#2//The Ex's At War//Chapter 9 pg133 n Link for Thread 3 on pg153

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parthsha

@parthsha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#151

No baby we r liking each n every part...

Lz continueee

N no pms this time why...

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Arunima

@jesse93

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Posted: 9 years ago

#152

So I think Manini aajayegi but uske liye time toh hai na...
Yaar kaise stop kar sakti ho yaar!
Cliff hanger, like this!
Kaise wait karu ab mai?

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rajirock123

@rajirock123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#153

Hi dear update is superb jelous manik wow and u ended in clifhanger not fair dear

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tas456

@tas456

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#154

Awesome update dear

Loved it thoroughly

Jealous manik is just a treat to watch

Manini is so so so cute

Not done yaar how can you stop like that on a cliff hanger

Plsss update the next part soon

You r truly an amazing writer

Love you so so much!!!!

Take care and stay blessed

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AsthaVerma92

@AsthaVerma92

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#155

Wow wat an update...
Nw manan in one house...
Amazing dey shld stop fighting lyk kids...

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noorchauhan

@noorchauhan

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#156

Hahaa cute update. I m loving d small small fights between manan. Still d typical husband and wife. Maannniinniii... Why so cute 😆 😆 mentioned earlier also I love maninis dialogues d most. Soo cute kaddu.What is it wid dis steve he is irritating now. Mr. Malhotra being possesive 😆 maniks mom nyc move n of course d iintelligent kaddu.
Love des small small family incidents.
Tysm for updating. 😃

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NiyaJaiswal

@NiyaJaiswal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#157

superb update...
loved jealous manik...
manini antics were so cute...
waiting for ur nxt update..
continue soon...

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hpzaya

@hpzaya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#158

cant wait for next update...you left at cliffhanger...pls update...plsss

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shivi39

@shivi39

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Posted: 9 years ago

#159

U left it on cliff :(
now i have wait full 1 week
back to the update
as usaul awesome
manik still feel jealous heehehe..
I loved to watch jealous manik
nd manik's srcasm is so funny about nandu's hight hehehe
aww manik concern about nandini so much
nandini is jealous of her own daughter heehe..
His mom know her son so much
she know her way to stay manik with nandini
nd manini is so cute i love her nd her talk
nd i m intrested in your this FF
so plz don't take long break
waiting for your next update
update soon... :)

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shravya

@shravya.kr

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#160

Awww...the story is getting better and better with each update...it is really awesome...sorry had exams last week and was busy with the festival...could not comment.

This story is really awesome...jelous manikin is a treat...and the way u write is the icing on the cake. !!!

Please don't loose interest. ...we love u and the stories u write...we wait for the weekend only to read ur update...please write...!!

The story is absolutely going amazing!! Can't wait what will happen next

Ps. Manini is so cute...I seriously try to impersonate the language