#4 MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE LINK TO THREAD 5 ON PG 152 - Page 86

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Vandyandy thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi
Thks for the PM
Just finished reading this ff now
And I must say what a story
Like srsly dimagh main itna Sara aata kaha se hai
Wow amazing so lovely
Manik n Nandani can understand their mind talk
That was awesome, though they haven't confessed their love to each other, they don't need one to know how much they love each other.
Nandani n Manik's dad bonding is also very refreshing, I liked that very much.
And then there's Manik n Nandani's parents, loved that
Not to forget the bonding between fab4 n nandani, so cute.
Manik jealous of Aaryaman, so possessive.
Overall awesome
Cont soon


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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing update ..

cute bond .

care n importance of each other
love it ...

cont soon

stay blessed ..
thnks for pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Just read the chapters...u nailed it yarr
the bond of the trio was amazing..
perfectly described all the emotions..
waiting eagerly to know wht nandu will do to others..
nd yes THANKS for pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey am so Sry day am not commenting regularly as my phn crashed n I was not well also...
Sry for d late comments...
But nw again am gonna be regular to lyk n comment...
Plzz continue soon...
ll' b waiting for d update...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really thank you for your PM yaar, it is the first time I'm commenting on IF. I really like your story since I read it first time on fb. So,thanks for your update, keep going 😊 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi just now read it and thank you for the update soon update
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Posted: 9 years ago

updates are awesome. pm me next chapters also..plz😳
Edited by kuhukikinnory - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hi am new to this forum . I had read all the chapters at a go it's really fab job. Can u pm me last chapters as its not updated here. Am missing them badly. I had sent u buddy request also.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsmmm chptrsss
Nandini nd mohan s bond is reallyy a cute n deep one

The trio convo ws reallyyy cuteee
With evry chap d story is trnin out to b more n more beutiful
Continuee sooon

thancx, THANKYOU SO MUCH FOR D PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
PART 180 :

MALHOTRA MANSION :

HALL (night) :

DHRUV : ufff

KABIR : kya din tha yar mar gaye

ABHI : seriously aisa lagra hain jaise dono hath aur pair body se alag hogaye hain

MOHAN : ek hi din main ye haal haan

KABIR : haa tho apka beta das din ka kaam ek hi din main karvayega na tho yehi hoga

DHRUV : lekin thank god at least isne aaj sab kuch final tho kiya

ABHI : haan mujhe tho lagra tha ki sagayi ke muhurath ke time pe bi ye pagal kuch na kuch decide karthe hi baitega

MANIK : bas bas bohuth bak liya ab aur nahi

RAJ : tho beta abi kya kya kaam bache hain

MANIK : kuch nahi papa bas sab ki shopping bachi hain

RAJ : ohhh

KABIR : vaise ye sab abi thak vapas nahi aaye kya

MOHAN : nahi...nandu kehri thi ki unhe der hogi aane main...

DHRUV : 9 tho already baj chuke hain abi aur kitna time lenge

ABHI : dude wo shopping ko gaye hain bul gaya wo of course jaldi vapas nahi ayenge

KABIR : hmmm tho ab

ABHI : party kare

DHRUV : what

ABHI : arey sirf ham log hi hain na

MANIK : actually... Idea bura nahi hain

MOHAN : tum log enjoy karo main aur raj upar jathe hain

MANIK : nahi dad baitiye na yahi par aap log bi

MOHAN : acha chel teek hain

cheers...!!!!! shouts everyone in unison

They happily start drinking forgetting everything laughing like idiots rolling on each other

RAMU : saab saab bas kijiye saab nandu betiya ne aapko zyada peene se mana kiya hain

MOHAN : mujhe patha hain ramu phikar math kar main teek hoon

RAMU : par saab

MANIK : kaka kuch nahi hoga aap phikar math kijiye

KABIR : haan ham bas thoda thoda peyenge

DHRUV : guys deere deere peyenge hmmm

ABHI : haan

RAJ : mohan agar zyada hua tho

MOHAN : arey kuch nahi hoga relax
and once again everyone gets busy laughing, talking enjoying their drinks...

MOHAN : tum log baito main abi aaya

KABIR : wokieee

mohan gets up and walks a little but suddenly falls on ground with a thud

Dad... and manik runs towards to him while everyone follows him

11 PM (night) :

MANIK : kuch pareshani ki bath tho nahi hain na docter

RAJ : sab teek hain na

DOCTOR : jee nandini kaha par hain mujhe unse bath karni hain

MANIK : nandini...wo bahar gayi hain bas athi hogi par kya aap batha sakthe hain aapko kya bath karni hain I mean aapko agar kuch chahiye hoga tho

DOCTOR : kya aap mujhe inki pichli baar ki medical reports dika sakthe hain

MANIK : medical reports????

