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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Story is going good..
Keep writing 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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this is for those who had commented else I had discontinued but now cmnts express that I should right


chapter:-8

precap:- teasing session for moment reality strikes


all settled & manik told whatever is done till they came

cabir:-shit guyz this is totally shit ye to bara kamina nikla

mukti:- manik nandu kesi hai yr she love that son of bitch but he left her to die but she never expressed her reaction


manik started to laugh all gave him weird looks reason himself know that was nandu's reaction he saw that how was nandu ready to kick his ass so he must catch his butt manik continued


manik:- cabir tu apni mukti ko kya bolta hai

cabir:- gadha dhari bheem yeah but pouch q ra hai tujhe reality nae pta kya kya iss ek ko phare ga dus bnde nikle ga

all started to laugh and cabir got punch & manik continued

manik:- so mukti don't u know she gadha dhari bheems sis almost full on jhunghli billi coz she was about to kick that bustard's ass

mukti:- what she was ready to do that wow amazing I didn't expect that from my shy shy nandu wah

manik:- oh hello she was shy now not OK

all in unison:- we know why coz she love her deamon

manik got bowled out and he was blushing all went aww on him & aliya shouted

aliya:- bahi you r blushing oh shit am I dreaming

manik:- with more blush aliya plz

for diverting topic he continued guyz I gave a plan to cateh that bustard for that I need nandu so first let me go and take her down than I will explain sayng this without anyone abject he left

@upstairs where our dear nandu standing in front of mirror with blush & keep relishing his touch and getting crimson red

and manik reached and after watching her he said by chance

manik:- arey koi to roklo

nandu hearing this get the darker shed of red and manik came closer to her she was feeling his steps and inside she was doing salsa coz she wanted to enjoy the moment again and manik came so close she hear her fav music his heart beats with out any delay she turned and hugged him tight to hide her shyness

manik taken aback and understood and responded soon manik back to his naughty mood and started to play with her hair and blow air on her neck and sometime kiss her crook sometimes bite her ear to moan while nandu was burrying her head more and more in her broad chest suddenly he turned her around she closed her eyes very tightly
and manik keep her hairs at right side started to kiss her neck without leaving a space and our dear nandu 's mouth was just escaping moans

nandu:- ma..nnn.iiikkk

manik:- hm

next thing make nandu gasp coz manik lifted her top and inserted his hand inside started to tease her by caressing her back with one hand supporting with that band that being weak in knees she may not fall and he inserted his second hand in top in front and started to play with her belly button poor nandu was doing nothing just moaning and manik was enjoying her state suddenly mail turned her face and without any delay he slam his lips with her with hands he was teasing her body and with lips he was teasing her biting soothing licking and for dominance he pinched at her belly in pleasure b/w kiss she moaned and manik kissed her wildly but how come they gonna be further happy again all got hell irritated they land up upward and


all with unison:- paanch mint main romance ko der hojati hai to bahan krke ghus jaate ho andar abhi k abhi bahir niklo wrna hm drwaza tor denge

manan:- guyz shit coming and we r not romancing

cabir:- han bahi mahol to awaien garam hogya haina guyz

dhruv :-sae bola sale sahab nikal bhi aye bahir hmen to hath pakarne bhi nae dete
from inside

manik:- dhruv ruk abhi bahir ata hun fir bol ke dikha
dhruv :- a to sae
manik with opening the door:-le aagya ab bol while side hugging nandu

mukti:- nandu tu thora souch kr bahir aa
nandu:- with confidence kya han apne bf...f ke saath side hug main hun tu bhi aja

mukti:- yeah yeah we all know your bf...f with being sarcastic

manik:- yeah dhruv u have not come again say

dhruv :- buddy kya hua mainey kuxh nae bola while hiding behind alya and pleading through eyes all started to laugh and they all came down and manik continued

manik:- so guyz here's the plan he narrated his plan and cabir said

cabir:- wah manik meri sangat main reh kr bohut kuxh seekh gaya hai shabash and ran coz he know what is coming

to be continued

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lots of love

mini mouse
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Posted: 9 years ago
#53
Love your story read it in one go!! Please continue soon!
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Posted: 9 years ago
#54
Awesome update the way they romance is awesome. Waiting to know ki San in villains ki kaise band bajate hai. Nandus blushing session kabhi khatm nhi hoga.
Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Nobody wanna leave MaNan alone it seems 😃
Let's see.. How they gonna teach a lesson to the villains.

