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Posted: 9 years ago

#761

Part 14C

All the family members wants to take a break as because of the back to back performances they are tired.

Manik went to Nyonika and his grandmas to attend them and spend sometime with them.

Nandini notices this.

'Aiyyappa... Is he trying to avoiding me... Waise tou mere aas paas hi rehte hai... But aaj... Ghalati meri hai.., Maine unki wish puri nahi ki... He didn't even eat anything yet... Main kya karun... Aiyyappa please help...'

Nandini's eyes were getting moist thinking and she is trying to avoid not to cry.

The younger clan were right beside her chitchatting. Cabir observes that she is not participating in the conversation. He turn to her and was shocked to see tears were forming at the corner of her eyes.

"Kya baat hai Nandini... Yeh phool jaisa chehra aaj Itna murjhaya hua kyun hai... Ab yeh mutt kehna ki headache hai... Coz headache se aankhon mein aansoo nahi aate..." Cabir asked her as big brother.

" kuch nahi... Nothing serious..." She cleared her eyes with a napkin and faked a smile.

" apne bhai ko bhi nahi bataogi..." He asked again.

" actually... The thing is..." And she narrated the whole thing excluding the part about Manik's challenge.

" Hmmm tou aise tangg kar raha hai Woh tumhe..." Cabir rubbed his chin with his fingers.

" And he didn't eat anything since he left from here..." Nandini is getting worried about his food.

"Kehte hain ki Jab tak main nahi boloongi Woh Kuch nahi khayenge... It's already past 10..." again Nandini's eyes getting moist.

Others were also got involved in the conversation and everybody was surprised hearing Manik's stubbornness and childish behavior.

Nandini requested everyone not to mention anything to him.

"Tumne Hume Kuch nahi bataya ... Hum kuch karte thei..." Navya puts her point of view.

Mukti was smiling hearing the whole thing.

" so he's trying to be a tough nut with you... I know how to tackle him... In fact I have an idea... Which will cheer him up..." Mukti offers her help.

She whispered something very quietly that only they can here it.

After hearing it Navya said

"Idea Bura nahi hai but baki ke jo performances hai Woh thoda aage karna hoga..."

"Waise bhi sab thoda thak Gaye hai to they will relax for a bit..." Aliya joined too as she and Dhruv didn't got to perform as a couple.

"Haan Aliya is right... Waise bhi Nandini aur Manik ke faces par Woh smile Lana zaroori hai..." Dhruv added.

"So Chalo lets execute our plan..."

Mukti stands up saying.

"I'll go and inform them..." She said before leaving them.

"Wait Mukti main bhi chalti hoon tumhare saath..." Aliya joined her.

"Hum bhi aate hai..." Navya pulled Nandini's hand and dragged her along.

Mukti went to the place where her whole family and Murthy family was seated.

"Guys there's a change in the plan..." Mukti said surprising every one.

" kaisa change..."Nyonika asked.

Manik looked at Nandini whose face was a little dull. The charm was missing. He regrets right there and thought

''Maine kuch ghalat tou nahi kiya... No no... Ghalat tou nahi... Haan thoda stubborn ho Gaya hoon... But no worries I'll make it up to her... Once she says what she has to say..'

He was admiring her worried look

'Oh God I so wanted to take of that worried look from her face... Agar yahan koi nahi hota tou... I would have showered kisses all over her face... Kehna tou usse padega... She has to confess.. I knew she loves me but... Hesitating to say it... But aaj you have to say it Nandini... Chahe iske liye mujhe puri raat bhuka kyun na rehna pade..' He thought and smirked.

" Saale ek phool jaisi ladki ko tangg karke tujhe Kya mil Raha hai..." Cabir grabbed him from behind and pulled him away from others.

"What... Maine Kya kiya hai..." Manik got startled hearing him.

'Kahin Nandini ne bata tou nahi diya..' He thought.

"Tou people Sangeet mein dancing on songs tou sab hi karte hai... Issi liye hum ne thoda change kiya hai.." Mukti started explaining.

"As most of us are singers here so we will sing songs in our own voices with the help of some orchestra... It's like antakshiri... But there's no competition and no winning or losing... But sab ko is mein participate karna padega..." She told all...

"Bhai aap bhi and Nani Dadi aap log ko bhi bhaag Lena hoga... Basically all will take part when ever you remembers any song... And if any of you wants to dance they can dance too... Tou every body understands the game right..."

