#2 Tum Hi Ho - manan ff (imp. Note pg-136)thread 3 pg-1 - Page 66

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Posted: 9 years ago
Owww... Such a cute update
Manan care for their baby..
Fab 5 and manan scene..
Manan romance scene
Nandini talk with her baby..
All the scenes are just awesome
Manik is hiding something
But what?
Please update
Take care dear😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
oh my god 😉
how can you write this nicely yar

i finished reading this ff now and others i will read tomorrow
wow yar seriously u are amazing

twist ke bad twist twist ke bad firse twist
itne saare twists i think they will never end

loved every part of the ff such an overwhelming story
with full of emotins and feelings

aliya is blessed with baby girl and manan with two baby monsters

wow the pictures look too cute yar and the babies tooo
ab thoda comma rako yaar twists ko thodasa

so naming ceremony what are names i am also very eagerly waiting to know about their names

manan care for their baby was too good
actually manik care for his 3 babies such a cute and loving father he is
loved it very much

fab5 r too good we no need to explain their bond

manik is hiding something from nandu hope there wont be any problem at naming ceremony

take care

thank you so much for the pm's you send everyday very patiently eventhough
i am not responding thank you so much mehek
😊😉😛
ok thanks bye

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Posted: 9 years ago
aliya blessed with baby girl .
manan N their baby monsters
too cute babies...
naming ceremony...
eagerly waiting for their names
manan care for their baby was too good
fab5 r too good
manik is hiding something from nandu
...hope there wont be any problem at naming ceremony
thanx for PM
thank you for the wonderful updates...
sorry for late comments...
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Posted: 9 years ago


TUM HI HO

Part : 99

Manik is setting his hair in front of mirror n nandini says " manik do fast we r getting late sb guest aate hi honge i should go n check" n nandini about to go but manik hold her arm n move her closer to him n nandini says slowly "manik.. "n manik says " nandini... wait na i want to talk to " n nandini says " manik... baate toh bd main bhi ho akti abhi guest wait kr rhai honge na " n manik about to say something but mukti open the door n says " manik... nandini... agr tum dono ka romance se furst mil jae toh yeh bhi yd lakhlena tumhre babies ki naming ceremony hai aaj " n manik says " main kabse nandini ko bol rha chle chle but yeh "n nandini make faces n says " main..."n manik says " aur kya ?"n mukti says " guyz ab ladh bd main lena phle chle " n nandini smiles n says " yeah.. " n manik pick 1 baby n nandini pick another n than they both come outside

Druv start coming toward them n start singing song n make them come forward
(ayeh dil laaya hai bahaar
apnon ka pyaar kya kehna)

N nandini see baby n move him in n touch her nose with him n sing
(milein hum chhalak utha
khushi ka khumaar kya kehna)

nandini put baby in cradle n nandini sing
(khile khile chehron se aaj
ghar hai mera gule gulzaar kya kehna)

N all come to nandini n sing together except navya she is not in party also
(khile khile chehron se aaj
ghar hai mera gule gulzaar kya kehna)

Mukti takes her baby n comes to abhi n sing
(ayeh dil laaya hai bahaar
apnon ka pyaar kya kehna)

N abhi kiss on baby forehead n give a side hug to mukti n sing
(milein hum chhalak utha
khushi ka khumaar kya kehna)

N alai comes to mukti with with her baby sing
(hum tum yoon hi milte rahein
mehfil yoon hi sajti rahe)

Druv aslo comes to them singing n rest them are smiling
(bas pyaar ki yehi ek dhun
har subah shaam bajti rahe)

N nandini comes manik standing wid baby in his hand n singing they both go them n sing
(gale mein mehekte rahein
pyaar bhari baahon ke haar kya kehna)