Keep writing !!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so i back with the update here u go

chapter:-9

precap :-plan narrated so here u go

manik:-so guyz begin witha plan tomorrow will be our firat step so all guyz its also late ao begi to aor houses for deep slumber and execute the plan
cabir:-manik 2nd time aqal waali bt chalo bahi let's leave
dhruv:-manik i &aliya will come together we r leaving ok
manik glared:- come again
dhruv:-mere baap dra nae apni waali ko lek3 ja ra hun teri wali ko nae smjha
all started to giggle and left cause tomorrow is a big day for all


@Next day

all in collage cabir texted to all begin with step -1 whe he saw UV in corridor

manik:- in full anger where the hell she is how can she do that to me
nandu:- who was passing by seeing him went to him and asked manik whom u r finding
manik held her and barged :-how dare uh how dare uh
nandu:-what happened manik
manik throw pics on her face and barged how can u cheat me like seriously nandani murthy now i had enough of you how can u do hat how can u stoop so low inside he himself was hurt by his word from eyes he was asking for forgiveness from face nandu was crying from eyes assuring chill
nandu:- manik let me explain plz hear me for once
manik:-oh just shut up!!!!shut the heck up and get lost never show me ur face again and next moment he saw aryan standing their thats it he bargged
manik:-see ur hidden bf is there have fun i wont come im ur way get lost
aryan with smirk but hide his smirk which went noticed by hidden fab 4 and navbhi :-came forward and said see nandu i told you this jerk don't loves uh come with me seeing his hand around nandu manik left in anger coz if he will stand their more for a moment he will rip his head of his body
nandu:-fall on her knees and started to sniff and shout i lost him and cried badly shit i lost hi and with this she fainted and fall in aryan's arm seeing this vulnerable situation aryan left baffled he said nandu before he saw soha and khurana brother turn up to not utter and he picked her in arms and soha clicked pics and forward to manik who was sitting with smirk cause he know its coming and fab 4 seen that laugh cause step -compelete all said and waited to turn up with nandu all appreciated him what a acting but he was eagerly waiting for him


on the other hand

nandu :-in care section on bes still closed eyes and aryan japping his sorry
aryan;-sorry nandu iam sorry main khushi khushi chahta hun tm manik ki ho cause tm use deserve krti ho but I'm stuck mjhe tmen ussey alag ktna parega iam sorry iam sorry mjj jesa badnasseb lover koi nae hoga tmen us din dhaka mainey diya pr wahan bachane wale log mene behje mainey dhaka majburi main diya yr im stuck what do i do what do i do shit main duniya ka bura inssaaan hun mere sibblings ki wajha se u r hurt beyond repair agar tmen alag na kiya to itne saal baad apne bahiyon aur behn se paya pyaar kho dunga kya karun ghum phir ke main bhi to khurana hun

hearing this the fake unconscious nandu left baffled coz she understood who the hell is behind this and she faked to get conscious and this was enough for aryan to look with a smirk and he wiped his tears and placed fake smirk and said
aryan:-nandu dekha i told u he is not in love with you he loves himself and lkve that sizzling his bedmate aoha Khurana grow up and come back to me
nandu:-where is manik tell me i need to explain i don't want to be left again
aryan :-he wont listen to you inside he was shouting go tell him plz go
nandu:-no i will and she faked to run like a miniac


to be continued...
stay connected for plan step 2
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lots of love

mini mouse
Edited by aishamemon1994 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57

awesome update...

loved it so much...

loving the way they are making a fool out of the khuranas...

nandu and her acting is so cute...waiting to see their surprised faces...

can't wait to see what happens next...

keep up the good work and continue soon...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome update finally nandu KO pata chal gaya about khurana siblings.
Update soon the next part waiting for their second step
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Posted: 9 years ago
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note:-guyz i have changed a little theme for next from here to make this story twist full anf intense full so might be im on your expections from here today it might be turn up update shayad pllra bahri hojae kiss passe ka dekho guyz praying it would be upto I want so guyz her I am again here I go

chapter10(a)

precap:-step:-1

step--'2

cabir:- signaled everyone to look @the actress of the day heroen of the day all were appreciating her that

cabir:-wah re meri shweta kiya acting kamal kr diya tune to sabh actress ko peeche chor dya wah kham kha main navya ko madhubala bolta hun kissi kam ki nae acting iske bass ki nae all brusted in laughter while one person was glaring him to rip his head that was none other than navya and here madhubala mode start

navya:- cabirrr she was hell angry and said tmne abhi hmmen sirf mata rani ko dekha hai ab tm devi maa dekho ge hearing this cabir ran to save his life while navya thrown what ever comes in her hand and cabir finding opportunity hide behind nandu and said

cabir:- meri madhu shadhi se pehle q widwa hone pe tuli hai rukh j mere devi maa ka roop acha nae again Hi face welcomed a pillow
while nandu held his ear and said haw cabir while navya was pouting and her mouth turned in "o"

nandu:- cabir shooo ur thought if dieing coz and sh signaled everyone to take opportunity and they all started and cabir was rolling on floor laughing like hell coz all were tickling him and this turn up as cabir dragged navya to save him and this made everyone coz in this navya land on cabir and both were left for a walk in their "lala land". and everyone left them and stand smirking while everyone together shouted cockroach hearing this navya get scared and shouted hilariously in the ear of cabir which broke their trance and navya screamed and by which all who were suppressing their laugh started to laugh out loud and situation was like cabir was sitting and navya was in his lap while shouting ahe clinged him more and both stood up and were looking everywhere except towards their frnds and were turned all red cavya was blushing badly and than reality stuck to manik and he said

manik:- guyz guyz we have to be back to plan guyz we have to teach these khurana's a big lesson
with this he disscused their plan of closeness and difference caused b/w fab 5 & nandu all were happy but who knows this happiness was momentry cause who knows where they will gonna land up cause there was a person who was keeping eyes on them through

person sitting in front of camera:- you guyz bloody cheapoes bloody tm log ab nae bacho ge ab btati hun kya cheez hun main u messed up with me u bitch