All of them were happy hearing the plan.

Meanwhile the waiters moved the chairs on the sides making a big open space in the middle.

"So all of you ready..." Mukti asked.

"Yeah..." All of them cheers.

Manik was standing behind Nyonika thinking what's going on in Mukti's mind. He didn't have any idea that this change of plan is for him. He looked at Nandini who is just staring at him non stop getting worried for him and was at the verge of crying.

"Hum start karte hain... " Navya said going in the middle.

All the other guest were settled around the seats. The musicians came near the group to play music according to the songs.

Navya told something to the orchestra people and started the song and she also danced with the music.

"Mayi ni mayi mundher pe teree, bol raha hain kaga

Jogan ho gayee teree dularee, man jogee sang laga...
Maye ni maye mundher pe teree, bol raha hain kaga
Jogan ho gayee teree dularee, man jogee sang laga... "

When she is done., Cabir stands up and was giving Her a loving gaze and starts a song with G. Navya came down and took her seat.

Gal mithi mithi bol,
Ras kaano main tu ghol,
Bajne de taashe dhol,
Masti main tu bhi dol,
Mann ke naina tu khol,
Chahat ke moti roll,
Dil hota hai anmol,
Ye daulat se na tol,
Aa soni teinnu chend ki main chudi pehnawa,
Mennu karde ishara to main doli le aawa,

Hearing him sing Navya got shy and bend her head down. Manik got up from his chair and said

"I have a song with the letter V..." And starts singing in his sexy voice.

Vada raha...

pyar se pyar ka,
Ab hum na honge judaa,
Vada raha pyar se pyar ka,
Ab hum na honge judaa,
Yeh... meri dhadkane...
sun raha hai khuda

He is constantly watching Nandini with so much of love in his eyes and his song is doing the rest of the work. Nandini also joined him with next part of the song by getting up from her place and walked to him trying to keep an eye contact with him but getting shy from the people around.

Chahe tumhe is kadar mera dil,
Tumko nahi hai pataa,
Yeh meri dhadkane
sun raha hai khuda;
Vadaa rahaa pyaar se pyaar ka Ab hum na honge judaa,

When they finished everyone clapped and cheered for them. Mukti hugged Nandini with so much of care. "Don't worry bhai will get what he wants..." Mukti whispered in her ears. Manik was getting curious now. 'There's definitely something going on in between all of these guys.' He thought

Abhimanyu said " I have a song..." And he started singing in his not so good voice.

Dheere Dheere Se Meri Zindagi Mein Aana
Dheere Dheere Se Mere Dil Ko Churaana
Tum Se Pyaar Humein Kitna Hai Jaane Jaana
Tumse Milkar Tumko Hai Bataana

Looking at Mukti he again repeat the lines. Hearing the words Mukti is shocked and a little surprised too . Than again she thought that may be he is just singing a normal song.

Dheere Dheere Se Meri Zindagi Mein Aana
Dheere Dheere Se Mere Dil Ko Churaana
Tum Se Pyaar Humein Kitna Hai Jaane Jaana
Tumse Milkar Tumko Hai batana.

When he finished and was still gazing at Mukti mesmerizing her beauty. Mukti was astound by his openness remembering the words of the song and got shy and tries looking here and there avoiding his eye contact.

Dhruv came forward and start singing with the dance moves by clicking his fingers.

Nasha yeh pyaar ka nasha hai, yeh meree bat yaaron maano. Nashe me yaar dub jao, raho na hosh me deewaano

Kee jabse maine tumko yeh dil de diya, mitha mitha sa dard le liye
Suno o priya, maine tumko dil diya

He looked at Aliya and winked at her. She popped her eyes open and make an 'O' out of her mouth. Dhruv has openly accepted her love in front of every one what more can she asked for. Cabir was observing this and thought

' chalo yeh antakshiri ka idea Kaam tou aaya sab apne apne dil ki baat songs ke through Bol rahe hai... At least it's working for Dhruv.' And he smiled puttin a hand on his chin. Navya noticed this.

"Kya baat hai... Aap akele akele smile kar rahe ho... Kya sonch rahe ho..." She asked.

"Yeh jo idea hai na antakshiri ka it's superb nai..." He said with a smile.

"Haan waqai... Bahut maza aa raha hai..."

