MaNan TS : Coz You're Mine [Part Two Updated - PG 22] 28 Nov - Page 15

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Hey Guys! So Finally I wrote this final chapter ! Phewwwhh !

I have put in all my brains and tried my best to do justice with the story and also your expectations. I hope you all will like it :) I apologize if it didn't stand up to what you wanted to read.

Anyone who are looking forward to this part to read some naughty stuff; I am Sorry but you won't be finding anything of that sort :) People who follow me from long know that I don't heat up things in two Shots :P

Its a passionate story and there are surely intense moments. Nothing more than that :) Apologies again if you were expecting.

ThankYou so much for loving the story and supporting me. It really touches my heart how you guys take everything I write. Its really sweet and I Love You all for that.

Hopefully will come up with another TS - whenever a different Idea crops up in my mind.

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Part - Two

Hell bent on making Manik come around; Cabir had devised a wise plan and made Nandini ostensibly quit College and kept her hidden from Manik - for a whole one week to build up the anxiousness and crave within him - which basically forms the first step of the plan.


And as per expectations; Manik was maddened by her sudden disappearance and had become totally out of sorts. He was being cursed by every single cell of his heart for hurting and pushing away the only and most trustworthy person; who would've really and selflessly stayed by his side till the eternity. With every breath and every blink of an eye; he was regretting for being a stupid, was hoping for her to be safe and was begging his destiny to make her run into him one last time after which he would never let her go again. This separation had knocked quite a lot of brains into his head and at the same time had also loosened all its screws. The crave to see her every so starry eyes; the yearning to hear her mellifluous laugh and most of all; the longing to feel her warm presence around him once again had driven him bonkers. Eating; drinking; sleeping or even breathing were long forgotten tasks for him and the only thing he did was rove around the city and search for her - anywhere and everywhere he could. There was neither any end nor beginning to his days and time too had just stopped ticking away for him. His seconds were longer than hours and his every hour; without her; was longer than a hundred decades combined. His eyes that were trained to cry only out of anger - now shed endless tears of love and pain. With every beat of his heart - he implored the God and his stars to not snatch her; the only ray of light that held the power of brightening up his darkened world and his happiness; away from him and do him one favor of blessing him with her once again.


But little did he know; that God had already written her name with Golden ink in the dark pages of his fate and everything unfortunate happening was nothing but a consipracy to get them back together - stronger and never to be broken apart.


Kahan ho tum Nandini?Manik sighed helplessly; leaning against his car that stood parked near a cafe where Nandini loved having coffee. Answering his question which was more like a plea and ending the six days long hide and seek game; Nandini stepped out from a car she was waiting in for him to come and the moment his eyes caught sight of her; a lone tear of joy welled up in his eye and coursed down his cheek.


Just like him; this portracted disconnection was nothing less than a punishment for her. She loved him with all her heart and had also missed him to the heavens and back. Where it filled her with delight to see him again after ages; it also ripped her heart into threads to find him so disheveled and all she wanted to do was run and engulf him in her arms. But curbing the nudges of her so-much-in-love heart for the meantime; putting up a blank face; she acted as if he didn't exist and walked past him into the cafe. She was very well aware what he was going through but she also knew that though he had understood his feelings; expressing it like a normal human being wasn't his cup of tea and the only emotion that could blurt the confession out of him - was his famous anger mixed with a little of annoyance. And building up this aggression within him was basically the next and final step of their plan.


Gathering all his courage and taking in some deep breaths; he followed her like a love sick puppy into the cafe only to find her sitting with a guy; who was no one but Cabir in disguise; and get nettled. Cabir smirked on reading his reaction out of corner of his eyes and to boil his blood all the more; he held Nandini's hand and said, a bit louder than necessary for Manik to hear clearly I am so glad you came to meet me. Tumhari tarah; tumhara dil bhi bohot khubsurat hai Nandu. Agar bura na mano toh main ek baat kahun?He had dared to hold her hand, passed a flirtatious comment on her beauty and moreover was addressing her as Nandu and the major highlight was that Nandini was comfortable with all of it - Manik was hell pissed and jealousy had already replaced blood in his veins. Controlling his urge to just stride across the room and dig the boy's grave - for some reason; Manik grumbled and stomping his feet; reached near their table and stood by the counter; partly to eavesdrop their conversation and partly to come into her notice. Smiling inwards at his cute antic, she squeezed Cabir's hand and replied, in a honey laced voice Haan bolo na. His ears were aching to hear her baby voice and when finally she spoke; everything else around muted for him and his lips found the lost smile of peace. For a moment; he absolutely forgot the scenario as his whole attention was held captive by her and being a little generous; Cabir let him admire his angel for a couple of minutes and then coughed loudly, breaking his reverie and on seeing the insecure hulk concentrate again; he spoke in a romantic way Bohot din se main tumse yeh kehna chahta hoon Nandini. Aur yeh baat itni special hai ke main issey coffee shop jesi jagah per karna nahi chahta. I want to take you somewhere! Chalogi na mere saath? The oh - so lovable proposal successfully managed to get under Manik's skin and create the required volcanic havoc within him of wrath and enviousness. He was totally steamed up and burning hot under the collar; his fingers clenched into fists with nails dug deep in the flesh of his palms and his provoked possessive side blazed with fury at the sight of someone else asking his girl out. Somewhere at the back of his head; there still hummed a faint voice that kept giving him second thoughts of letting her live her life with someone better but now when things similar were going on live before his eyes; he sussed it that it was beyond him to let anything of that sort happen; that she was; is and will always remain his and that he couldn't bear her with anyone else. And to claim all these rights on her; he pulled himself out of his thoughts and before he could even take a step forward; their sudden disappearance got him stopped in his track. Guessing that she might've given a nod to accompanying him to where he had planned to take her and twigging the obvious fact that they've left for the same; he swore under his breath and hastened out to pursue them.


