MaNan TS : Coz You're Mine [Part Two Updated - PG 22] 28 Nov

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Cooki

@Cooki

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#211

It's awesome story...
It seems so genuine that we can relate it to the real life...
Sometimes jealousy & the fear of losing dear one r the aspects that can bring out the truth...
U wrote it very well..
Thnxx for the pm...
Keep writing..

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windowseatbug

@windowseatbug

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#212

Loved the two shot.

What a plan two tackle stubborn Manik.

Cabir be so cool, always.

First taking her about away from him for 6 days, then roaming with another guy & then fear of loosing her.

It was obviously too much for him.

They confessed finally.

Awesome one.

Stay blessed !! :)

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@kimnana

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#213

superb ...cabir n nandu make him confessed his true feelings

manan loving them ..n cabir is such a sweet heart

she is his sar who will shine for him forever ...

lovely update ..ty for pm

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cutypie04

@cutypie04

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#214

Superb amazing update dea ...

Tnx fr d pm

Stay blessed

Keep smiling

Keep shining fr ur loved ones

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Khushbakhat33

@Khushbakhat33

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#215

Super duper update..
Love both parts...
Thanks for pm

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havi

@havi

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#216

awesome...

loved cabir to the core...

everyone sholud have a friend like cabir who gives the real meaning of friend

asusual manik finally confession was nice

keep writing...

geeth

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manan_0711

@manan_0711

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#217

Ty for d pm...

Am so so so sorry juhi...I knw am super late to lyk n comment...Sry for dat...

But cumin to do ts... OMG day was super wowww...

So loved it...

Hehe loved cabira's planning...

Tysm for dus lovely story...

Loved manan...

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zoiakanwal

@zoiakanwal

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#218

another nice ts very well written as always poor cabir the stunt thing was good to made manik confess his love really like it
i like only cabir as kabab mai haddi between our manan no one else only he has the right to disturb manan such as mene kuch nhi dekha 😉

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Shivani Agrawal

@shivi07

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#219

as i said m velli today😆
okay so this one is alsooo amazinggg
as i said arrogant manik is my fav😳
cabiraaa is the best friend like seriouslyyy
manik was in love with her from starting itself omg
nd their plan to bring manik back is soo awesome
i wish to try this one day🤪
their confession was lovelyyy❤️
i lovedd itt :*

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