Vikram got from his chair and turned to Nyonika..and said
"Nyonika... This is for you..." And he started singing

Ai meri zoharaa zabi
Tujhe maalum nahi
Tu abhi tak hai hasi
Aur mai javaan
Tujhape qurabaan meri jaan meri jaan

He held Nyonika's hand and made her come out of her place and dance with her continuing the song.

Ai meri zoharaa zabi
Tujhe maalum nahi
Tu abhi tak hai hasi
Aur mai javaan
Tujhape qurabaan meri jaan meri jaan

When he's done Manik went and gave a tight hug to her mom and kissed on her temple. They were laughing and having fun when they heard a very melodious voice and turned to see the singer. It's none other than Nandini.

Na jaane mere dil ko kya ho gaya Abhi to yahin tha abhi kho gayaa.

Na jaane mere dil ko kya ho gaya Abhi to yahin tha abhi kho gayaa

Nyonika and vikram were gone to their seats and Manik was the only one standing there. He was getting restless hearing her beautiful voice standing so close to her and wants to take her in his arms right there. But he controls and join her.

Ho gaya hai tujhako to pyaar sajana Laakh kar le tuu inakaar sajana dildaar sajna , hai yeh pyaar sajana

Ho gaya hai tujhako to pyaar sajana Laakh kar le tuu inakaar sajanaDiladaar sajana, hai yeh pyaar sajana
He was glancing at her and enchanted by her innocence. She blushes hard by sensing his gaze on herself and getting more nervous. Now this time Rishab got up and asked permission from Manik

"Jeeju may I..." Manik nodded his head in a yes. He started his song.

aa aa aashiqui mein teri jaa jaa jaayegi jaan meri
de de dil jaaye na jaan yeh
hain kasam hain meri
aa aa aashiqui mein teri jaa jaa jaayegi jaan meri
tu meri jannat hain tu hi meri chahat hain
tu meri bechaini tu hi meri raahat hain
tu hi manzil meri
aa aa aashiqui mein teri jaa jaa jaayegi jaan meri

When he was done. Cabir came in front and sang. Looking at Navya and making gestures with his eyes.

Ruk ja o dil deewane
Poochhoon toh main zara
Ladki hai ya hai jaadu
Khushboo hai ya nasha
Ha ruk ja o dil deewane
Poochhoon to main zara
Arrey ladki hai ya hai jaadu
Khushboo hai ya nasha
Paas wo aaye toh
Chhoo ke main dekhoon zara
Ruk ja o dil deewane
Poochhoon toh main zara

Hearing the song Navya was smiling like idiots and clapping with the music. When he finished the song she thought

'Jo song letter aana chahiye woh kyun Nahi aa raha... 'She folded her hands hiding from every body and prayed

'Bhagwan Ji woh letter jaldi se de dijiye...please...' And she kissed her hands closing her eyes.

"Ab hamaari Bari hai kyun Laajoji... Hum gaayenge yahin baith kar..."

Nani told Dadi and started singing.

Reshami salwar kudta jali ka Rup saha nahi jaye nakhre wali ka hoye

Dadi joined for the next part.

Ja re pichha chhod mujh matavali ka Kahe dhundhe rasta kotvali ka
All the people clapped vigorously on their singing. Everyone was enjoying this so called antakshiri and were having lots of fun. In all this songs and dances Manik still couldn't figure out why all of a sudden there was this change in the program.He was busy mesmerizing his girl and her nervousness and her uneasiness...which he created for her and he is enjoying the effects he has on her and praising himself. 'I will definitely make it up for you sweetheart... I know you are thinking that maybe I'm avoiding you but... Trust me... I'm at the verge of taking you in my arms and kiss you hard...but I have to do this...you have to come out of your shell of shyness at least in front of me...' He thought. Nandini was watching him with a plead in her eyes like saying this is not fair what you are doing. he again thought of a song and came forward.

Aise Na Mujhe Tum Dekho
Seene Se Laga Loonga
Tumko Main Chura Loonga Tumse
Dil Mein Chhupa

Looking at Nandini he literally tries to express his feelings through the song. Her eyes was moist hearing him. Than suddenly music starts with a bang. And Dhruv came in front taking Aliya with him. He starts dancing on the music and sang.

Everybody get down! This party's going to town!
Ram baba loola, bam bam boo, there's only one thing to do

Baby baby let's rock!
I said all night long till twelve o'clock yeah!