Manik was restless with the week long doorie; witnessing her with another boy had made him sore in the head and the only feeling needed to create the perfect ready-for-confession Manik was - fear; fear of loosing a Loved one. And to bring about this last emotion to mix up with the former two - was the ultimate step that involved - faking an accident.


Hopped on a bike; Nandini and Cabir were awaiting Manik and as soon as he stepped out and clocked them; Cabir kicked the bike on and sped towards the highway. Hurriedly; Manik leapt across the road - towards his car, jumped in and began chasing them but from a considerable distance. Cabir was deliberately driving rash and at a fatal speed - of course after taking all the safety measures - to spark up the tension in his dear friend. And exactly according to his intentions was Manik's state; horror - struck and panic - striken. He had already murdered the guy; Cabir; for umpteen times in his mind and was also keen on doing it in real - once he would get hold of him; for driving so recklessly, that too when a girl, his Nandini was also on the bike with him.



Just when Manik opened his mouth to thank the Lord for keeping her safe till the moment; taking the final and most risky plunge - Cabir took a right turn and skid the bike - after dropping its velocity and in the blink of an eye - landed himself and Nandini on the road. They had practiced the stunt and so were completely fine with just only little bruises here and there. Smiling; they gave each other a thumbs up and lay back on the road - pretending getting injured.



Dreaded to wits on espying his life lying wounded on the road; Manik brought his car to a screechy halt and asked, rushing towards her and checking her arms and legs Shit! Nandini tum! Kitni mar lag gayi. Are you okaye? God! All this is because of this jerk. You Moron! I won't spare you. He yelled and before Nandini could even utter a word; he made the guy; Cabir; stand on his feet and began raining blows on him along with many sweet verbal abuses. They; or to be more precise; Cabir was sure of getting rewarded this way and hence, was fully prepared. After three four punches; that Cabir had decided to take to make everything seem real; Nandini intervened and shouted, freeing the poor soul from Manik's clutches Stop It Manik! Chodo ussey! And what the hell are you doing here? Dancing on the chance and also to give the duo the much needed privacy; Cabir ran blindly and faded away into the jungle. Manik was entirely disturbed with everything and her act of saving him; angered him all the more. Grabbing her from elbows; he jerked her closer and blasted What the hell I am doing here? Yeh sawal mujhe tumse puchna chahiye. What the hell were you doing here? Kuch hojata abhi toh?? Aur itne din se kahan thi tum haan? Tumhe pata bhi hai main kaise pagalon ki tarah tumhe dhoondraha tha? He surely was a Monster but she wasn't an ounce afraid of him. With all her force; she shoved him away and snapped, glaring at him Main kahin bhi jaon - kuch bhi karun! Tumhe ussey kya farq padta hai? Hotey koun ho tum mujhse sawal puchne waley? She didn't wanted it to be this way; but the ire she had suppressed within herself for all those things; though fake; he had said in return of her I Love You and out of his idiotic logic - just erupted like lava all of a sudden. Shooting a black look at him; she moved away but again tugging her near - he replied, gritting his teeth Fark padta hai! Samjhi tum? Fark padta hai mujhe. Ab batao kahan gayab hogayi thi tum? Who was that bloody man? And why the hell was he with you? Why??? Again; she struggled out from his grip and roared whilst crying incoherently Kyun fark padhta hai tumhe haan? Tum toh casanova ho na? Main toh tumhare standard ki nahi hoon phir tumhe kiun fark padhta hai? Tum toh mujhse pyaar ni karte na. Main kahin bhi jaun kuch bhi karun! Whether I stay alive or not - why does that bother you haaan? Main kis ladke ke saath hoon ya nahi - issey tumhara koi lena dena nahi hai. Meri life hai - Main chahey unse baat karun - unhe kiss karun ya unke saath sojaun ! Tumhe ussey fark na .. She was shushed as Manik rammed his wild lips into hers; clenching her from waist, lifting her off the ground and thrusting her against a nearby tree trunk. His body leaned entirely into hers; sandwiching her between his steel built and the rough wood and his lips grazed hers brutally. It was their first kiss and despite being heated; it was magical and something they would never get over with. She was indeed cross with him but at the end of the day; this was all she wanted and so responded; slowly but surely. Her lips bled with bites and so did his; but neither of the two tried pulling away and kept devoring each other until their bodies ran out of oxygen.


