|| SILENT YEARNINGS ||-A MANAN FF[ Chapter-4 page 8]

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Okay as may of u knw me or donno me...m Mehjaben... A reader in the forum..Its my 1st story...lemme know how it is
<font size="6">SILENT YEARNINGS...</font>
<font size="4">It had been a rough day for Manik Malhotra.It was raining cats and dogs for three day continuously because of which the traffick was insane but thankfully the rain had somehow made people sit in their homes as the roads seemed clear.He was driving with speed but suddenly he came to halt with a jerk as a girl probabaly in her mid 20s came in front of his car;all wet,shivering and crying.She has bruises on her head, and her clothes were stuck to her body exposing her perfect curves.At once Manik was attracted to this girl and it was very unusual for him because he was certainly not a flirt.The whole world knew him as the arrogant and introvert self made business tycoon who generally did not gel up with women easily.In fact some even thought he hated the sight of women which certainly was not true because here Manik was just staring at some unknown strnager girl in infront of his car and smiling looking at her.Had it been some other case he would have shouted and drove but she made him do the unexpected.He could not stop himself and pulled the glass down to see the girl look pale and all scared.She was shaking while she spoke to him in a babyish tone" please take me with you,they will take me there. Please take me with you"</font>
<font size="4">Manik was astonished for a moment.He did not know what to do and how to react to a girl who told him to take her away with him because afterall he was a total stranger to her.He was still registering her words that he did not even realise she opened the car lock and got inside.He looked totally confused,bewildered and surprised while the girl was crying coninuosuly telling him to take takr her away.She was pleading no begging him to do that and he could just not reject.He did not utter a single word and drove in silence.</font>
<font size="4">After reaching he got down and came to her side ,opened the door and the girl hurriedly got down and in an instant surprised him again as she clinged to his chest.He was utterly shocked but all he could do was hug her back and rub his hands on her back.It definitely was an inolunatary action is what Manik told himself as he entered his mansion catching her hands.It was dead silent and Manik wondered the reason behind it but did not shout as that would have scared her more who was already snuggling to him probably scared by the darkness.He texted the guard to check the lights and as he took her to his room the lights came back.He calmly made her sit on the bed and asked her if she wanted some water and then ofcourse her name.However all me got was her silence.He asked again but again she was quiet.Manik would have lost his cool by now bit seeing the girl so scared he chose to be patient and asked again while she was just weeping.However he was indeed the Manik Malhotra and he finally lost it and held the girl in a jerk by her shoulder and shouted at her at the top of his voice,"will u tell me who the bloody hell are you and why have you come to me?? Atlwast tell me your name damnit" the girl got afraid and said stammering"th..they..a...all..bro..broke..my..toys...n..n...te..tear...m...my...te...teddy...</font>
<font size="4">Manik Malhotra certainly got totally bewildered as he lossened his grip on her and looked at her as if she was a ghost while the girl was crying continuosly.</font>

<font size="4">That's all for now...do lemme know how is it..criticism r heartily welcome..take care all...</font>


<font size="3">Index</font>
prolouge:page 1
Chapter 1 : page 2
Chapter 2 : page 4
Chapter 3 : page 6
Chapter 4 : page 8
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's an interesting plot. For a first time write this is Amazing work Nahin 👏
Do continue and keep me posted 😊
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Nandu abnormal? :o I mean I have never read something so different..Please continue soon..I want to see Manik taking care of this kiddo Nandu :D
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome nandu KO kya hua hai. Waiting
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome story
Haha maniks reaction on nandus toys 😆
But interesting how manik will deal with this nandu
Cont soon dear and pm me
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Nice would love to read more
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Seems lyk she is imature from brain...

