#2//The Ex's At War//Chapter 9 pg133 n Link for Thread 3 on pg153 - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago
just loved it plzzz cont soon plzz
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Posted: 9 years ago
Dnt end the story soon..i am in love with the story. ..bt such a cliffhanger u left us with😭😭😭 please give us a midweek update. 😛..cnt wait fr it😃😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
They both love each other...but still they both have to fight for their egos.Certified Idiots!
Y did u hv to end at such an amazing point?
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Posted: 9 years ago
And we a jealous Manik again !! It is soo cool to see him all riled up whenever another man comes close to her Nandini :)
It'll be fun to see how the 2 of them manage under the same roof again .. Waiting :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update ... Nd long too ... Bt u ended it on the very interesting point ... What is this yaar ... Now have to wait to know what happened nxt ... Manik stealthily entered into her room nd was enjoying the view ... Tht word " lecherous look" which manik gave to Nandini ... It really made me laugh ...
U know after reading this update ...actually while reading the update my battisi was in full flash mode ... Seriously loved this update ... So Manik made sure tht reporter apologises to Nandini ... He still can't take anything against her ... Nd sarcastic Manik is also a treat with jealous Manik ... He again comments on her height ...
"Tumhari Madam kuch zyada lambi nahi lag rahi hai chomu",
Ha ha ha ha ... Chomu ... This made me laugh more ... Firstly he commented on her height n thn he called Shahid as Chomu ...🤣🤣 then we get to see a jealous Manik ... He was all ready to reap Steve's head fr being all touchy with Nandini ... Mukti was silently enjoying the scene ... Even Nandini was enjoying this jealousy of Manik ... She was very much satisfied to settle all her scores with him ...
Nd then Manik ki kahi baat sach hui ... She actually lost balance nd sprained her ankle ... Bt here also manik was settling his scores with Steve ... He was happy tht now she won't be able to go with him fr tht party or whatever tht was ... He really cares fr her a lot ... He took her to the hospital nd literally dragged the doc to treat her ... Nd then carried her to her apartment ... Bt hats off to his mom ... She actually knows how to instigate her son very well nd she was successful also ... After Manini's pleads nd seeing Nandini's condition he decided to stay back ... Nd Manini ... Tht cutie pie actually played an important role in manaoing Manik to stay ... She is such a sweetheart ... Bt she got confused between MaNan's sarcastic comments ...
"Kadduu you are just giving more reasons to your Daddy not to stay back",
"Princess tell your Mommy I am at least better off with cooking than she is with driving"
Bechari Manini ... Kuch samajh nhi aaya use ... So on Manini's request Manik was ready to b a chief nd cook pasta fr his princess ...
I really liked tht mother daughter scene ... Manini was sharing her all day doings with her mom ... So cutely nd playing with her hair ... Nd I was lyk ... Awww !!! Sweetie ... She wanted to kiss her leg bt our concerned Malhotra didn't let her do tht as it can hurt Nandini's leg ...
Nd tht last scene ...😳😳
Bht galat tym pe end kiya yaar ... Thts nt fare ... Now have to wait fr the nxt update ... Pta nhi kab aega ... Plz na update it jaldi if possible ... Nd plz dnt loose ur interest in writing ... Ur both ff's r my top most priority ... Seriously ... I love both a lottt ... Waiting fr the update ...

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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Manik loves to irritated and tease nandini
And manik loves his daughter a lot
And he was concerned for nandini
But slowly manan are coming close
Superb update
Fab update
Loved it
Loved the update
Update the next part soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Really well written!
I wait whole week long for your update eagerly :O
Aaahn u ended it on a clifhanger
I hope dey come close soon..
I lovee manik evn though separated he is still so jealous...
Now hafto wait for the nxt update :'( :'(
This is my fav ff! The best trust me...
Nd u write it the best
Im a silent reader normally!
I hardly comment on ny but the way u write your story mkes me comment...
Keep it up!
Updare soon pls f possible :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hey
This update was too good .
Manik and his jealousy .uff ! <3
He only wants her attention all the time even at the time of work .
Kyun alag kiya unko ? Hahah

They are so amazing .

And by the way I wait for your updates every weekend and you are thinking for a break
:(
Please Aisa mat karo.
I know it becomes difficult to manage two stories and work but you are doing an amazing job.
Baaki .. Its upto you .
We wouldn't want to add further stress
You story is fun to read .
And you are one of my favourites

Kudos

-God bless
Edited by Adeebaayub - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.
Cliffhanger per choddiya ab what we assume...?
Update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hahaha totally adored Maniks' reactions
Aaouch that should hurt ... So u did this for Rewa ... Like seriously he still thinks Rewa is innocent
I would love to see his reaction when he comes to know the truth.
Kudos to ya dear

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