MaNan FF: Reel vs Real ( Ch6 A : Pg 80 ) 7 Dec

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shivi39

@shivi39

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Posted: 10 years ago

#371

Awesome update
loved update to the core
in party manan dance was amazing nd their convo
nd cabir i really like his sense of humor u write his lines so well
nd selfi like manik's angry look is also good
nd then after party
manik is scared of dogs hehehe
nd he catch nandu's hand to hide behind her heehehe it's so awesome
nd in last bhut hasi aa rhi h nd chlo mere sath nd driver ni hu tumhara that lines i really liked
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Now promo
awesome promo
they fight why??
don't know what happen between them
want to know more
update soon... :)
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Nd really sorry for late comment read chappy now only
thnx for PM
continue soon... :)

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Aamikrish

@Aamikrish

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#372

Nice Promo.

So dey r fighting, y?

Update soon.

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Isha

@Ishaaaaaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#373

Originally posted by: shivi39
Awesome update
loved update to the core
in party manan dance was amazing nd their convo
nd cabir i really like his sense of humor u write his lines so well
nd selfi like manik's angry look is also good
nd then after party
manik is scared of dogs hehehe
nd he catch nandu's hand to hide behind her heehehe it's so awesome
nd in last bhut hasi aa rhi h nd chlo mere sath nd driver ni hu tumhara that lines i really liked
.
.
.
Now promo
awesome promo
they fight why??
don't know what happen between them
want to know more
update soon... :)
.
.
Nd really sorry for late comment read chappy now only
thnx for PM
continue soon... :)

No problem 😛

And thankyouuu ⭐️

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Ambudaga

@Ambudaga

Beginner

Posted: 10 years ago

#374

Eagerly waiting 4 d update... N thanq 4 d pm. ..

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ankita627

@ankita627

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#375

Wow kya promo hai...lyk seriously yrh dono kab sudhrenge har jagah fight...huh...m nt syre bt shatad yeh present ki fight hai may be or na b ho i m just guessing...si lets see kya hota hai...
bt i must say u r fab writer kya likhti ho boss...m waiting for nxt part...

keep smiling...