Aiyoo Ayyappa- FF-Thread 3- Chapter 52-on pg 142

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Aditi jain

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Posted: 9 years ago

#851

Finally

U updated

I was waiting for so long

Bt it was cute

Navni taking care of manbir

About Maniks past

I noe nandu

Will make him forget all of dat

Bt yar I really wanna see jealous manik

C if u cn do dat

Plzzz

N continue soon

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NiyaJaiswal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#852

nyc update...
waiting for diwali party...
continue soon...

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Ghatashah

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Posted: 9 years ago

#853

Nice updet... Pls next upset thoda big Vala Dena...

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mananneetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#854

finally u r back!!!
loved the update
i really enjoyed it
loved manan bonding
nd cavya naughty teasings
loved that last manbir part too/..
waise when u will open maniks secret??
he doesnt believe in love/..bt i m sure nandu will make him believe
really excited fr diwali special performance!!
update soon

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RainFlies

@RainFlies

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Posted: 9 years ago

#855

srry but Mnaik dont know whether he will be able to fall in love again? then what abt his feeling in last night when he was alone with nandini or when he was at her home? one para in the update changed all the story in last updates...strange but if it will matter abt heart broken manik in past then this track dont suits in this story...srry to say but thats what i felt ...u have full liberty to develope the story the way you want...

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absnads

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Posted: 9 years ago

#856

nice update..

mukthi n dhru r getting suspicious of manan & cavya...

I hope both the couple realise their feelings soon..

pls update soon

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Yathignna Arhitha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#857

Nice and awesome
And so sweet
Mukti has started his profession of being a detective
I hope they realise early they are in love
Cont. Soon

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Redcrystal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#858

Nice update

Keep it up

But the story is going a little slow

You have written very good

Continue soon

Thanks

Stay blessed

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Lizbeth

@Lizbeth

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Posted: 9 years ago

#859

I missed u..
The update WS fab
Waitin for the next.. Diwali celeb wid lots of romance..I guess

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shoana

@shoana

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Posted: 9 years ago

#860

welcome back pria🤗
superbb update👏
hope manan realises their feelings soon
dhruv and mukti are perplexed seeing manan and cavya's bonding😕😆
cabir teasing navya😆
can't wait for diwali now
waiting for some fireworks
continue soon

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