room...and greets him...
Manik too greets her back...

Nandini was confused as manik was pacing from here to there in talash of some thing...

N : kya hua manik...

M : umm...vo..one paper was there..
I don't no kahan gya...raat ko tha...

Nandini out of curiosity... Asks him..
Are you talking about white colour paper with some technical works...

Manik loks at her and nods.. : ya ya. That one...did you see it...

Nandini in confusion : ya..but it was in my room...i don't no how come it came their did you came in my room last night as i don't remember you coming in my room till 10 in night...did you???

Listening to this all colours vanishes from his bright face...

He looks here and there and founds thing to escape from this situation...

M : aahhh...foood...udfff...thanks nandu.. I was really hungry...

He runs toeards food and sits on couch starts eating while nandini mke wierd face on his behaviour but than chucking..all her thoughts she too join him...and they both eat...talking...

After finishing there breakfast manik headed towards nandini room..for paper while nandini follows him...

As they enters inside nandini was feeling happy...

She pass the paper to manik and he thanks her to which she just give whatever looks making manik smirk...

Out of nowhere suddenly nandini speaks..
N : isn't it strange leaving in seperates roon even after being hubby and wifey??

She speaks this with sad smile...

Manik looks at her and he can see tha pain of not being loved by her own husband...she was lookin at empty side of her bed...which should be of him...

It was manik's roomm...after their marriage .
Manik shifted to another room...

Their was awkward silence when suddenly nandini feels wet...

She quickly runs in washroom leaving confused manik behind...

He frowns and goes out side..

As he goes nandini comes out and takes her personal need of that moment...when from no where manik enters in room...

Manik looks towards nandini who was standini with wide eyes...

Manik's eyes travel down to her hands and he saw pad in her hand...

He quickly looks another side...

Nandini too runs in washroom...

Both were embarrassed...

Manik came back to inform her about party...which nyonika told that they all have to attend it...

He without informing goes out not want to face her...

After completing her work she comes down...

And no one was present their she ask kaka about every one...

Kaka : ji...saab log tu office gaye hai...
Aur navya aur alya betiya bahar gaye hai...
Aur madam ji bhi apne kaam se bahar gaye hai...
Aur mukti betiya...apne kamre mein hai..

N : jii..thankyou...

Kaka : kaisi baatein kar rahi hai baby ji..
Acha thik hum aapke liye juice laate hai..madam ji ne humei khaas bola hai..

Nandini nods..as she know her no will be not taken in tjis thing...



Soon every one was back...from their works...

Raj enters and found all the woman's sitting and having gala time...

He greets everyone and kisses nandu on her forhead...

Manik too enters and greet everyone..

As his eyes met with nandini he looks else where but not her...

Nandini was looking pale..

Manik knew the reason..

He goes and sith near nandini not making any eye contact all were busy in deciding about their dress for party...

Manik slowly puts his hands around her waist making nandini shiver...

Nandini looks at him but he was looking otherside...

Manik presses his hand on her stomach to ease her pain...

Nandini understands y he is doing this and blush kepte on her face...
Which get noticed by manik...

He too smile...


And soon all goes in party leaving manan alone behind as nandini was not feeling well and manik also for her...

It was around nine...

Manik was alteady in nandini's room...

Nandini enters with coffee and passes it to manik who was busy in his work...

Manik : nandini y r u going down...
You should not walk much come sit here...

He holds her hand and make her sit...

Beside him...on bed...

Nandini feel shy as manik was so openly telling hee about her own situation...

Manik : now you will not walk...and yoy change in my shirt...you will feel more comfortable...

Nandini looks at him with widening eyes and manik to get back his senses as how cool he is talkin...

But keeping his image he speaks..

Are go na...

Nandini nkds and quickly runs with her red cheeks..

And manik too smile but soon it fades as he remember his fate in not so good...

His eyes become moist...
...he sighs sadly and cirses his fate...




Ok guys lamba update hai...

I NEED COMMENTS...
Likes...

Or haan about manik living only 1 month tu he used to come every night late and used to go early...
Friendsforever9 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#87
awesome update dear
cont soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88
loved it
amazing part
hope everything is cleared between manan
continue soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
awesome update
loved it so much
good one
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Love it.
Amazing story
Next update soon .
Please if you send pm pls send me

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