#4 MANAN FF LOVE IS MY LIFE LINK TO THREAD 5 ON PG 152 - Page 87

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Posted: 9 years ago


PART 181 :

2 PM NIGHT :

mohan was trying to take glass of water placed on table a little far with his right hand while manik was sleeping holding his left hand...

He tries again and again carefully not wanting to disturb manik's sleep while a hand gets placed on glass picking it up far from mohan...

He smiles seeing his doll holding glass and tu soyi nahi ab thak

nandini ignores his question and moves her hand forward holding glass still looking downwards...

MOHAN : nandu main kaise peyunga dekh tera manik kaise hath pakad kar so ra hain agar utunga tho uski neendh karab ho jayegi

she sighs and moving closer slowly makes him drink water...

He smiles and holds her hand stopping her from leaving while she tries to free her hand without looking him...

MOHAN : sorryyy please maaf karde

nandu stops trying and stands still without saying anything...

"gudiyaa sryyy naaa plzzz" and makes a puppy face...

nandu slowly turns her head sideways while he continuous gudiya dekh na mujhe ek baar pleaseee...

she doesn't say anything while he further continues arey tu itni gussa kyu hain mujhe kuch nahi hua na aur vaise bi sab ko ek na ek din tho upar jana hi padega

That's it she looks him angrily with tears filled eyes while he immediately leaves her hand and nandini

She tries to leave but mohan holding her and pulling her back suddenly makes her loose balance and fall on him...

She looses herself and starts crying like a baby while mohan ruffles her hairs continuously asking her to calm down...

MOHAN : gudiya please shhh

she gets up a little and kitni baar kitni baar kaha ki aise bathe math kiya kijiye par nahi jana hain na apko door... sabko chodkar... mujhe chodkar... teek hain main kuch nahi kahungi and sits straight

MOHAN : nanduuu...!!!!!!

NANDINI : main hothi kon hoon nahi jo aap meri bathe manenge

MOHAN : ye kya bolri hain...tu meri beti hain...aur ye ache se janthi hain...

NANDINI : nahi hoon main apki beti agar hothi tho aise peekar and stops crying once again

MOHAN : tch arey maine zyada nahi piya sachi wo bohuth dino baad piya na tho shayad isliye

NANDINI : aap piye hi kyu haan janthe the janthe the ki apki sehath ke liye teek nahi hoga lekin phir bi

MOHAN : sryyy naaa galthi hogayi le kaan pakad tha hoon and holds his ear

NANDINI : agar aapko kuch ho jatha tho ye gudiya kya karthi haaa kaise rehthi apne papa ke bagair boliye

mohan smiles while a lone tear escapes from manik's eye who was listening their conversation silently with closed eyes...

MOHAN : arey baba kuch nahi hoga gudiya ke papa ko aur agar kuch ho bi gaya tho gudiya hogi na uske sath uske paas so wo sab teek kardegi

Nandini looks him silently without saying anything while mohan continues please gudiya maaf karde apne papa ko...I promise main aage se aisa bilkul nahi karunga...pakka apna dyan rakunga aur zyada nahi piyunga...

NANDINI : aur agar apna dyan nahi raka tho...zyada piliya tho...

MOHAN : jo tho kahegi wo karunga pakka

nandu sleeps on his chest and please papa ye gudiya apne papa ke bina nahi jee payegi...isliye please...please apna dyan rakiye...

mohan kisses her hairs letting his tears flow and am sry but I promise aage se aisa nahi karunga...

she doesn't say anything and just stays like that...

MOHAN : nanduuu

NANDINI : hmmm

MOHAN : tu ne mujhe maaf kiya na

NANDINI : ummm

MOHAN : aur manik ko

she opens her eyes and sees manik lying in same position saying nothing

MOHAN : beta uski koyi galthi nahi hain

NANDINI : tho iska matlab hain sari galthi apki hain

MOHAN : haan wo

NANDINI : haan tho main apse bath bi kyu karri hoon nahi

MOHAN : nahi mera matlab hain sari galthi meri nahi hain

NANDINI : tho sahi hain apke bete ki galthi hain isliye mujhe usse kuch nahi kehna hain

MOHAN : dekh jantha hoon manik ki galthi hain par teek hain

NANDINI : jee nahi kuch bi teek nahi hain

MOHAN : arey ho jatha hain kabi kabi tho

NANDINI : ek bath bathiye kitne glasses piye the aapne

MOHAN : ahmmm wooo

NANDINI : haan

MOHAN : bas char ya panch

NANDINI : kyaaa???? char ya panch...!!!!

MOHAN : haan bas char ya panch wo manik hi peye ja ra tha peye ja ra tha

dad...!!!!!! and manik getting up with a jerk ek tho aap pure das glasses piye the aur upar se mujhe bolre ho

NANDINI : das glasses???