Panting hard; he relaxed his forehead on hers and said the million dollar words, holding her hands between his two Don't speak things you would never mean Nandini! Fark padhta hai! Bohot bohot zyada. Coz you're mine. Meri ho tum Nandini. Sirf meri. Fark padhta hai kiunke pyaar karta hoon main tumse. Coz I Love You! Tab se - jabse tumhe pehli baar dekha tha. Like a baby; she sniffed and retorted, moving her head sideways and socking his chest No! You are a liar. You don't love me! If you've loved me; to tum woh sab nahi kehte. Tumhe pata bhi hai mujhe kitna bura laga? I hate you Manik! I hate you so much. She sagged against him; drenched in tears and then murmured, nuzzling her face in his chest I hate you! I want to hate you but I can't! I can't! Because I Love You So Much. I Love You. Smiling at her cutest owning up; he clung her more to himself - her feet still not touching the ground - and replied, tilting her chin upwards and after brushing her tears away with his lips I Love You Too Nandini. And I am really very very Sorry. Mujhe woh sab nahi kehna chahiye tha. Punish me for that if you want to. Per main kya karta batao? Maine kabhi pyaar nahi dekha apni zindagi mein Nandini. Bachpan se lekar tumhare aaney tak sirf ek hi relation raha hai mera aur woh hai dosti ka. Cabir ke saath. Pyaar kya hota - kaise kiya jata hai; I din't know all this. Aur jab tumse hogaya toh mujhe laga ke tumhare liye accha sochna hi pyaar hai. Sab mujhse dartey hai, Nafrat karte hai aur main nahi chahta tha ke tum bhi iss sabka hissa bano. Tum bohot acchi ho Nandini. Meri life hell se kuch kam nahi hai aur tum jaisi angel hell deserve nahi karti. Isliye maine woh sab kiya per mujhe nahi pata tha ke main kitni badi mistake karraha hoon. I am sorry Nandini. I am so sorry. Please mujhe maaf kardo. I need you. Never leave me again please. Her heart twinged with every syllable he spoke; so vulnerably; regarding his wretched life and his earnest apology - blanked out all the resentment and overwhelmed her. Lovingly; she wrapped her tiny arms around his neck and enclosed him in her warmth. Like a small child; he lay his head on her shoulder, sobbing against the crook of her neck, and squeezed her - almost crushing her bones and though it hurt; she didn't protest and requited with all her affection - rubbing his back and raking her fingers gently through his hair. It was their first hug and where it comforted their lonely souls - it also took their breaths away. Into his cold bitterness; she melted like warm honey - sweetening his entire existence. Serenity, Bliss, Love and Solace - she was everything Manik wished and pined for all his life. For Nandini, he was her own universe, her strength, someone hers and to whom she would belong and that one reason she needed to be happy all and throughout her life. They were content and satisfied.


Pulling away but not apart; Nandini bussed his eyes softly and then he asked, cupping her cheek Meri Life mein bohot andhera. Bohot suffocate karti hai yeh darkness mujhe. Aur sirf tum issey door karsakti ho. Karogi na? Bobbing her head with an ear to ear smile; she promised, staring deep into his eyes I will always shine for you Manik. And I will Love you. No matter what. Humesha! He smiled and leaning closer; pressed his lips on hers once again. This kiss was tender and slow yet passionate; chaste and pure like driven snow - filled with Love and only Love.



