MaNan TS : Coz You're Mine [Part Two Updated - PG 22] 28 Nov

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Swagatika

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Posted: 9 years ago

#161

Sooo cuteee

Loved every bit of it

Thanks for pm

😊

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harshadamhadgut

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Posted: 9 years ago

#162

You knw naa that you rock!!!! As always Superb it was! Sooo beautifully written...😳his confession..! His possessiveness...was awww..sooo cuteee!!!😆

Cabirrr! LoveD him here..manabir are lovee!! Perfect trio!😃 Keep writinggg! :)

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Chocolava14

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Posted: 9 years ago

#163

Awwiiee... A really cute one😳👏

I so lykd itt😊

It was amazing...speciallly cabiraaa😉

I lykd passionate confession,,.,,hehee😉😆

Always keep writing😊

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neetimehta

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Posted: 9 years ago

#164

Wooowww

that was awesome

cabir ka plan hit ho gi gya

aakhir manik ne accept kr hi liya

it was mindblowing

thnx for pm

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nara26

@nara26

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Posted: 9 years ago

#165

Awesome
loved it tnx for pm

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Arunima

@jesse93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#166

Hmm...
Love it re, it was so so good.

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shubhshash

@shubhshash

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Posted: 9 years ago

#167

Amazing dear...it was awesome...

Loved it...

Grt wrk..keep it up...

I must sae dear. ..I am in love wid yur writing...its mindblowing. ...hats off to u..

Bye...keep smiling. ..😊

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Adya Agrawal

@Adya05

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#168

It was really sweet..

You should keep comming up with ideas..

Love you too..

Take care..

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prrk86

@prrk86

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Posted: 9 years ago

#169

Wow so beautiful and romantic update loved it and Thanks for the pm

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Anu

@RomComFan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#170

What a great ending...loved seeing his desperation and the plan was really lovely, esp how far they took it- first kiss adn hug all in the same moment, great and cabir's reaction at the end is perfect too...this is the first time i've seen the games line reused and you did it really well...a wonderful wrap up, hope you write more soon.

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