MOHAN : nahi beta ye jhut bolra hain

MANIK : nahi nandini main sach bolra hoon

MOHAN : beta mera chod aur isse puch isne kitne glasses piyi thi

NANDINI : tum ne piya tha???

MANIK : ahhh wooo

MOHAN : piya tha arey beta isne pure pandra glasses ek hi jhat main pura kardiya

NANDINI : pandra glasses????

MANIK : nahiii nahiii nandini nahiii

MOHAN : kyaa tu be piya nahi

MANIK : haan haan piya tha lekin

MOHAN : deka beta isne piya tha

MANIK : nandini maine piya tha lekin pandra glasses nahi papa jhut bolre hain

MOHAN : acha beta jhut main bolra hoon

MANIK : aur nahi tho kya

NANDINI : enough now

Mohan and manik look nandini and then each other

NANDINI : mazak lagra hain kya sab haaa bolo

MANIK : nandini

NANDINI : kabse kabse pine lage tum haa bolo

MANIK : nandini I swear I swear main zyada nahi pitha hoon bas kabi kabi occasions par hi pitha hain aaj sab sath main the iss liye piya tha varna

NANDINI : acha lagtha hain na tum dono ko mujhe rothe huye dekh

Mohan and manik nod their heads while she continuous daru peena...sehath karab karna...bed pe sona...mujhe rulana ye hi sab chahthe ho na

MANIK : nandini ek do baar daru pene se kuch nahi hotha tum

NANDINI : listen mr manik malhotra I hate alcohol truly and completely isliye don't you dare to say anything due to which I may break your head right here right now without thinking anything

mohan giggles a little seeing manik's afraid face due to which nandu looks him and aap has kyu rahe hain haan

mohan nods his head as no while she continuous sach sach bathayiye kya apne das glasses piye the

mohan nods his head as no and then again looking nandu angry expression nods as yes and again as no while manik presses his lips inside trying hard not to laugh

Mohan looks manik and glares him while manik shows his teeth back to him making nandu more angry looking them

NANDINI : aap logon se bath karna meri galthi hain and tries to get up only to get stopped by both of them

Sryyy sryyy sryyy and they shout holding her hands

Nandu doesn't say anything and looks them seriously

MANIK : sry really sry extremely sry

MOHAN : please maaf kar do

Nandu turns her face

MANIK : acha bathao ham kya kare jisse tumhari gussa aur narazgi yu gayab hojaye

nandu looks them for a second and raises her eyebrows while mohan and manik look her and then "nahiii"

MANIK : mushkil hain nandu

MOHAN : ham kal bath karthe hain na iske bare main

Nandu glares them while they continue okkk

MANIK : koyi aur option nahi hain kya

MOHAN : haan matlab and stops seeing her getting up

promise...promise...promise...!!!!! and they shout in unison making nandu sit and look them

Promise... ham aaj se nahi peyenge... and they look her sadly while she continuous kya nahi peyenge

MANIK : PANI

MOHAN : haan

nandu makes an irritated face while they immediately continue daaru..daaru nahi peyenge...

NANDINI : good

MANIK : par tumhe sab se promise leni hogi ki wo log bi nahi peyenge

NANDINI : sab matlab

MANIK : kabir,abhi,dhruv and papa

NANDINI : sab logon ne piyi thi???

MANIK : haan

NANDINI : sab ko main kal dekhungi

MOHAN : so happy

NANDINI : yess

MANIK : but am sad

nandu hits his shoulder while mohan interrupts acha chelo rath kaafi hogayi hain tho ab so jao

hmmm and manan settles on either sides of mohan

MOHAN : arey ye kya

NANDINI : rath kaafi hogayi hain na tho so jare hain

mohan smiles and kissing her hairs thank you

nandu smiles and keeps her head on his chest

manik places his head on mohan's shoulder and holds nandu hand which was on mohan stomach

She smiles looking him while he gestures a thank you moving his lips making his grip tighter on her hand

"good night" uttering in unison all three close their eyes smiling hugely...




Am really happy that I took decision of sending pm's because due to that I came to know how many are actually reading my ff...so yes this update is token of my love for each and every one who read my ff...guys am saying again please buddy me for pms...next update would be probably on sunday as am trying to post another ff do dil tomorrow...luv u...tc...abi bi jo silent readers bache hain hope u are happy now as I updated here...
Edited by anumanan - 9 years ago
samiksha_2593 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey
I think
U updated dis part
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Posted: 9 years ago
first read kr k mza a gya manik and uske dad bechare. ...hehehe
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi thanks for the update
but mujhe pm nahi mili
oved the update
continue soon and haan pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
Your new reader!! It was awsome... Really loved it...
sohalee thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
SOOO Sweet!!!!
cute update
loved it as always👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
thanks for the update and dont forget next time to pm and post the update please
keep smiling
nice update😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
anu waiting for next update ..

cont soon .
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stay blessed..
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Posted: 9 years ago
It was really awesome..
the trio talks tooo good..
keep it up..
waiting for next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update pls next update 👏

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