Gori gori, gori gori, gori gori. Kabhi kabhi, kahin kahin, chori chori

Chhup chhup ke tum mila karo
Pyaari pyaari baatein waatein kiya karo
Par yun na milna kisise kabhi hamaare siwa. Gore gore, gore gore, gore gore.

Bhole bhole, naye naye, kore kore

Dekho dekho hum dono meet hai
Suno suno dil ki jo preet hai. Par sun na paaye inhein na koyi hamaare siwa

Gori gori, gori gori, gori gori
Kabhi kabhi, kahin kahin, chori chori

They all dance on this song. Taking the opportunity of the last letter that is I Manik took the guitar from the guy and starts playing it while singing.

Inteha ho gayi intezaar ki aayi na kuchh khabar mere yaar ki. Yeh hamein hai yakeen bewafaa woh nahin phir wajah kya hui. intezaar kiInteha ho gayi intezaar ki aayi na kuchh khabar mere yaar ki. Yeh hamein hai yakeen bewafaa woh nahin phir wajah kya hui. intezaar kiClosing his eyes he finished the song. Cabir Navya and Mukti took a sigh and thought at last the letter we were looking for. And by signing with eyes Navya indicated Nandini to go in the center. And Cabir gestured the boy to dim the lights And put the spotlight on Nandini. Manik opened her eyes and saw the lights Were closed. His eyes searched for Nandini and saw here standing in the center With a transparent orange color dupatta over her face and her eyes were closed.she started singing. Kaate nahi kat-te ye din ye raat. Kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat. Kaate nahi kat-te ye din ye raat. Kehni thi tumse jo dil ki baat. Lo aaj main kehti hoon I love you,I love you, I love you, I love you, I love youHearing I LOVE YOU Manik bit his lower lip. And gave the guitar to the guy. He Was smiling to himself like crazies and started walking towards Nandini. But Before he can reach her Mukti Aliya and Navya ran to her and hugged her all Together. Manik now understands the whole scenario. He rolled his tongue inside his cheek and was watching the drama. Cabir came to him putting his hands on his shoulder and says. " now are you happy... Mujhe Nahi pata tha ki tu majnu hone ke Saath saath ziddi.Bhi ho jaayega... Haan khair pata tou tha but aaj Teri zidd dekh li... " Manik was not paying any heed to Cabir's talk but was just watching her with a Lot of intensity for her."Ab Aise dekh Kya raha hai... Go and talk to her... Woh bahut. Pareshaan thi Teri wajah se"Cabir said again.

With out saying any thing Manik walked out of the garden towards the back of the house.

Cabir came to Navya and whispered something in Navya's ear. Navya smiled.

"Nandini tum Zara humare saath chalo... Kuch Kaam hai... "She dragged Nandini by holding her wrist..

"Navya Kahan le jaa rahi ho... " Nandini asked looking here and there for Manik.

"Tum chalo tou sahi..." Navya insisted.. And she took Nandini behind the house that is in the back yard garden.

Manik was standing there facing his back to them.

"Jeejaji yeh rahi aapki amaanath... Aap logon ke paas 15 minutes Hai... Iss se ziyada hum aur time Nahi de sakte... Kyun ki log phir sawaal Karna shuru kardenge..." Saying this. Navya left them alone.

Manik was standing few feet away from Nandini.

Nandini ran to him and grabbed Him from behind by his shoulders sliding her hands in the front

"I LOVE YOU MANIK... I LOVE YOU... And she started sobbing.

Manik caught hold of her wrist and bring her in front of him and. hugged her in a bone crushing hug burying his head in her neck.

They stood like that for sometime without saying anything. They were listening to each. other's heartbeat. Manik pulled her more to himself and was just moving his palms all over her back touching her bare back.

"I'm sorry... " he whispered in her ears giving a peck under her ear.

It gives goosebumps to her. She moved back a little and looked in his eyes.

He watches her face and seeing the tears that already flows from her eyes he felt bad..

"Meri wajah se tum itni pareshaan hui... And Maine tumhe rula bhi diya... "He paused

"But don't worry I'll make it even..." Saying this he bend down and kissed her eyes and than moving a little more down he kissed her cheeks wiping her tears.

Blood rushes through her spine all the way to her body..

He glide his left hand behind her head under her soft and silky hair and clutching her waist with his other hand he smacked his lips on hers.