N they again together sing n all looking so happy
(khile khile chehron se aaj
ghar hai mera gule gulzaar kya kehna)

than they all sit for pooja
Wid their couple n wid their baby in their lap n after pooja is over n pandit ji tell them starting letter from which the baby name will be start
Mukti baby name will start from K n alai baby will start from N n nandini both baby will start from A
N than all ask from mukti n abhi to decide their baby name
Mukti says " abhi u tell na " n abhi says " Khushi .."n all smiles but accept mukti n abhi ask her " u don't like it " n mukti give braod smile n say " it's osm she is our happiness na toh khushi is best" n mukti touch her face n say "khushi... like it " n she smiles
N now everybody looks toward alai n druv n manik n nandini says "cabir.. where is navya " n everybody also ask him n cabir says "she is not well " n nandini was not wid his ans. But she thinks she will talk about that afterward n mukti " is she f9 na jada toh tbiyt khrb nhi hai na " n cabir says"no bs viral fever hai " n cabir says "are alai tell na name of baby "n alai looks toward druv n says "niti.. "n all smiles n now turn of manan they have to decide their babies name n manik says " nandini tell na " n nandini get up taking one baby in his hand say " my baby will always shine like a star n his name will be" she looks toward baby n say loudly " Arjun... "n than look toward manik n manik is seeing her wid a big smile n says in gesture that he likes it n nandini also give a smile to him n he again sit down n give that baby to manik n take other from him n say " he is who like deep like ocean " Arnav...
N everybody smiles
After sometime cabir in guest room talking on phone wid navya n standing at door listen their conversation

Cabir : navya tum kyo nhi ae nandini is asking about u n u know ushai kitna bura lga hai
Navya ab tum unsehe humsha ke liye dur thodhi na rehai skti ho
Hello navya...
cabir goes n nandini standing outside n thinking about their conversation n manik comes there n put hand on nandini shoulder n manik ask her "nandini kya hua u okay na" n nandini says "kuch nhi " manik says "chle... " n they go

After party is over n nandini is removing her accessories n lost in thought of cabir words n manik sees nandini is looking disturb n he goes to her make her sit on bed n he also sit wid her n ask her "nandini... main tumhai kabse dekh rha ho u looking so lost kya hua btao "n nandini hug manik n say "manik... mujhe kuch smj nhi aa rha ki navya ko kaise smjau
Party main na ki vja bhi kuch aur thi "manik break the hug n hold her face n say " nandini... hum kl navya ke ghr jaenge n we will talk to them u don't worry " n manik says to divert her mind "u know u chosen best name for our child " n nandini says "really manik... u like it na " n arjun start crying in cradle n manik says "inko kaise pta chl jata hai we were talking about them " n nandini smiles n they go to babies cradle n nandini about to pick arju but manik stops her n say "i will make them quite why always u " n manik take the baby n try make him stop crying but baby is not stopping crying n manik looks toward nandini n make faces n nandini smiles n comes to him n moves hand on arjun forehead n start singing the lori
(Ahmm... Ahmm... Ahmm...
Ahmm... Ahmm... Ahmm...
Swapna Lok Se Aaa
Pankh Lagake
Aajari nidya
Aari Aaja
Mamta Ki Anchal Ke Chaiya Tale
Raj Dulhare Hai unko Sulaja
Ahmm... Ahmm... Ahmm...
Ahmm... Ahmm... Ahmm...)
N manik says "kaise lr leti ho tum " n nandini say " sh..." n says in gesture that baby will wake up n she take the baby from his hand n says silently " manik they remain 9 month with me "n manik again says little bit louder " why can't they remain wid me" n nandini again make faces n says " sh... " n nandini kept arjun cradle n manik kiss nandini n babies forehead n say " good nite.. " n nandini too...
N they both ly down in eachother arms n manik thinks " nandini... it is difficult to hide the truth from u but have to do this to see u happy " n than they sleep

So here is next part.. i know.. chotu.. sa.. now tell me.. howz.. it.. n guyz.. i want to tell the story.. will be going to be more emotinal..

Stay blessed
Love Mehak





Edited by Mehaklovely - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks for pm
now m getting scared
what if it comes out that these twins are not even manans babies
but theirs died so manik replaced them with them so that nandu doesnt get a shock
n hope navya feels good soon feel bad for her
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update. Such an blissful one.manik is hidding something from nandini.naming cermany was fab.manan convo at end with the baby was so cute.waiting for the next update. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome
Loved the update
Liked all the names of the babies
Khushi niti arjun arnav amazing
But navya ko kya hua
And what is manik hiding
Plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey i love ur story pls do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice and cute update...
Nice names to all of them...
Y navya is not there...
She must be feeling low...
But its ur ff...so everything can't remain smooth...
So will be waiting for twist..
Thnx for pm...
Update soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
What truth no dont separate manan again

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