#2//The Ex's At War//Chapter 9 pg133 n Link for Thread 3 on pg153 - Page 18

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sahasimren thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved it.
It was amazing.
Jealousy at its heights.
Thank you fpr updating.
Post the next update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was awesome as always dear
love every scene of it
i hope you give some naughty romance in the next chap
cant wait to see manik teasing nandu
update soon please
and please donf take break now
i love both your stories cant stop reading them
keep up the good work
stay blessed
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Posted: 9 years ago
it was an awesome update luv the way you wrote it thnks & update nxt part soon pm me also
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Posted: 9 years ago


they are perfect made for eachother

they are perfect made for eachother
their taunts on eachother with their cooking and driving skills
i just love this jealousy, possessive jerk at the same time very much caring husband... muahhh
n manik is really apt for this character.ooohhh i just love him tooo much
n this manik's character in u story makes me more crazier for him... i just wish i would have a husband just exactly like him
manik's mom was too good.. of course noone knows us very well other than our mother
it was very nice to see that mukti n nandini has become thicker friends
manini baby you're so cute..awww i wanna pull ur cheeks... ur more like ur daddy
n the climax... yaar cliffhanger kar diya...
i just hope ki instead of some teasing session there would be some coochiku scenes
come on yaar there would be more likes n comments only when there is more n more manan scenes right???
because we all love that!!!!!!!!!
pls give an update soon so that i wont get attack thinking about this climax

Edited by happiegal - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
hey diii...
amazing updateee...awsmm...
really lvd it...
seeing manik jealous n angry is a treat to watch hahah...amazinggg...
nandu n mukti s hug...
hrshd n mukti togthr wohoo surprisee...i mean chlo kuch to acha kia isne...
bt manik s n hrshd relation will nvr gonna chng...
they bth will b enemies only i think ...
n hrshd hlpd nandu wow unbelievable...

thn tht aj tmhri madam kuch jyada lmbi nai lg rai...chommmuuu ..hahahhh...amazingg...
i cn reallyyy imagine manik saying all this to chomuuu hahahah...
his expressinssd...amazinnnggg..
only manik malhotra cn make nandu feel consious n hw clumsily she behaves around himmm...haahah...
n thn their glarrs...they really dnt gt enough of ech.othr ...evn in glaring too...
shoes thing..he knws hr vry wll...
n thn steve s entry...she hs to gt bck at him ...anyhwww...
so y nt...making him jealous..bt nandu u knw the consequences vry wll...heheh...
he mst b imagining steve s face in this platee...hahah...
amazingg.
n thn she tripped...bt y fear whn manik is thr...
he really cares fr hr ..vry mchh...
cnt see hr in pain..

n his fav wrk carrying hr in his armss...amazinnnggg
his cmmnts ..show off...his mthr knws hw to instigate him...
n his daughtr is no lss patta lia apne papa koo...heheh..
cooking skills...same as hr driving skillsss...hahah..
n thn chnge mai b hlp chaiye..
mtlb aisi situation mai b he knws hw to gt naughty..heheh..
n thn cming in hr room while she ws changing...
n tht look of hi..
i knw baby...hahah..he is the bstt..
bt di u lft it on a cliifff hngr ...hw i m gonna wait...

n plsss di ..dnt take a brkkk...
waiting fr a week is vry diffclt thn hw we gonna wait fr lnggg...
plsss dnt do this ...
i really lv ur storieesss ...sachi..plsss
n plsss cntinue soonnn...
will b waitinggg
bye
tc
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Posted: 9 years ago
Loved the update way too much
I love when Manik mock nandini



But I really feel like crying sometime seeing nandini and Manik apart from each other




Update soon
God bless uh
S.h.e.e.t.a.l thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Aiiiyooo typical manan stubborn heads
hehe manik is still jealous
loved family time
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update... I just love your writings... but have to wait for a week... If possible pls update the next part
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Posted: 9 years ago
Ur story is beautiful girl please don't stop writing I really wait for the weekend just to read your story so please continue to write and if you stop in between then I will kidnap you and will make you write just for me take this as a dhamki from your reader who loves your work to the core
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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally update is here thank u.this one is really hillarious how come they can f8ght sooo romantocally.Manik killed chicken inplate once again ha ha ha.Nandu thinks Manik dealt wid tabloid ppl for Rewa not fir her sooo stupod of Nandu.Harshad Mukthi getting married.good twists for us .Even aftervseeing his moms n maninis bond Manik thinks still she 8s selfish n mean.nNandu thinks he stayed back for Manini.So stupid n egoist both are but no prblm.mpre they fight more rantic shall be their reunion.Now as wr finished reading nxt thing to do is eagerly waiting for nxt episode.last thing hope u dont feel bad.previpus episode as per ur set standards thodaaa sa phika tha isliye chotu sa comment but this u0date again showed ur mark toh again long comment.we do understand u do maintain ur standard always but sometimes u know what i m ean .so 0lzz dont feel bad and plzz dont stop writing .already nowadays ky2 is sucking .so plzz dont stop updating.keep writing n entertaining us.loads of luv

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