2nd person:- soha watch your words

soha:- oh shut up u love sick puppy Aryan!!!

Aryan:- soha iam ur brother stop this crap I have done cause u signaled

flashback:- when nandu fallen on her knees and Aryan was coming soha gave him a camera to put it on nandu to keep an eye

Aryan put it on her bag it was too small to be seen
ends

soha:- see this bitch is too intelligent

Aryan:- asking u too watch ur words except u won't be able to be with manik he threat her soha stepped back

soha:- OK calm down I won't say anything to miss murthy OK

Aryan:- that's better. now what we do they are playing at our back

soha:-now see what can I do just do as I say

to be continued


next part thori der baad OK

lots of love mini mouse
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Posted: 9 years ago
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so part (b) OK

chapter:-10(b)

precap:- revealed truth of g.ones

soha:- so today they are @step--'2 I will show them now what I am Aryan bring me a new sim please

Aryan:- for what soha

soha:- with smirk first buy it up will tell you till than I have to make some calls OK

with this Aryan left and soha made calls and said

soha:- nandani murthy time to payback for snatching manik and laughed evily she called her two evil twins& both entered soha narrated everything and both brothers eyes were spitting fire like

aryaman:- sweetie how can u stand against of us yaar we r not that bad and neither we want to we will give u same fun which manik gives you

maddy:- yeah cutie pie how can she we have to show her one of us or none of all

soha:- bro's you want nandu I want manik & I have a plan soha smirked

seeing her evil smirk both gave a evil smirk soha narrated her awll plan and hearing both brothers exclaimed

aryaman:- now where u will go sweetie

maddy:- yup bro now she will be ours she was not hook but now by crook

both laughed evily and left and here Aryan csme back seeing them laughing poor soul got a hint but chucked and gave a sim to soha and left now soha messaged her brothers plan is on doing 1st step be ready

nandu got a call and left saying guyz I will catch up u later k manik signaled no but she plead him through eyes she was leaving and in parking area she was moving but some one pulled her with a jerk to a side but she knows who was it cause she recognized. the touch & yes there he was the manik malhotra without watching she said

nandu:- manik always u have to do this can't u ask simply

manik:- without saying anything just slammed her lips and licked chewed and soothed her lips while kissing and nandu was also moaning in his mouth and for getting breathless he left her lips before he can go for one more round nandu put her hand on her lips nodded no and manik made a sweetest pout ever and nandu melted she gave her a sweat peck on his lips and and before he register she moved back and were turned red before he can do anything her work came again and she asked

nandu:- I need to go its urgent

manik:- nandu yr bd main chali Jana na don't spoil the moment

nandu:- Mani we have many moments more saying this she shushed and tried to left and succeed she showed him tongue and left waving bye and said
nandu:- manik I will make it up

but who knows what destiny planed cause she was unknown what was coming she was not aware of the storm on the way where she will only miss these some moments

nandu:- reached at some isolated place she said :- some one's there

and she heard a sound which was definatly familiar to her

person:-yes nandu

nandu:- you were at the call ???

person :- yup do u realy think anyone will stand against khurana's

nandu:- soha come out of ur dream world I am standing kya bigar liya tmne han

soha:- nandu nandu nandu shit you r so naive you didn't told ur frnds u r coming even kissing manik but didn't told him where u r coming

hearing this nandu was burning with anger but she calmed herself I have told them

soha:- nandu baby don't lie cause I was keeping eye on you I know u r planning to trap us and now u have fallen. hahaha she laughed evily

nandu tried to call but what she noticed left her horrified cause no signals reality hit her isolated place she tried to escape but how come cause both brothers were standing behind her both hold her hands tightly

flashback about nandu's call

person:- hello is there is nandu

nandu:- yeah speaking

person :- I wanna tell I about khurana next step I heard them talking they had planned very evil plz can u meet me

nandu:- realy u can come here


person:- no no I won't cause I can't stand against them meet me @a place I'm telling you

nandu:- OK I will

ends
she shouted very loudly :- mannniiikkk

manik:- sitting with fab5 was not feeling good vibes just freaked like he heard her scream


to be continued...


plz hit like and cmnt


lots of love

mini mouse

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