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Posted: 9 years ago
this time nandani is cupid for cabir n navya
he loves her truly ..can't live without her
manan u make our heart bounce everytime
b'day preparation time
ty for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heyy
Nice update!!
Manan's meet at the beginning you have described it perfectly!!
Their love
Their longing
Everything
And manik making breakfast for nandu
That was nice !
Overall it was an amazing update!!😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey nice update maa, good emotional bounf with every one , I had all the 100+ chapters in 1 go , so u can imagine how u made me to edict to this , it's a splendid rithing... how u changed a rude arrogant man to a caring person , how was a hard made him soft , in the early of ur storty the starngers made me go awww... for that, the way u gave family they cared if they still dnt had a family of very own... the ups n down's of the life and the learning from them... u narrated that very well ... n u very well penned down showing after every event of life person become strong ,, eg.. starting Manik betrayal... n u also shown if a person they are repenting they and feel from heart then they change for gooddd the eg Manik n navya... u also very well said how much we hate a person some corner of our heart loves them by the relation we have with them(nionik n manik at her death...)
an eg of good friendship is shown very well the bonding of nandu with abhi, cabir ... the fab5... qall togethr it's supb . hey u know this my longest update in this forum... n am eagerly waiting to see how things sort out btwn manik n dj, the bday pary for nandu..


I think the lady with whom manik gone is Damini to do shopping for Nandu...

Waiting for next update buddy...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting. ..
Kahani mein naya twist...

Loved it

Thanks for the pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update...
Very well written...
Loved it to the core...
Who was with manik???
Cont soon...

LOVE,
AAROHI...
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing ..

once trust is broken it can't b as before ..
but love can make it more strong ..

ur concept is awsome
love it ...

" love is not abt being together n showing .
love is trust loving the person in it absence knowing that person love u n u mean everything u thm "...

cont soon ..

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Posted: 9 years ago
It was ossmmm bliss manan ek dusre se aise mile kaise janmo baad mile but this thode hours stay away from each other r like eternity ti them as they r crazily madly n deeply in love thoda hotness b ho gyi as it says na k actions speak louder than words so manik ne action use kiya manik ne nandu ko bheja n vo black car me m sure k badi maa hogi as nandu ka birthday is on the way love this chappy😊😊
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Posted: 9 years ago


TEASER


DJ was sitting on the couch going through some files when she heard a familiar voice, she looked up to find Manik. She was looking at him surprised as he looked her with a frown. "hey Manik!" Abhi greeted him and he too replied with the same zeal "hey Abhi!" he then put the invite in front of DJ and addressed Abhi "Just tell her that day after tomorrow it's Nandini's birthday so there is a party in our beach house. Nandini would like if she attends and PS it's a surprise for her so don't mention it."

DJ looked at Abhi and said "Abhi tell him unless I am invited directly I won't attend. I am Gayatri Malhotra owner of Malhotra Empire and I don't accept invites in third person. If he is Manik I am his DJ; attitude zyada hai use mera." And she got back to doing her work. Manik and everyone's jaws dropped to touch the floor with sudden turn of tables. Manik looked at Abhi and said "fine Abhi here we go." He took out his mobile and played an invite which was recoded in his voice. After the recording stopped he turned back to go but stopped midway and said "Abhi tell her I am her grand son dimaag bhi inse zyada hai." And walked off leaving everyone smiling ear to ear.

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Posted: 9 years ago
ha ha ha...too funny...they r adorable grand mom abd son...update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing promo
think that manik-dj fight be solved during nandini's birthday
update soon

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