Maine kuch nahi dekha! Cabir spoke, appearing out of nowhere all of a sudden and interrupting their moment. Unaware of who he actually is; as Cabir was still in the get up - Manik gave him a menacing look and bellowed Tu abhi tak yahan kya karraha hai? Tu hai koun? Teri himmat kaise hui meri Nandini ke paas aney ki? Aur tujhe sharm nahi ayi ek ladki ko saath rakhke itni buri driving karte huay? Ussey kuch hojata toh??? Confusing him; Nandini giggled and solving it for him - Cabir let go of the wig and peeled off the french - style beard to reveal his real self. Struck by surprise; Manik widened his eyes and exclaimed Tu?? Tu tabse Nandini ke saath tha!! Matlab .. He eyed the duo with boring eyes and knitted brows as everything dawned upon him and confirming it; Cabir said Matlab yeh sab hum dono ne jaan bujh ke kiya. Aur sab teri wajah se! Kitna drama karna pada hum dono ko. Don't even think of lashing out. But Nandu - finally he came around. So happy for you both. Saying so; he gave her a light side hug and then pounced on Manik - who was still registering everything. And when he did; he hugged him back whilst smiling and making her blush with a 'You-are-in-serious-trouble' look. Parting away; Cabir observed the love birds so into each other and sang, getting into his teasing clothes Aankhon ki .. Gustakhiaan .. Maaf ho! Tu ru ru tu ru ru! Nandini flushed like a tomato and rolling his eyes; Manik said, after slapping his shoulder Hogaya tera? Mr. Mastermind. Aapne itna kasht uthaya hum dono ko milwane ke liye. Toh phir jab hum milgaye hain toh kabab mein haddi ka role kiun play karraha hai tu?Making a bad face; Cabir let out a loud sigh and replied, faking gussa Accha! Ab kaam hogaya toh main kabab mein haddi! Dekh upar waley! Dost dost na raha! Kalyug hai bhai! Ghor kalyug! Mujhe bhi tum dono ka romance dekhne mein koi interest nahi hai. Apni gadi ke chaabi lene aya tha. Jaraha hoon main. It was in every aspect a friendly banter between the two chuddy buddies but Nandini being the naive soul took it seriously and said, with guilt written all over her face I am So Sorry Cabir! Manik tum bhi na! Kuch bhi bol dete ho! You don't need to go! Tumhari wajah se hi toh hum aaj saath hai. Thank You So Much! Manik and Cabir exchanged glances and smiled at her innocence and then Cabir replied, after giving a soft tap on her cheek That was a joke Nandini. I am not angry. And you don't need to be thankful. Its my duty. She is a gem Manik! Take Care of her. Manik nodded with a genuine smile and smiling back at them; Cabir bid bye and vamoosed taking his bike.


Turning back to her; Manik yanked her into his chest and whispered, huskily, sending shivers down her spine just with his voice Playing games with me huh? Well I have a lot of games. Wanna play? He smirked feeling her thudding heartbeat against his pounding one and she went totally weak in her knees. Somehow gathering her voice; she replied, putting up a bold front Why? Only you have the copyright to it? I can't do anything? Makin her tremble like a leaf; she firmed his grip on her waist and said throatily, arching an eyebrow and gazing at her with eyes hooded with desire You can! You can do anything. But for now; you've done a lot. Don't you think its my time to do 'things'? Her young heart instantly apprehended what he meant and she bloomed like a red rose - as her body reacted sensitively to his piercing gaze. Love for her was trust and she trusted him more than herself and more than anything else in entire world. And cognizance with this fact; made his heart swell with ecstasy. Passion shined in his eyes at her silent approval and without wasting another second - he kissed her rosy cheeks, scooped her in his arms, carried her to and ensconced her in his car and headed to a destination - where it would be all about them and their love for each other.


The End.

So tell me how was it? We all know jealously and fear are all old concepts - so instead of using one - I incorporated them together in the story. Hope You Enjoyed it!

Do let me know with your Comments.

Take Care

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Edited by yasmeenjuhi - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Yayyee 👏 I'm the first to comment !!
This part was truly amazing..Loved Manik's confession. MaNan are love.
Cabir as always rocked.. u just reminded me how much i miss him on the show.
Please write these OS and TS more often..they are fantastic. The first meet is still one of my all my favourite TS. The way u descibe true love is incomparable.
Love u.
Stay blessed.
Edited by Sudha14 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
loved it!was eagerly waiting for the update and i totally loved it..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wowww awesome ending dr...
Nice concept...
It was different methods of confession...
Always stay blessed nd happy
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Posted: 9 years ago
Y did it have to end so soon😭
Y it had to be TS

Y cnt it be an ff

Bt whatever you write

Big or small

It's always a treat

Thanks a lot for d pm

N plz update life with nandu soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Cutest ever..!
Short sweet and lovely:)
Jelo manik is always my fav :D
That 'Sirf Meri' words na always send shivers down my spine..!
Loved it behna :*
Love,Mawara
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very cute story!
Loved reading it!😳
You are beautiful writer!
Thanks for a lovely story😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow tht was awesome...
Cabira k ideas kahin fail nahi hote...
Poor manik...he was soo frustrated...
If he was not cabira then surely he would killed him...
Confession was wow...
He was soo scared to loose her...
Nandu also bursted out...
Kiss was wow...
Finally get manik around mission accomplished...
Luved it...
Thnx for pm...

Edited by Pari_mananholic - 9 years ago

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