Manan ff : Tu Mera Jahan Hai updated pg 60 ( note ) - Page 5

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Posted: 9 years ago
#41
emotional update
loved it
good one
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
Amazing update...
loved it to the core...
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43

Hello am here with new part...

Hope you will enjoy...

Both were crying hugging each other... Even god was crying to see the reunion of two friends.. Who stayed away from each for so long... They craved for each other , cried for each other... But never steeped forward to each other...

Today they were each other as afriend soon to be soulmates..

Will they be able to realize that they are meant to be?? well let keep it on destiny...

After sometime manik breaks tha hug and cups her cheek...

They both were so close that only their faces were apart otherwise whole body was in contact with each other...

Manik removes tears from her eyes... But he himself was shedding tears...

Both were flowing their tears...

Manik takes deep breathe and...

M : bas...nandu... Now don't hmm... You are tu my good girl na..

N : maniii... I...i...missed you...i. I...miss...

And she again started crying...

M : ni nandini...don't cry bacha...
N : manii...y..ou..won't... Le..ave
me na...maniii..

M : nope...I'll not..hmm.. Now stop crying... Chalo..

Nandini nods and hug him again..

Manik smiles and his around her as he do this nandu shrieks in pain...

Manik get alert and immediately broke hug

M : nandini babu...kk.kya hua is it paining painig so much haan..

N : nnoo...vo...its..its just...
M..m.ok...

She was out of words as she saw her state in which she was standing...

Manik was confused by this sudden change in his behaviour

And that was when he noticed nandini...

He see her from top to bottom shamelessly...

Manik's pov.
God...she...she..is...so beautiful..
I mean yaa she was cute but now tu she is looking hot..
Manik wahat the hellmm.man ????
Kya soch rha hai tu...niw look somewhere else... See how comfortable she is...

Manik look towards other side and hold her hand...
Nandini looks towards him confused...

M : come... You need rest...

He takes her to bed and laid her down...he covers her with blanket...and than giving medicines..
He smiles and

M : you...rest and if you need something call...me hmm..

He was about to go but nandu holds her hand..

N : don't go please... Don't leave me..

Manik tried to speak but she tightens her hold..

Manik understand she needs him..

He smiles and nods...

Nandini shifts side and manik sits beside her ...

Nandini After sometime keeps her head on manik's lap and sleeps...

Manik smiles on her cute antics...

He caresses her hair... And bends down little and kisses her forehead...

Than he goes near her chicks and kisses her both chick...

After admiring her for sometime manik also drifted in sleep...





I know its short par kaam chalao isi se...

I'll update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#44
So sweet...
Finally they realized their friendship...
Misunderstandings cleared...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#45
Lovely story line..please pm in next update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#46
Awesome story ... read it in a go...continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#47
Super
I read it in one go
I really loved the story plz continue soon
Waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
#48
Nice story
Read all part in a go
Continue soon
Take care
And haan pls pm me if you can
Please
Take care
:)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#49
Awww...shoo shoo shoo shoo shoo shweet ...

Nandi is such a baiby...

Liked finally manik ko akal aa rahi hai...

Ab chotu tha toh nxt wala jaldi...plz


LOVE
SANJANA
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Posted: 9 years ago
#50
It was very touchi.
Like it


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