She moaned in his mouth but he didn't let her moan comes out.

He opened his mouth and sucked her lips like he is sucking a chocolate. She shivers like a feather under his touch loosing the strength in her knees. Feeling her loosing the balance Manik pulled her more closer making her hold him by his neck.

She slid her hands behind his neck and glide her fingers in his hair moving him more to her.

He was playing with her lips making it open by his tongue and entered her mouth. She tasted out of this world . No,words can describe this feeling. It feels like all,the sweetness in the world has gathered in her mouth. He sucked her tongue and make her weaker in her knees. He dig his fingers on her waist making. her hiss inside his mouth. He enjoys her moan and hissing. He was sucking her lips like crazy making it swollen.

Feeling her out of breath he leaves her lips and gives a trails of kisses from her cheek to her neck.

She held her tight by holding his neck and putting her head on his shoulder tip,toeing her feet.

Manik put both of his hands on her waist and hold her. Stood there just like that.

"I LOVE YOU TOO NANDINI..." He whispered huskily blowing his breath on her neck.

She moved away from him and looked into his eyes.

" ab tou aap mujh se naraaz Nahi hai na... " she very innocently asked with her swollen lips.

He saw her face and was feeling so happy because her lips were all swollen by his kiss.

He smiled seeing his effect on her..

"Tumse Kiske kaha ki main naraaz hoon..." Manik said giving soft kiss on her lips again.

" Tou phir Abhi tak aapne kuch khaya kyun Nahi..." She asked again..

"Ab tou Maine aapke promise pura kar diya naa..."

" promise pura Kahan hua hai...l" he started teasing her again.

" kiya tou hai...l said what you wanted to hear..." Nandini very innocently makes a pouty face.

"Haan but jab Maine tumse kaha tab tumne Nahi bola..." He said smirking.

" phir..." She asked again getting worried.

"Phir you have to pay the consequences... I told you naa... Tumne promise kiya tha ki agar tum sangeet se pehle mujhe I LOVE YOU Nahi bologi tou main jo kahunga woh. karogi... Yaad aaya..." Manik reminds her.

"Haan par Maine bola na abhi abhi..." She clarify again.

"Still you have to complete my challenge..." Manik smiled on her innocence.

"Challenge Kya hai..." She asked.

He pulled her with a jerk that she smashed on his chest.

"You have to kiss me... On my lips..." He went close to her face. and said seductively.

End of part14 C

The surprise was Nandini confession in front of every body

So guys how is the sangeet function going

I have given you 2 back to back and very long updates

So I expect lots and lots of comments

Even from my silent readers

At least tell me how do you like it

I really want to know how is the confession

So expecting lots and lots and lots of comments

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Dhingli44

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Posted: 9 years ago

#762

Amazing..
It was so so cute 😳
Aww...Nandu is soo innocent.
And Manik is taking advantage of this 😆
Cabini bond is so damn relatable and one of a kind...and u have justified it.
Indeed a long chappy. 😉

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bhakti02

@bhakti02

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Posted: 9 years ago

#763

Awesome update..
Loved the whole function..
Cabir and gang rocks
Manan were so cute.. & hot too
Update soon

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angellovemanan

@angellovemanan

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Posted: 9 years ago

#764

loved ur update

continue soon and the way

nandini expressed her feelings were very good

do pm me

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Shikhaa Modi

@shikhaamodi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#765

Confession. ...finally a mind blowing one. ..now eagerly waiting for punishment part ...rather it was too smooth n chocolaty

Edited by shikhaamodi - 9 years ago

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nandinimanan

@nandinimanan

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#766

Awesome update..
Loved the whole function..
Cabir and gang rocks
Manan were so cute.. & hot too
Update soon

Loved it and u killed it

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Crazy8000

@Crazy8000

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Posted: 9 years ago

#767

Amazing update
What to say words r less to define ur story
Its awesome
Manik n nandini roothna manana
Der small talks
N at d end dere confession in front of everyone
Dat was soo cute
Unexpected
Cavya's small moment was also very grt
All in all d sangeet is super amazing
Thnkx for lamba sa update
N thnkx for pm
N plz continue soon

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sri_valli

@sri_valli

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#768

superb,amazing,fentabylous and very long updates dear...really liked ur song selection...confession was really Gud...all frnds helped her and that antakshari idea was Gud...lastly kiss was blissful...and waiting for nandinis initiative in kiss...