Luved it...add Manan's POV

add more N more Manan

update Chapters ASAP
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Chapter-1
A bright new day with new hopes came with the morning sun rise. The birds were chirping outside and the nature was very calm and quiet. And there stood Nandini Moorthy now Malhotra on the balcony totally silent thinking about how her life was and how it changed all at once. She did not even realize that she had stood there for half an hour because she was thinking about all of it. She was not sure if what all that happened was good or bad but one thing she was very sure about was that Manik loved her the most. And she loved him back too. She yearned for him all the time and wanted to make him feel most loved as he did; thinking about which her heart felt heavy: probably the reason she was silent all the time and this morning too.
She was so much into her thoughts; she did not even realize when two strong arms slid through her waist. However she was not scared as she knew who it was. She sighed and smiled and said "Manik"
He pecked her head slightly and rested his chin on her shoulder while he asked her "So how is my princess today?"
She turned towards him and he kept her hands on her waist while she put it on his chest. She was silent so Manik spoke again "Did you sleep well?"
Nandini again chose to be silent and Manik spoke enthusiastically to make her feel good all the while cupping her cheeks, "So as I have a holiday today let's go for a long drive, what say?"
And finally Nandini smiled making Manik's heart warm while she spoke" But we can stay here only. Look it's so peaceful."
"Okay as you say."Manik told saluting her and took her hands and walked her down to the kitchen. He picked her up swiftly and put her in the kitchen slab and Nandini just stayed silent looking at him do things for her exclusively. She felt so good that she jumped and hugged him tight leaving MAnik in shock but he also hugged her back.
The he thought of something and told "Why don't you make the breakfast today for me?"
Nandini looked confused at him and so Manik gave her an egg and told "Break it."
While Nandini did that Manik went to prepare hot chocolate for her and when he turned around he could just not stop laughing as he saw NAndini all confused pouting as she had the eggs all over the counter.
He went up to her and started brushing her hair indirectly asking her what happened while Nandini ranted to him "Look at this Manik. Everything got messed."
Manik looked at her innocent face and replied clearing her confusion "It's because you have to break it in a bowl first. If you break it in the slab of course it will get spilled baby."
Nandini looked dejected seeing her failure and so to cheer her up Manik got the hot chocolate and told her "Okay drink this and I will clean it for you alright. It's okay."
And as expected Nandini's face lit up instantly and she side hugged him and drank it while Manik just looked at her adoring; making him realize how this girl meant everything to him.
After that Manik cleaned all the mess and made breakfast while Nandini chose to be silent spectator of all of this. And again Nandini could not stop but hug him and Manik smiled and took her in a side hug. They came to the table where the breakfast was now laid out of course by the servants. He made her sit on the chair and sat near her and fed her. She ate silently holding Manik's hand. As soon as they both finished the breakfast Manik got up to only be hugged by NAndini again.
"Wow someone is very happy with me today "Manik told Nandini stroking her head.
After that Nandini pulled Manik to the garden and did her favorite job of standing on his feet which Manik did not mind at all. He plucked flowers for her while she was silent and enjoying all of this. Finally Nandini seemed to get tired and went to the room only to be surprised and have a big smile on her face as she saw a big teddy bear waiting for her there. She hugged MAnik tightly and got busy playing with the teddy not before muttering thanks to him and kissing his cheek. MAnik stood dazed feeling so special with a big smile plastered on his face muttering "I love you too Nandini."
Somehow Nandini probably heard or maybe she didn't but she came and just crashed into his chest leaving her teddy and Manik was gladder than ever.

Suspense...i know what u all r thinking...whoever read the prolouge thank you so much for the comments silent readers at least hit the like button if u want...so m keeping it as a suspense...go with the flow now i will disclose all things soon...
Happy Reading 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update...

loved it so much...

just read the prologue and this chapter...

I'm guessing that nandu has some sort of brain disease or disorder...that she acts or thinks she is a child...

manik fell in love with her and so did nandu and gotten married...

loved that manik got nandu to do some taks...loved her innocence...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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res..api..kal chemistry exam. Porte boso.

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