KABIR : wo sab reports tho shona ke paas hothe hain

DHRUV : aur sari medical history bi pehle se sirf pari hi dekhthe aari hain

RAJ : jee aap philal ke liye kuch davayiya likhiye thab thak nandini vapas ajayegi

DOCTOR : teek hain

kabir and manik brings the medicines and make mohan have them...

papa...!!!! and nandu stands at door breathing heavily looking damn worried

she quickly enters into room and stands beside mohan and then doctor papa...kya kyaa hua hain unhe...

All enter and stand looking worried while everyone else look down feeling guilty

DOCTOR : nandini maine aapko pehle bi bathaya hai ki inhe bohuth hi sambal kar rehna hoga...

NANDINI : jee jee docter lekin aise achanak papa

DOCTOR : jab dil kolke peyenge tho aur kya hoga behosh hogaye

NANDINI : dil kolke peye the and she notices everyone looking down which gives her a very clear picture the very next second

alia,navya,mukthi and reshma stand glaring dhruv,kabir,abhi and raj while nandu stands silently looking down...

DOCTOR : wo last time ki reports chahiye thi

NANDINI : jee ek minute and quickly hand over reports to doctor

DOCTOR : main kuch nayi medicines add karra hoon purane medicines ke sath sath ye bi de dijiye

NANDINI : jee

DOCTOR : inhe abi hosh ajayegi isliye phikar karne ki bath nahi hain
par from now on make sure he doesn't drink more

Nandu just simply nods without saying anything while docter leaves giving some more important measures...

MUKTHI : have u people gone nuts

ALIA : sab janthe huye bi rok nahi sakthe the kya

MANIK : meri galthi hain

NAVYA : manik abi abi aya hain use kuch nahi patha hain lekin tum log tum log tho sab janthe ho na

RESHMA : aur raj ye tho bache hain lekin tum at least tum tho kayal rak sakthe the na bayya ki

MANIK : maa please and stops seeing nandu staring at mohan with tears in her eyes...

he closes his eyes and then slowing moving towards her "am sryyy"

nandu runs out saying nothing...

nandini...!!!! shona...!!!! pari...!!!!! jaan...!!!!! and everyone calls her trying to stop her...

MUKTHI : damnnn

ALIA : sab tum logon ki vajah se hain huhhh

ABHI : chelo and everyone leaves except manik

after sometime

MOHAN : manik

Daddd and quickly stretches his hands helping him to sit properly...

MANIK : aap... aap...

MOHAN : main teek hoon

manik looks down and am sryyy

MOHAN : sry kyu mujhe kya hua hain dekh main bilkul teek hoon

Manik nods his head and patha hain main kitna dar gaya tha...meri sanse ruk gayi thi...aur and stops closing his eyes

MOHAN : shhh main teek hoon

MANIK : promise me ki aap age se mujhe bilkul nahi darayenge please

Mohan smiles and I promise and then lagtha hain sab meri beti ka asar hain jo tu bi promise karvara hain mujhse...

manik smiles faintly while mohan continues vaise meri gudiya kaha hain aur and stops manik usse bula jaldi

manik nods and simply texts kabir...

soon everyone enters and then lastly nandu...

manik gets up and walks to another side opposite to nandu...

Everyone stands looking nandu silently while manik too stands looking her with corner of his eyes..

MOHAN : nandiniii

she simply takes the medicine from side table and holding a glass full of water offers him to have them without looking him

MOHAN : mujhe dekho

she moves her hands a little close to him gesturing him to have medicines

MOHAN : main ye davayi nahi lunga thab thak jab thak thu mujhe dekegi nahi

she turns her face closing her eyes while he continuous sach bolra hoon jab thak tu mujhe dekegi nahi aur bath karegi main thab thak and before he could complete nandu puts tablet and glass on table simply turning back to leave

mohan holds her hand and ruk ruk gussa kyu karri hain letha hoon na

she stands silently while he takes the medicine and gulps it all the time looking her...

nandu checks the prescription and keeps all the necessary medicines on table while everyone looks each other not knowing what to do

KABIR : shonaaa

nandu covers mohan with blanket and taking his medical reports walks out of the room simply turn offing the lights...

NAVYA : samaj main agaya na

MUKTHI : chelo bahar

everyone leaves except manik

MOHAN : manikkk

haa and sits beside mohan turning on the lamp light

MOHAN : naraz hain bas zyada pareshan math ho teek ho jayegi

MANIK : apse bath karke hi wo teek hogi

MOHAN : main bath karunga

MANIK : hmmm

MOHAN : idhar aa mere sath so ja and pulls him close hugging him...

Manik moves close to him and I love u...

Mohan kisses manik's forhead and I love u too...

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